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Reviews for Coming Clean

By : mhmartini
  • From WindCharmer on July 04, 2005
    YAY! Hiei has his vision back! That was such a sweet, lovely chapter. It was definitely worth the wait. I just love how well you portray the emotions, and the relationship itself. Can't wait for the next update. =]
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  • From ANON - Kira on June 28, 2005
    I love your story!! This is one of the most realistic or true to character fics I have read. I love the interaction between Hiei and Karama and it is fun to watch thier relationship grow. I think that Shiori is a bit to overbearing in this story but it seems to work for all intents and pruposes. I am greatly anticipating the completion of this story. Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Takaneyo on June 22, 2005
    I love your story. wish I could write fan fics as good as you do. Good luck on up coming chapters!
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  • From ANON - Vegetakid1989 on June 16, 2005
    This made me cry!!! I love it. I think that it's one of the best stories that i have ever read. you should really consider writing a novel or something. i would definetly read it. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sessygirl1250 on June 16, 2005
    I have read many fanfics. Most have made me just wanna slap the authors, but this one is different. this one is more then just good, it's beautiful. the emotions that are in this story have touched my heart and helped me to view the world at a different angle. it takes a really sensitive and caring person to write this indepth of work. please update soon and keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Dark Delta on May 23, 2005
    wow another great chapter Oh man Hiei Poor Hiei and Kurama too. Well its all right if you take time to post up Chapter just remember don't take to long all right well keep it up. One hell of a job you do
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Mz.Bitz. on May 22, 2005
    GASP OMGOSH! Dun dun dunnnn. Oh poor Hiei! Poor Kurama! Update soon! =]
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on May 22, 2005
    Umm... you posted the 14th chapter of Bugs instead of Coming Clean's 30th chapter.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on May 22, 2005
    OMG you made me cry. Poor little Hiei. Please update soon. I need a reconciliation cry now.
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  • From ANON - me on May 22, 2005
    THAT WAS SO EFFIN' CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Botan on May 22, 2005
    yeah updationness. You've gotta update soon. I wanna find out what happens! And don't worry about spell check or grammer. Hell I know that I ignore my spell checker half the time. Anyway I gotta go I'm starting to get hungry. Later. Botan
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  • From ANON - hColleen on May 22, 2005
    I hate it when I know I have something gramatically correct and the MSWord still underlines it in green (as a gramatical mistake)...or when I have mistakes and it doesn't underline them...I also hate tot he...I also tend to think that "each other" should be one word every time I type it...or I'll type "i t" instead of "it" Anyways...

    Poor poor Hiei....he wants so much to have things work out, as does Kurama, but they both haven't learned the fine are of communication...One could have hoped that Kurama would have remembered the fear he'd had to work Hiei through before he told him to "just go"....but, then, I suppose "Coming Clean" is about learning to communicate....

    I look forward to your next update, no matter how long it takes...though, I think I'll only be reviewing the chapters on one site ;)
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  • From ANON - Mea on May 21, 2005
    When I put that last review, I didn't mean to rush you. I just meant that it is going to be hard to wait for the next chapter. Please don't rush yourself, but try to get the next chapter up as fast as you can. Thank You
    Sincerely Mea, again
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  • From ANON - Mea on May 21, 2005
    Why'd you leave it there! I can't beleive you did that! Now I have to wait a long time to see what happens! AHHHHHHHH! Okay, that's out of my system. Please try to update fast. Please!
    Sincerely Mea ^_^
    PS- All my pateints is going into waiting for this next chapter.
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  • From ryukotsusei on May 21, 2005
    awesome chapter, can't wait to see how they work things out. Update soon please.
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