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Reviews for Aftermath

By : hColleen
  • From ANON - pureevil230 on May 19, 2006
    yummy.
    glad kuwabara and keiko have warmed up.
    lol i love ur insanity write more.

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From on November 21, 2005
    nice stories. i read both this one and Truth, Dice, or Dare in two days, and they were both very good. i really loved the way you ended this story, too! that was so awesome! you did a wonderful job at making them so greta together. very few stories manage to do that. so, great job! i enjoyed it!!
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) on June 09, 2005
    The one criticism I would have is that it seems that Kurama would have bitten down on Hiei's cock if he came while sucking him off.
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  • From ANON - Anasazi Darkmoon on June 08, 2005
    Well, I finally got off my lazy ass and read this, and I have to say wow! Just...wow! This was really something! Is Youko actually going to participate in some of the activities, or is he just going to remain Shuichi, or does it even matter? *shrugs* Everyone's reactions were great, especially Drunk Atsuko's! Anyway, this is really good, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - C on May 19, 2005
    Yes, I definately enjoyed this, thank you very much! I really like the way you decided to end this! Insane? It's the only way to go in my opinion ;)
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on May 18, 2005
    No, I don't want it to end. Ad infinitum sounds good to me. Another great chapter. I wish all mom's could be that understanding. I know my fondest wish for my kids is their health and happiness always.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on May 18, 2005
    great story i liked the lemon alot and i cna't wait to read your next story.
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on May 18, 2005
    i think you did wonderful qith this chapter! i'll be waiting for an update =3
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  • From ANON - sisko66002(not signed in) on May 18, 2005
    i hope Hiei gets more fun next chapter
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on May 18, 2005
    Hot, hot, hot. I love the fact that kitsune are totally oversexed and horny all the time. Kurama squirming in his chair, lol. That was so funny. And there is nothing hotter than being thrown up against a wall only to be devoured by Kurama or Yusuke. Another wonderful chapter. Oh, the broadway show I saw was "Dirty Rotten Scoundrals" I laughed my butt off. CYA
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on May 17, 2005
    I loved chapters 5 and 6. I thought I had reviewed 5 but I see that I didn't, sorry. Anyway. Hiei is so sweet and cute. I love the way he shows his love through his actions. The way he washes them all off after sex is a really sweet touch. I like the way you handled the mother's. Yusuke's mom's reaction was perfect. Of course she would accept Yusuke being with a guy. In the series, although it may have been cut from the Cartoon Network airing, she's friends with, I think, crossdressers or transvestites. So I would think that she would be open to almost anything. I loved the insight and care and thoughtfulness from Hiei and Kurama regarding Yusuke's feelings. You map everything out so well. It all makes so much sense. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - C on May 17, 2005
    I really like the way this has gone. It is too bad that it has to end, but then, as they say "All good things must come to an end." Thank you for this!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on May 15, 2005
    great chapter i loved kurama moms question and how she made yusuke nervious and i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on May 15, 2005
    hehe, i think that your writing gets even better everytime you write another chapter! i really enjoyed this one and can't wait for another update!
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  • From mhmartini on May 14, 2005
    Group bath, sounds fun. I think they need to all move in together in a house with a bigger tub, though. I really like the way you painted Shiori's reaction and the arrangement they have worked out. It sounds unusually accomodating on Hiei's behalf, but throughout this story and Truth, Dice, or Dare you depicted Hiei as having a very warm, gentle side hidden behind the Wall of Hn. So in this story, it fits him well.

    I vote that we get to read the reactions. Unless you already have Atsuko's reaction worked out, I imagine that would be difficult to write. But I would love to read it, and Shiori's reaction. Whichkever you decide to do, I look forward to your next update.
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