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By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - punk-llama on June 27, 2008
    Oh, god, it's so true! I wasn't sure I was going to finsih the chapter because I was laughing so hard. Love it, and I'm having just as much fun reading as you are writing.
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  • From ANON - XD on December 20, 2006
    all i have to say is this:

    LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dreamseeker on December 14, 2006
    Oh, the pain.... Ugh... Mary Sues...
    This his hilarious, but when she interupted the beautifully hot, drool-worthy sex that you write oh so well, even I almost felt queasy. Impressive.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on June 16, 2006
    XD Hilarious! Particularly that part with Kuwabara. And go Botan, go! And . . . poor Kenshin (that is Kenshin at the end, right?).

    Excellent satire of the epitome Mary Sue. Excerpts of your story ought to be posted in reviews to true Mary Sue stories in the future. Even if *they* don't get it, it might give tormented readers who experienced the displeasure of stumbling upon it something positive to walk away with.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 13, 2006
    This is just...is just...I laughed so hard while I was reading the last 2 chapters that EMOD told me to shut the hell up. You even fucked up the chapter names! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! This is totally a story for the record books, I mean, you hit every single Mary Sue-ism and did it so it comes around the corner and slaps you in the head.

    Oh, and yeah, the lemon was hot...very hot, I forgot about the big MS and then I almost cried.
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  • From on June 11, 2006
    This fic had me both dying from laughter and shivering from fear at the same time. She's scary, that Mary Sue Wannabe. I think I agree with you; if she's not evil, then I don't know what is. Really, this was too hilarious! And when she caught Kurama and Hiei...I pretty much died! It was so sad, yet so very funny. I wasn't going to read this at first because of the Mary Sue thing, but gave in when I saw it was you. I'm glad I did. That was certainly worth a laugh...or fifty.

    One small error in the last chapter. You forgot 'kill', I'm guessing in this sentence: He could Kuwabara later.

    Oh, and one more thing: wonderful use of the word kawaii! Used it true Mary Sue form!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on June 06, 2006
    Whee....Good bye and Good riddance! lol I'm teasing...oh, poor poor Hiei and Kuarama! lol At least now things are back to the status quo :D Poor Kenshin...lol

    A sequal...oh, dear...the good OC would be as embarassed as the CC, wouldn't she? Oh poor girl.

    Anyways...a good laugh...and yay for Kurama showing poor Hiei how easy it is for simple things to distract the body ;) lol
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  • From ANON - anonymous on June 03, 2006
    I feel so bad for hiei and kurama.... I may read fanfiction but I hate mary sue's!!!! damn she pisses me off.....yea..

    you are a very good writer although I hate mary sue's
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  • From ANON - Mini Meaness on January 21, 2006
    This is truely hilarious. I've never bothered to read anything like this before and I'm glad I tried it out with this one since I love your other stories. Good job at whatever this would be classified as. XD I can hardly wait for more.
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  • From ANON - lunar_eclipse24 on January 13, 2006
    I think you were right about the lemon scene. It was pretty sensual.

    I feel so sorry for Kurama and Hiei though. Interupted and then trapped by a Sue. That's got to be like a fate worse than death. And she made the mistake of "ravage" versus "ravish" that is in every bad smut fic.
    I feel sorry for Kuwabara too, bashed and then trapped in a keikai.

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  • From ichigokun on January 11, 2006
    *dies laughing* This is one of the better MS parodies that I've read. Just seeing Mary dancing around like the Great Saiyaman is...just...HILARIOUS. And the Kurama/Hiei was pretty hot, even though I am not an avid fan of that pairing.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on January 11, 2006
    Forgive me! I lurk-read! Anyway, I don't have much criticism to give— actually none at all. Although, Botan's little scary moment in chapter four reminded me of Suryallee's picture of Botan towering over Hiei with scary flames an stuff... *nods* I liked the part where Hiei was wanting to kill Mary Sue, Koenma kept reminding him what would happen.

    ~~Altar of Wishes
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  • From ANON - hColleen on January 11, 2006
    I really am having fun imagining my poor OC followling Mary around, trying to stop her (to no avail, of course). Yeah, I know...not really the point, but still...it's fun for me.

    The beginning of the lemon was totally totally wondrous! I wanted to kill Mary, too, even though I knew she had to show up. I'm sure my own feelings pale in comparison to Kurama's and Hiei's. This story really is a lot of fun to read. There was a really awsome line Hiei said...and I should have copied it to paste here and fawn over...

    I'm glad you're having fun writing this. That's the most important thing. (what am I saying...I admit to being a review whore, first class)
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  • From ANON - UKImouto on January 11, 2006
    XDDDD Oh, God, I'm having a ball with this one. It's just too funny, and too true!!! Oh, can you mess around with the "powers" a little bit? I recall a lot of stories acting like Sailor Moon, where they yell out whatever freakin' nonsense can possibly come to them (almost always to do with hearts and angels), and I love messin' around with those things. Keep up the hilarious work, I can't wait to see what "little" Mary Sue does next!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on January 10, 2006
    Gods...poor Hiei and Kurama...I'm scared! lol I can imagine my poor OC (she has powers, but they're finite, she had to learn to control them, and she's got faults) flaming Mary's hair or random bits of her just for the hell of it (she has a temper...). I should write Bekka again...just for the fun of it. It'd be fun to write your Mary and my Bekka into a story, though...I think Bekka may...cause the demise of Mary...but...Mary can't be killed, can she? Oh, dear

    Smangst...poor Hiei and Kurama!!!!!
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