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Reviews for ~Once Burned~

By : Metranome
  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 19, 2005
    Okay, I just stumbled upon this fic at random and I'm currently only through the first three chapters, but I just have to say something: you rock!!! ^^ No, really, I absolutely adore this: your summery was very clever (and true, lol; good job!), and I'm still laughing over your first three "paragraphs" (a.k.a. two paragraphs and a sentance). I look forward to reading more and finding out what happens next........as a matter of fact, I'm going to go do that now! ^___~ Oh, and btw... “Honestly, ningens and their unnecessary emotional complexities!” That's a classic!!! *still laughing her ass off* Later!
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  • From ANON - Vile Deadboss on July 17, 2005
    That was the Best~!
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  • From ANON - Ripe wickeD plUm (not logged in) on July 16, 2005
    Nice. Very nice. =]
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  • From ANON - Mora on July 15, 2005
    That I will have to say is the best YuYu fic I have ever read. You seem to know the characters very well and portrayed them wounderfully. Great job and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - kazhdu on July 15, 2005
    Hi!

    Just a message of support to tell that I love the story! It's one of the most realistic Hiei/Kurama fics I've read so far, and the only one I read on this site!

    Hope to read you soon!
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  • From ANON - December Wind on July 15, 2005
    Beautiful...
    I've been reading this fic from its very first chapter and I'm still just as giddy about it now.
    Love your writing~!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on July 14, 2005
    That was delightful :D I really really enjoyed it! Sorry the book case trapped you...that sucks majorly. This chapter was fun, with the water gun fight (those are so much fun!!!) and sweet and smutty (the lemon), and delightfully tasteful and full of hte emotion that you've been building up to. Yays! :D
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  • From ANON - Weazul-chan on July 13, 2005
    I'm usually pretty critical of fanfics, but I gotta say this one gave me nothing to be disappointed about, even considering I'm not that big of a Kurama/Hiei fan. great job, the mustellid-demon gives this two paws up!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 13, 2005
    OMG.

    You just made my week. I screamed a little too loudly when I found out you put up the next chapter AND it has a lemon.

    LOVED IT! You did a very good job with the imagery - how they started off slowly, I loved the whole image of Hiei cracking, the spiderweb pattern across him, and how he came to the realization that he was worthy of being loved. I like how you didn't allow him to cry, that's just the thing - Hiei doesn't cry.

    You kept them in charcter, even as you allowed them to change.

    And for your mascara worries - Estee Lauder Illusionist will help ease you eyelash troubles the next time you cosplay, it's really easy to use and it works wonderfully.

    Thanks for the great story!
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  • From ANON - that loser on July 13, 2005
    Oh my freaking gawd. "Madam, you kick ass", I feel is rather appropriate here. I love Kura-chan and Hiei together.... *Hugs Kurama plushie that I made mahself*
    Sigh....
    That was the best I've ever read, ever.
    Again, you kick ass, madam
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  • From ANON - arrowolight on July 13, 2005
    Wow!!! Well, first of all let me tell you that I am really sorry to hear about your incident with the bookcase and hope that you are recovering (or have recovered) nicely.
    Your description of the incident, however, is so lively and hilarious that I bursted out laughing like a crazy person couple times. Surely a testimony to your incredible ability as a writer. Okay, now back to the "real story", which is, as always in the case of this fic, written with such a fluid grace, a wry, dry, witty and naughty tone all at the same time, it is simply pure enjoyment to read. The lemon is tastefully done with the right mixture of frantic passion and clearness of the mind mixed together with the uniqueness of the narrator's tone, it is one of the best lemons I have read. You are simply amazing.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on July 13, 2005
    Wow, that was hot. Everyone does hot and horny sex which is good but I love slow and sensual lovemaking better. Great chapter. I'm sorry it's almost over. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - CrimsonFox on July 13, 2005
    It's so awesome! You did a great job with the characterization. It was a cute lemon, I love it.
    How was it going as Hiei? I went as a pretty boy to ACEN, too, and said screw the make up half way through, because it kept getting messed up.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 13, 2005
    Great lemon. I loved this chapter, the water gun fight was great. as soon as it was mentioned, I knew Hiei would love that. I hope your ankle is healing well.

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  • From ANON - Angel on July 11, 2005
    Wonderful job. Plz hurry and update soon!
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