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Reviews for Coming Clean

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on August 26, 2005
    ^___^ Yeah! Kurama's going to live again!
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  • From ANON - Cherokee on August 26, 2005
    Okay, I've read this story from the beginning (actually had to stop on chap. 31 at 4 am last nite to get some sleep so I could go to work) and now that I'm able to get back to it and what do I find: a cliff hanger from HE**. You'd best be finishing this soon!

    BTW I haven't seen any really bad instances of the charas being OOC. Keep up the good work and FINISH THIS SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on August 23, 2005
    man.. another cliffie! lol. just like you said. but another really well written one. ^^ and as always, well worth the wait.

    Ra
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 22, 2005
    Can I say Holy Shit in a review? Does it matter, because HOLY SHIT, I read your 2 chapters at lunch today and I'm still rubbing my chest every few minutes going "eeyyaaahhhh" and thinking about those needles.

    ***YOU ARE NOW THE QUEEN OF FOX TORTURE*** and I love you for it.

    See, now your torture chapter makes me feel not so confident about mine. (That means that your stuff is so well thought out and so well written that it made me cringe several times - especially at the very end where he ruptures his spleen - and it pushes me to be more creative in my own fox torture.)

    Where did you come up with this stuff? Remind me to not make you mad.

    On a personal note - where can I find Kurama and Hiei's realtor? She seems very helpful.

    And, of course, you're killing me with the cliffhanger, does Hiei get there in time? What does he do? It's always his reaction that gets me.

    Again and again you have proved why I find your story to be my favourite among the thousands of Kurama-Hiei stories out there. You haven't experienced the Kurama and Hiei pairing until you've read Coming Clean.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on August 22, 2005
    Okay, we've stepped beyond the realm of simple "fox toruture" here...gods, I can barely type, my hands are shaking...and that's with getting up several times during this chapter just to get away from it....*shudder*....Damn....and I keep reading....I mean, even though I know you don't kill Kurama (because you've written a follow up story), still...I wanna cry and beat the bloody hell out of Intaro....and then some...return his treatment, with bonus material just for the hell of it...and then, deny him death, allow him to partially heal and repeat the damn thing over again....gods, I feel vicious. I'm gonna go read something happy and stupid just so I'm not morbid at work all day, though that is a possiblity....*shudder*
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  • From ANON - Sil on August 22, 2005
    You sure are evil!And you love it!I could never do all the things you do to hiei and kurama!!But, well, i guess someone has to write great stories about those two! You write so well, that i canīt even hate you for making them suffer taht much!Well, all i have left to do now is wait until you update, i just hope itīll be soon!And i really hope hieiīll have kurama back with him alive!, to take good care of him.
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  • From ANON - Chie on August 22, 2005
    Please please soon I need to know Please . Ok well keep it up great style of writting love it.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on August 21, 2005
    Evil author! Kurama torture and a cliffy. Creapy but good chapter. That update better be soon with the guys to the rescue.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on August 21, 2005
    Oh how could you,ending that chapter with what looks like Kurama's death(though we know better)yet still.I sit here holding my middle with a phantom pain just reading this chapter and poor Hiei.If he dosen't get the biggest revenge on Kawema and the bady than your just not right I know it has to be Hiei that Kurama hears in his head and I hope Hiei can hear him so he gets there faster.On a thought it might be cool to have Kewa(the calm mild one)find out about the godling knowing this whole time and not helping and go nuts on him.Having Hiei find out after everything is said and done.
    Can't wait to see what you have cooked up,please let it be good for Kurama,he been through enough....no? Anyway as always nicely written and look forward to the update
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  • From ANON - yuyugirl4ever(Not signed in again) on August 21, 2005
    YOU JUST HAD TO GO AND DO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU KILLED KURAMA. I am so crying now! I shuddered with every word I read and I swear a tear fell for each one too! I thought I was pretty good a cliff hangers, but damn girl you take the cake! Please hurry and update soon! I got to know what happens next!! Especially when the team finds out Koenma knew where Kurama was from practiaclly the begining. It's not going to be pretty! I hope he gets his godling butt kicked! I also hope Hiei doesn't go completely insane with this. Nothing, but his fox would be able to bring him back! You love fox torture way to much! I must say though, it was very graphic, like I was watching all of it happen.!!!! Again please hurry and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Mz.Bitz. on August 21, 2005
    OW! A tail. I flinched too when I read it, gave me shivers. Wow. I gotta say this was an intense chapter for me. Kurama torture is just so... realistic. HAHA. I do hope Hiei saves him soon. Oh man, I'm still thinking about how his tail was ripped off. Looking forward to your update!
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  • From ryukotsusei on August 21, 2005
    Holy crap, I hope Hiei and the others get there in time. *Fidgets and falls off of my seat* Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on August 21, 2005
    Love it really much! thanks for telling me that there is a new chapter out!
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  • From ANON - yuyugirl4ever(Not signed in) on August 21, 2005
    OMG!!!!!! That was so sad. I cringed just reading it! I know what the item was or I think I do. It was one of the fox's beautiful tails. I think i'm actually going to cry. You kind of left it on a cliff hanger, but I can't complain. Because you have read my cliff hangers. LOL. I can't wait for the update and the upcoming battle. Now the question is 'Who is going to die', because someone has too! I still love your story and I'm a faithful reader, you will never lose me. I hope you continue to write more stories that follow this arc. PS. I can't hardly wait for the next one!.*grins* ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shuichi on August 21, 2005
    You amaze me I thought this was over with slightly Of course, i also wondered what ever happened to that one dude! Now I know I hope you post the fic soon I lurve it!
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