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Reviews for Breaking In The Team

By : ss_dragon_lady
  • From ANON - C on May 17, 2005
    I like this story, but then, I have yet to read one of your stories that I don't like. I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From Katzz on May 17, 2005
    hehe I couldn't stop thinking of this story at work XD

    I realized something, both Keiko and Botan are in, what about Shizuru? Since the Dark Tournament, she's as involved as Keiko. Are you following the show or the manga? In the anime, Atsuko doesn't know jack about the Spirit World but in the manga she goes to the Dark Tournament with Botan, Kieko & Shixuru. She actually seemed to enjoy watching the fights.

    You're adding incest, oaky I have to say this, Yukina/Hiei is the most common incest pairing there is. If you like a challenge then a adding Shizuru to the mix would be bold. There is a plausible scenario for either Yusuke or Kuwabra to end up in an incestous encounter. Both Shizuru and Atsuko drink and so do Kazuma and Yusuke. One possible scene is that they get drunk and end up together with family.

    That scenario isn't original, I got it froma current manga I'm reading =Battle Vixens. The main girl, Hakufu has a cousin , Shyuyu has found himsefl waking up after a night of drinking to find his aunt, Hakufu's mom, Goei, is nekad and sleeping next to him. Neihter Goei or Shyuyu can remember if they had slept together but twice they wake up naked together after a night of party.

    That scenario is ripe of potentials...... ack it's given me ideas
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on May 17, 2005
    great chapter i hope they take another lover maybe yusuke. he might be a virgin but we all know thats he's a hetai and mostly likely he can give kurama and hiei a run for there money in sex and such.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on May 17, 2005
    hehe I agree that Kuwabara would be able to handle the rough stuff. Hiei mentioned about Kuwa's regenative aiblity aka healing powers. That would not only help him with the tough stuff but give him endurnce as well. Hehe I would love to see Hiei & Kurama's looks when they realize that Kuwabra is not innocent in the sex dept.

    I mentioned it before but I'll say it again. Kuwabara's the leaders of astreet gang, I highly doubt he's virginal. Helk, not only is sex a fact amoung gangs, it's a tool. Sex is used for initiations and for making/sealing deals with others. Unlike the others, Kuwabra most likely see their actions as that they are breaking in the team. XD
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  • From ANON - citizencobalt on May 12, 2005
    Yay! Yuusuke next! Can Hiei be bottom? Could Yuusuke be aggressive? The prey needs to turn the tables at least once. Great fic, keep going, please.
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  • From ANON - blu_dragon on May 11, 2005
    i think u should cont w/ the story. its really good. pls update soon. as for the nxt teammate u can decide that. lol.
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  • From ANON - dragon on May 11, 2005
    Off to a good start. Definately "do" all of the team!
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  • From ANON - Koorime1905 on May 11, 2005
    tee-hee,I don't belive it you wrote three some????Did I dreaming,hit me!!!.To say the truth,i know that you will write a three some when I have read your fic for th fiest time but I just guess it will be Yusuke,Kurama,Hiei or Youko,Kurama,Hiei,I never think about Koenma.you make me nearly frozen,you know ^_^.Anyway,please update soon,i'm so impatient to see what heppen next.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on May 10, 2005
    Good start. Definately 'do' everyone.
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  • From ANON - v on May 10, 2005
    keep going, i think they should go for either yusuke or kuwabara next .
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  • From kogaluver on May 10, 2005
    I think that this is totally cool. Please continue with more pairings. I like that Hiei and Kurama are mates and had been together before Kurama was killed. That's a nice twist. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Katzztar again on May 10, 2005
    Eppp I wasn't finnifhed yet!

    The reason I fantize Kuwabara not being a virgin is that he is a gang leader. There are some sites that go further and say he's a gang lord. That would mean thta his gang has more than Okubo, Kirishima & Sawamura in it. Sex is a reatily of gang life so that's why I thinks there's a good chance Kuwa's not a virgin ;)
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on May 10, 2005
    Don't stop! Let them go for the others, ALL of the team!That means not only Yusuke, but Botan and Kuwabara too.
    It would be funny for them to find that Kuwabra isn't a virgin or inexperienced while Yusuke is a virgin.

    Everyone always makes Kuwabara out to be clueless about sex.

    Many igore that for all the gropingof Keiko that Yusuke does - that is all he does.
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