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Reviews for ~Once Burned~

By : Metranome
  • From flamekaat on June 24, 2011
    Oh wow the awesomeness of wowness of yummy! Thanks for making my morning!
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  • From Unolai on October 11, 2009
    *jumps up and applaudes* Bravo! Finally an author who thinks deeper on Kurama and Hiei's complicated personality's and writes a great story about it to boot. I absolutely love it. =D
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  • From lildemonicfoofoo on July 05, 2008
    yes yes as usual i am late to the party. Oh the hay well, *hand you a gift to reflect your greatness* I LOVED THIS STORY. *does happy dance* my dear do my eyes deceive is that a sequel i spy. it is *HUG*
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  • From thothmoon on April 02, 2008
    Review, Ch. 4-6

    Heh, Anons. *I* appreciated your satire chapter ^_^

    In regard to the chapters directly preceding and following, I like how it is realistic (or as much so as one will get with a storyline centering around a pair of demons). Hiei's experiment with Yusuke's hilarious; something that I could absolutely imagine him doing in such a scenario. Shall we call that circumstantial IC? I like the term. I think we shall. (Patent pending.)
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  • From RoseThorne on March 31, 2008
    Wow. I can't really think of much else to say. I stopped reading new YYH fanfiction a long time ago because I was really tired of seeing OOC stuff (though I am certainly guilty of writing OOC). This was great! I loved how it bordered on metafiction at times. Now I'm off to read the sequel that I've heard exists.
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  • From thothmoon on March 31, 2008
    *gasp* I reviewed here once! Ha-ha: Blue was recommending your new story, so I backtracked to this one, and what do you know, I remembered it. Well, part at least, because I'm fairly sure I never finished it. So now I'm re-reading/catching up so I won't be so late for the fact with the sequel. I'd like to think that my tastes have matured along with myself--it's been two-three years since that review that I left--and saying that I think I appreciate how IC you have them at this point (I've read 1-3 at the moment) all the more. That, and just the things you have here and there: Hiei's unattractiveness by demon standards; Kurama's choice of totally shall we say "owning" him while they sparred; the kiss (Kurama's always struck me as a kiss-on-the-forehead type); and the conversation between Hiei and Yusuke--it's all excellent. Well then, I'll conclude this review (you're getting a lengthy one here!), and shall leave another one soon after I've read more. When I'm done here, expect to hear from me on your new story as well ^_^
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  • From 66Hiei08 on March 21, 2008
    This was pretty good. But Chapter 10 got cut off. Will be watching to see when it gets fixed. :o)
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  • From kle10 on January 06, 2008
    A fitting 'ending' (as we all know it's only the beginning, ne~?).

    Simply beautiful.

    Definitely one of my favorite YYH stories of all time. :3

    ...you ever tried cosplaying Kurama, either? Both Hiei and Kurama's eyelashes are the same thickness, if you look closely at how they're drawn in the anime. Gah! x.x Cosmetics are confusing no matter the gender. Too many confusing bottles and oils and applications and techniques and on and on and on...

    At any rate~!

    Thank you very much for writing this. It made me realize a few things...~~

    Keep it up, ne! Ganbatte! Good luck~!

    -Kita ;3

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  • From kle10 on January 05, 2008
    Simply lovely~

    You're keeping Hiei's bluntness in the story very well, without making him think his actions over too much, and thus give him the chance to worry about them too much, and therefore over-exaggerate, as many other fics tend to do. :3

    Hmmmm, this fic is closer to me than I'm saying, too...

    Saa~

    -Kita :3
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  • From kle10 on January 05, 2008
    x3 Lovely, just lovely.

    Oh~ And Hiei-kun smiles in the series after they've rescued Yukina and she goes running down to tend to Kuwabara and Yuusuke's injuries. Kurama and Hiei remain in the glass box that Tarukane was using to observe the (staged, ne?) fight between the Toguro brothers and Kuwabara and Yuusuke. Hiei smiles down to Yukina as she rushes to Kuwabara's side in the arena below, but since Kurama is behind him and Hiei's looking out the glass AND no one's looking up at him, at this point, only we fans of the series get to see his little smile.

    ...and yes, I'm a YYH geek. At aaaaaaaany rate, you did a wonderful job on the cute scenes. With the affection and all, ne? Still keeping this fic lovingly in-character~

    I look forward to the next chapter~~

    -Kita ;3
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  • From kle10 on January 05, 2008
    xDDDD Ahahaha. Very nice~ Seriously~~

    Good HieixYuusuke in there without any actual HieixYuusuke... (although there was certainly some YuusukexHiei, even if the brunet denies it x3! ).

    Wheeeheehee~~ And we won't comment on how socially backwards Hiei is when concerning relationships and such, if no one's ever loved him before, because he just kissed Yuusuke with the intent to compare and then buuuuuuuurned Yuusuke because the former tantei isn't as good a kisser as everyone's favorite kitsune~ :3

    Still a good story so far(even including the absolutely horrifyingly OOC/ridiculously hilarious 'Omake' chapter five)~!

    -Kita :3
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  • From kle10 on January 05, 2008
    :: Face frozen in a sort of half-horrified, half-terribly-amused open-mouthed 'smile'. ::

    ....gah.

    :: The two thoughts circling in head: That was great/That was painful. ::

    xD!

    Saaa.... :: Eyetwitch. :: x.x~~

    DIE, OOC-ness!!! xDDDD

    -Kita :3
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  • From kle10 on January 05, 2008
    In-character-ness~~~ x3 Thanks for this fic~!

    's teh awesomeness. You're keeping everyone rather as themselves. :3

    I'm only on chapter two, and this fic is already on my recommended reading list. xD! Heh~ Off I go to read more of the lovely in-character creation you have given us unworthy readers (and procrastinating authors! x.x;; )~

    -Kita :3
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  • From ANON - Yuu Akiya on November 26, 2006
    Awesome! You're simply amazing! You're one of the few author/authoress out here who can actually write! This meaning you know how to use correct English grammar! You won't believe how hard it's to just find a Kurama and Hiei fanfic that is... just perfect, like yours! People these days simply have the minds of some ten year old brat, and when they are being pointed out, they just get ugly about it. Roll eyes. Please, I'm begging you: write more Kurama and Hiei fanfics! Or Naruto/ Sasuke. Or whatever yaoi couples you want. Heck, I don't really care what you write as long as you write something!
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  • From ANON - Lex on October 31, 2006
    Kei, that fact that you write KuramaxHiei...actually any YYH yaoi...makes me want to make sweet, sweet love to you! I love you so damn much. You rock my heart and you're gonna hear about it in my next email! :p
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