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By : mhmartini
  • From BlueUtopiah on January 10, 2006
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! Explain to me why I hadn't read this? (Oh yeah, because I suck). I can't say that I've ever read a story with a Mary Sue since I was warned about them fairly early on, and I'm not really into OCs anyway, so I managed to escape pretty much unharmed. It doesn't look that way for our poor boys though.

    Dude, this is really really funny - I love how you butcher the grammar - and they notice it! Also the line: " As long as she was somehow physically attached to a bishonen she was happy", well, I think that goes for any of us any day really.

    And - yeah - you have to qualify why Hiei wouldn't kill her because she would be in 1000 pieces before she could scream "Kawaii!". I say let Keiko do the job.
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on November 27, 2005
    ROFLMAO!!! *tears pour out eyes at laughter* This is the funniest fanfiction I have ever read, seriously! This was ninjanuity major on your part, and I'm enjoying this immensly. One can only hope that Hiei will survive the encounter of the Mary Sue. Update when you can, this story is hilarious!
    Sayuri-chan
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on July 04, 2005
    Oh man... you know what's funny, but sad at the same time? I've come across stuff almost exactly like this, except the "writers" were freaking serious about their OC. This is satire at its best, man! XD
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  • From ANON - Anasazi Darkmoon on May 28, 2005
    Oh my GOD! Poor guys! How in the world are they going to get rid of something as awful as that? Will Hiei attempt to cut her to ribbons? Will Kurama actually gnaw on his own arm again? This was hilarious and I hope you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - cillaxox (not logged in) on May 22, 2005
    I'm still laughing! There was too many funny lines to say which one was the best. All the stuff you wrote about the comparison of powers was too true. I can't wait to see what adventures Mary has next.
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  • From ANON - Kit-Kit (Not logged in) on May 21, 2005
    LOL yours is funnier than mine though *pouts* I wish I would write good stories like you.....You reviews for my Mary-Sue fic, and I return the favor it only seem right, right? And if you can, read my new story 'Take Over' and give me a couple of pointers? I would really like that I'm just starting out and I'm not so good with them as you can see on my profile....I just figured since you have sucessful stories you wouldn't helping out a stressful young authoress in her time of need *puppy eyes* PLEASE?! if you have the time I mean but if ur busy *sighs* I understand....


    Hope U update soon
    Kit-Kit
    A Mary-Sue Hater
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  • From ANON - CWolf on May 21, 2005
    I loved the part where Kurama tried to chew off his arm. Once again great job.
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  • From ANON - december wind on May 21, 2005
    Hey, thanks for offering to explain the Mary-Sue thing :D (I must have sounded pretty confused)
    But, I decline- the only reason I'm sort of in the dark is because I will myself not to click into any of the Mary-Sue-mess fics~
    (Of course, yours was an exception, I'm really enjoying it!)
    Can't wait till Hiei comes out.
    By the way, I really liked the part where Kurama tried to bite his arm off.
    That was original, yet, I can imagine Kurama trying.
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  • From ANON - Metranome on May 21, 2005
    Oh Lord, that was priceless! This has to be one of the best written Mary Sue fics I've ever seen, and considering the subject matter that's saying a lot. Please, write more of this if you have time. I think I'll go die laughing now. :)
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  • From ANON - CWolf on May 21, 2005
    I can definitly appreciate this! I love it! So far it holds true to almost every god awful Mary-Sue I've come across. Thank you for making me laugh.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on May 21, 2005
    I can almost picture a well written character being dragged along, trying to appologize for everything....lol (okay...over active imagination here...). This is funny and I'm really glad I didn't have to explain "cat girl" :D I've been trying to find the comic that introduced the "cat girl"....anyways :D This is fun, and I hope it's fun to write in the middle of the other angst you write :D (oh, lordy! Is she gonna.....oh, gods!!!!....is she gonna like try to watch? *shudder*...at least the cat girl I live with is too young to be allowed to read yaoi...thank gods!...though, she does make suggestions...)
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on May 21, 2005
    UBDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - GreenFire on May 21, 2005
    so noted about the grammar. lol! I loved the part about how marysues use Genkai, it's so true. This is hilarious.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on May 21, 2005
    I live with one of those....*shudder* Don't you feel sorry for me? lol And my writing only leads to "story ideas".....*shake*....It took *months* to make her stop squealing "kawaii!!!!!" and other things...*sigh*

    Oh, check this out, you'll find it amusing :D http://www.warehouse23.com/item.html?id=SP3001

    Anyways...goofy stories are good :D I likey :D
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on May 21, 2005
    Sounds like alot of fun!
    I will come back to read the rest!
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