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Reviews for Reikai Tantei - Down The Well

By : FullMetalBlunt
  • From ANON - Shona on May 13, 2005
    Okay, Katzztar told me to check out the newest chapters.
    I must admit that the chapters are longer than before.
    The bad portrayal of Kuwabara seemed to maybe inintenional.
    The lemon seemed to be rushed in the writing. However new authors often run into that problem. I know how hard it is sometimes to write a sex scene.
    I don't know yet. I wiil check out some more before saying I'll give up.

    There has been improvement in the last few chapters. Perhaps the first few chapters can be re-written? Is in combining a few of them to make them more acepale lenght.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on May 13, 2005
    Well, the chapters are not as short as before. They're on the small end of acceptable, but it's enough so I don't get frustrated at having to hit the next button so quikly.
    Thank you for making longer chapters.
    the lemon between Kurama & Inuyasha was a bit quick, but I know how hard it is to write those scenes. Hopefully with practice, they won't seem so ackward.
    This is the first time I've seen Inuyasha paired with Kurama, nice surprise there.

    Hoiw about another never before seen pairing? Can I be you to get Sango to flirt with Kuwabara? Maybe even get together with him? He's polite with women (called Juri sweetheart during the Tournament ;) And he respects women enough to NOT grope them. It would be a shock to Sango to have a guy nice to her maybe catch her in battle and NOT grope her.

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  • From ANON - Katzztar on May 13, 2005
    Well, I have to way that I like ch.s 8 & 9, Everyone is mostly in character.Thank you for not thrashing Kuwa in ch 8. I can see him acting that way, and yes I believe he would think its cool to fight side by side with a girl-friend.
    Hehe I liekt aht Sango tried to callim Kazuma. I want to say that could be the first time a girl other than Shizuru or Yukina called him by name. For aminute I almost daydreamed about a Sango/Kuwabara pairing..... but I know he is manys LAST choice to pair up. But the number of us Kuwabara fans are growing!! Muhahahahahaha

    hehe The scene between Hiei & Kagome was also done good. I can picture Kaogme telling Hiei off.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on May 13, 2005
    Nice semi-sweet scene. Now only if the future chappies don't have any Kuwa-bashing, I can stick around and read more.
    If there's kuwabra bashing I'm out
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  • From ANON - Shona on May 13, 2005
    The scene between Yusuke & Kuram was sweet. But as I said the chapters are too short. I'm not going to read too much more itf they are barely a page or two.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on May 13, 2005
    Thank you Katzztar and Shona! I knew this story had bad vibes just by looking at it and I finally read it myself. Sorry to say, but this story deserves a one star rating.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on May 13, 2005
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  • From ANON - Shona on May 13, 2005
    What the?????
    Dude the well isn't a demon! It's not even alive! It is revealed in the 2nd IY movie that it was built using the wood of a God Tree that existed before the current God Tree that lives from Fedual era to modern times. But as the names suggest those are GOD trees not demon trees.

    The chapters are way too short. I find it annoying to have to hit the next button so often. I rather not read a story that has extremely short chapters. There are others that feel the same way. A good way not to loose readers is to make longer chapters.
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