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Reviews for ~Once Burned~

By : Metranome
  • From ANON - Vile Deadboss on May 22, 2005
    This story is fantastic! though did cringe and laugh at the joke fic. (would of been scared too if didn't see the note above.)
    Please do continue! looking forward to read more.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on May 21, 2005
    What a great "real" chapter. Hiei kissing Yusuke was particularly amusing. I can see Hiei doing something like that, needing a "second" opinion. Couldn't see him doing that to Kuwabara though rofl. And he does respect Yusuke.


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  • From mhmartini on May 21, 2005
    All that, and I screwed up the word "their". Ugh. I wish these review thingers had spell checker. Sorry about that. Y_Y
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  • From mhmartini on May 21, 2005
    I liked both your fake and real chapters. It's fun to intorduce the parody every now and then. (I'm currently working on a Marty Sue comedy, myself.)

    Now, about that reviewer: you need to put things into perspective. "You" and "are" are very difficult words to spell out all the time. I mean, that's TWO extra keys strokes per word! That would have been SIX whole keys strokes more in that one review! Really, anonymous persons are far too busy to be bothered by six additional keystrokes. And then there is the whole business of "are" vs "our". I mean, really, it's just as confusing as "your" and "you're", "thier", "there", and "they're", and let's not even mention the difficulties that "you" and "ewe" present! Our very busy and anonymous flamers* simply cannot be expected to dedicate even a meager portion of their (there? they're?) full and self-actuated existances to petty matters such as grammar and spelling. Overall, I think this person did you a favor by using "u" and "r". Now, if they could do you a favor involving a long walk and a short pier, we could all be that much more blessed by it.

    I hope the above was received as intended, a la chapter five. ^_~ *=please note, jab directed at anon flamers only. Anon CC and Anon praise is exempt from the above.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on May 21, 2005
    Interesting....Yusuke makes such a good guinne pig, doesn't he? lol I liked your fake chapter 5...it was funny...it seems that mary sue bashing and cliche tearing are de rigure recently...it's fun :D I look forward to more :D And aren't idiot reviewers the....most annoying creatures? They're worse than mary sues.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on May 21, 2005
    I like this story. You are sticking true to their characters and that is so pleasant. I'm never able to do that with hiei/kurama pairings, so i bow in awe to your coolness. The last chapter, by the way, was hilarious. I do hope it was just a joke on all of us OC hiei/kurama writters out there and you continue to dazzle us with your awesome story.
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  • From ANON - C on May 21, 2005
    Ohhh!!! It hurts so much, here I was expecting a continuation of your wonderful fic, and then reading that, it was all that I could do to read the whole thing through. I might get a twitch thinking about it... I am shuddering right now! You are right, that never should have been written!

    Okay, I am better now (I might be scared forever though), I can't wait for the continuation of "Once Burned." Have a good day!
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  • From ANON - bob on May 21, 2005
    i got very naseous but you'll be proud hear that i didn't puke....though i am waiting for the nausea to wear off
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  • From ichigokun on May 20, 2005
    Very good fanfic, even though I'm not a fan of the pairing. And the satire!omake at teh end was hilarious.
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  • From ANON - Isabeau on May 20, 2005
    Couldn't stop laughing while reading your parody chapter. On one hand it's sad that those kinds of stories are so prevalent, but your send up of them was just too funny. It's nice to read a story that really cares about keeping the guys in character and I hope you can keep posting for all of us who appreciate it. Looking forward to your lemon!
    Isabeau
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  • From ANON - Dia on May 20, 2005
    hahaha... holy shit, that cracked me up! though you left out the part where they use hair gel as lubricant, mark each other as mates and hiei gets pregnant... what's even funnier though is those people who flamed you as they obviously can't take a joke. anyway, i look forward to your next *ahem* real chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2005
    r u an idiot u had nice story there then u just ruin it at the end STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2005
    You do a wonderful job of keeping everyone IC. I have found a few other authors that do this well but the numbers are few. Keep up the great work.

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  • From ANON - Heidi on May 20, 2005
    Loved your last little chapter. I am new to yu yu fanfics but love kurama x Hiei pairing. Finding one that is not a complete waste of time is another story. I have loved what you have written so far.
    Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2005
    Oh dear god WHY?
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