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Reviews for Arranged Love

By : Taiho

From DarkDragonDreamer on May 29, 2011
Great story!!!
Saddend that you left it where you did...
Would have loved to read more!!!!
It just got really intersting!!!!
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From ANON - Chocolate Milk on July 18, 2007
… And as the one year mark draws ever closer with each passing second, a young girl’s hope slowly diminishes for Hiei and Kuwabara fanciers everywhere… But, it should be noted, this particular girl is incredibly prone to overly melodramatic outbursts, and should be vehemently ignored, if at all possible.

Oh, there the girl is now! Everybody, hide yourselves! Maybe we can-

“Oh, hello.”

Damn! We’re too late. Well, I guess we are going to have to submit ourselves to yet another longwinded speech about the indignities of-

“Oh, no, I’m over that.”

… Seriously?

“Um, yeah, totally.”

Oh… That’s great!

“Yeah, I know… I don‘t do the whole ‘argumentative, belligerent, confrontational, dramatic’ thing, anymore… I’m down to calmly begging! Although, my ability to do so is greatly impeded when I can only type… It sort of loses its effect…”

… Damnit. You know, this makes for a very strange review, right?

“Yes, yes, I can see how this could be construed as somewhat strange… But, I couldn’t think of any other way to do this!”

Freak.

“Whatever, My Ability to Write. And- Hey! What is with that first line?! You make me sound like I’m trying to put the writer on a guilt-trip!”

But, you are, aren’t you? That seems to be the way you get everything you want.

“Hey! Guilt-tripping is perfectly fair play! And anyway, no, I am not trying to use guilt to make the, obviously very busy, writer continue. I am ‘not’ that callous. Now quit being a professional Jerk-face and get to the point of this infernal thing!”

Very well, you impetuous idiot… Alright, this girl likes this story, and, consequently, wishes for it to continue, and hopefully, finish. She understands that it will take a while, but she is willing to wait months, which she has already proven, for more of it, no matter how small the amount. She understands that you, the writer, are busy with life, and have no obligation to do a damn thing she asks of you… But, she would like it, as a lover of HieiKuwa, and even more so as a lover of just Kazuma Kuwabara, if you would send her more of this story. Again, no matter how small the amount. It doesn’t have to be an entire chapter. A few paragraphs would appease her.

“Yeah, I won’t get greedy! Or start thinking you’re required to do anything. I know you’ve got your own life to live. Besides, I can be very patient for the things I want…”

Not from what I’ve seen.

“Shut up, MAW. This is different.”

Heh. Oh, yes. This girl realizes that she needs to acquire a life. But, she thinks you should know, that is very hard to do when you are home-schooled and live in the middle of nowhere with no means of transportation besides your-

“Hey! Don’t give information like that out to a stranger! Even if it is an admittedly talented writer of a stranger…”

Anyway, this is getting very, very long. The poor writer probably doesn’t even have time to read it… That is, if the writer ever comes back to read it at all.

“Hey! Don’t say that! It makes it hard to stay optimistic. I need my optimism, I’d die without it!”

Drama-Queen. Ugh, let’s end this, already!

“Oh, fine. Please, cher auteur, listen to my plea. I am not exaggerating when I say it would make my life right now. I have nothing better to do than serf around the web, doing little more than search for Kuwabara stories, and I think that I‘ve found them all. Yes, my life is that boring and, yes, I love Kuwabara that much… Please, plea-”

Do you really have to be on your knees like that?

“I thought it added to the whole ‘begging’ atmosphere. Why?”

No reason… Alright, that’s it, this is way too long, and it proves that you have way too much time on your hands. I’m ending it.

“Wait! I wasn’t done- Oh, you’re right. I’ll stop. Au revoir, cher auteur!”

Same here… Oh, and have a pleasant day, too.
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From ANON - silver dragon on May 28, 2007
PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!! It is a really good story.
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From ANON - Hara-Kiri on January 06, 2007
Wow! I loved this! Seriously, there aren't enough Hiei/Kuwabara fics out there! Please keep writing this! I loved it!
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From ANON - cillaxox (not logged in) on November 25, 2006
I was just talking to a friend of mine about how much I enjoyed this story. While I was on the phone with her, I checked to see if you had updated and imagine my shock/joy/relief that you had. I wish I had checked sooner. That was a good chapter. I like the fight between Kuwabara and Hiei, so believable. I could picture everything that happened. I hope you update soon, but if you can't that's okay too. Just let me know when you are able too, you know where to find me.
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From ANON - SinkingIntoDarkness *aka KuwaL* on November 16, 2006
Yah!!! YOu finally updated this ^^. I just love this story ^^. I've been wondering...is any of the rest of the group going to enter in someway or another? You already had Koenma and Ayamne, I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve ^^. And I understand you got a life ^^. Trust me...I still need to work on my own stories ^^; *shutters at the reviewers/readers ready to kill her for Binding Souls and And the Father Is... * Well anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more of this awesome story and take your time, but not toooo long ^_~.
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From ANON - Love to be Anon on November 13, 2006
It's okay to make us wait because your stories are amazing, no doubt about it. I LOVE all your other Kuwa stories, so I only expect great things from this new (well not really) story...no pressure though! However, if you do keep us waiting again ::shakes fist:: expect something bad...no, I don't have the heart. Just update soon!
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From ANON - pumking on November 13, 2006
yay! i love so much! plz, give me more! MORE!...oh sorry, peeps. Give US more! MORE!....US!
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From ANON - Evol on November 13, 2006
oh, this will not go well. but hopefully in that all so funny way. question, did kuwa-chan and yusuke know eachother when they were younger in this?
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From ANON - Forbidden Secrets on November 12, 2006
*glomps you*

I simply LOVE this story. Its so hard to find HxKuwa out there and this is positively delicious. The plot if flowing well and the characters aren’t horrendously out of character.

I can’t wait until you next update. [Which… might be awhile but I can wait XD]

-Eternally
Forbidden Secrets

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From ANON - Leigh on November 12, 2006
My god...I swear this is my third attemt at reviewing. If the other two show up, I'm sorry. And I'll feel pretty stupid because I'm re-writing this word for word by memory. Becuase I'm lazy. And I have a pretty good memory.

You...you actually updated? I didn't really expect you to do it, but I figured it couldn't hurt to ask! I'm really glad that you did though (and that I checked up on this story again, I might have missed the update). Like I said it's my favorite Kuwa (and Hiei) centric fic. And once again, exellent characterization and writing. Maybe this time we won't have to wait a year? (It can't hurt to ask, right? ^_^) Well, I hope things settle down for you in real life, and you don't have to apologize for not responding to reviews. We're all just glad to have this story to read!

Hopefully this time it will work. Third times the charm, right?

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From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on November 12, 2006
ooooh....interesting. more plz!
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From ANON - eve4mem on November 11, 2006
Holly Smokes Batman it's an update! I thought this fic was a gonner for sure but I'm glad it's not. Wonderful update and even more mystery. I can't wait for more interection between Hiei and Kuwabara. Also can't wait to see what makes Kuwbara special.
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From ANON - Shadowwolf on November 11, 2006
Respond or don't... your storyline and it is a very, very, very good story is reply enough. I look forward to continuing chapters as they are added.
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From ANON - comicfancat on November 11, 2006
Respose to reviews although nice isn't always necessary.I'd rather see an update to the story first anyway.Which I'm glad to see,I thought you forgot about this or gave up on it.I happy to see that isn't the case though.I can't wait to see what Kewa thinks about all this after he calms down some and wonder what Hiei's boss has up her sleeve.Though the world may get in the way I hope you update this soon.
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