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Reviews for ~Once Burned~

By : Metranome
  • From ANON - Everqueen on June 09, 2005
    WOW, the image of Hiei reading smut novels fills my mind and won't leave rofl. That was a good chapter. I'm so glad you didn't have Hiei jumping up and down with proclimations of love right of when he realizes he does feel something for Kurama. Caring is a good start. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on June 09, 2005
    Altar: *smacks Hiei with a paper fan, Sanzo-style* Get it through your thick head chibi baka! Not everyone is here to please you! *more Sanzo-styled attacks* Anti-social prick!

    Hiei: *pulls out his sword* Watch it han'kuro onna!

    Altar: *eyes glowing* Make me...

    Kurama: ... *stares blankly for a moment* Please continue with the story.
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  • From ANON - BWinner(Not signed in) on June 09, 2005
    Yayness! Another update from my favoutrite IC author!.. Ok, well, you're the only other IC author I know really, besides myself...but hey! You're still my favourite! Your latest chapters kick ass and I can't wait to see more from you soon. Keep the good stuff coming!
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  • From ANON - gretel_chan on June 09, 2005
    Wonderful fic. The characters are so very true to themselves, and the story just sucks you in. I'm looking forward to more updates.
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  • From ANON - December Wind on June 08, 2005
    Very wonderful. Made me feel all lovey dovey inside.
    Don't rush it on the lemon, I feel comfortable with the pace it's going with right now :)
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  • From mhmartini on June 08, 2005
    Very, very nice. I anjoy this whole story very much, and I can actually picture the characters saying and doing the things you write. (Except Kurama readding romanc novels... But anyway.)

    You mentioned a lemon when Hiei makes up his mind. That can be interpretted several ways. Maybe he decides he loves Kurama, and they have their long awaited lemon. Or maybe he rejects Kurama, and Kurama runs back to Makai and has a lemon with Yomi, or stays in Ningenkai and has a lemon with some unsuspecting fangirl (Mary Sue?). Or maybe Kurama pushes Hiei too far, and the hiyoukai grabs the first thing he can lay his hands on to chuck at the fox, and that thing is a steaming lemon! (Doesn't everyone have one of those sitting in their bedroom?)

    I'm sorry, I am in a really funkified mood right now, and I have not had much sleep over the past few days. I will keep my lame comments to myself now, and simply leave you with this: I like your story very much and look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on June 08, 2005
    Awesome story. I love it. Update soon.

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  • From ANON - arrowolight on June 08, 2005
    Bravo! Bravo! A New Chapter! (And I have checked to see whether there is any new update several times a day since the 5th!)
    Your writing style is really pleasant, and the unfolding of the story is just deliciously paced, so don't let anyone hurry you into anything other
    than what you've planned in your mind. Please update soon. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2005
    Ah. Still wonderful. Hiei is so cute! Granted, so is Kurama, but he's more hot. So is Hiei, though, in an evil, dangerous sort of way. Well, I'll let you continue. This is one of the best Kurama/Hiei romances I've read.
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  • From ANON - citizencobalt on June 07, 2005
    Yeah. that Hiei alright. So far you're doing a wonderful job at this. I like the lime thing. Very good. Now, write the next chapter! Ack! I'm spazzing! What happens next! Ok, I'm fine now. My favorite was that last Yuusuke scene.
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  • From ANON - TheMysticalDragon on June 06, 2005
    Does the song "Bad to the Bone" ever put you in mind of Hiei? That song and "Hold on Loosely" both played while I read this fic, making the ficcie go from totally, incredibly HOT to Inferno hot!!

    Great story.. and by the way, nice way to tease Yusuke!! Will he always be Hiei's uhh... test subject.....

    and did Yusuke actually enjoy Hiei kissing him???
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra (not signed in) on June 06, 2005
    yes! very nice imagry.. i could so see it... *sighs* how sweet.. heh. even if it was rash.. and unintentionally sweet. lol. ^^ you know i love it. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Lijana on June 05, 2005
    Is Hiei going to Yusuke? I hope so it would be sooo funny to see his reaction as Hiei tries to find his answers. I can't wait the suspense is killing me.
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  • From ANON - DonDon on June 04, 2005
    Ok, usually I'm not the fangirlish, squeeling type but I must admit this fic is testing me. I love this couple and I love it even more when they're in character. The more in character the more I like it. I hope you write more soon, I'll be sure to keep watching for updates.

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  • From ANON - blissfully_unknown on June 03, 2005
    it cut off half of my review before, so here it is again. *grumbles* anyway, I said that i love how you keep kurama and hiei in character so well. please update soon! we all love it so much (well the ones of us who DO love your story anyway...).
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