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Reviews for Cruel Fates

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  • From ANON - Nurse Witch on May 28, 2006
    I Really like this story. I remembered reading it on another site. And i finally get to read the other chaps. The story is going good. Keep up the good work! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Nurse Witch on May 28, 2006
    I Really like this story. I remembered reading it on another site. And i finally get to read other chaps. The story is going good. Keep up the good work! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Nurse Witch on May 28, 2006
    I Really like this story. I remembered reading it on another site. And i finally get to read ohter chaps. The story is going good. Keep up the good work! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Sky on January 09, 2006
    I was shocked when she was pregnant, I was shocked when I found out that it's hiei's but i was creeped out when the crazy onna said she wanted to cut my throat after the babies(?) were born.Shocking!! I hope you update sometime in the near future.
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  • From ANON - kyra on January 06, 2006
    I have weird tastes in stories, but I found this one interesting.Please continue!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on October 27, 2005
    I finally found your story again....with this new formatted look the site got it was hard to find it again.....I love all the chapters I missed.....keep it coming please....I can't wait to see what kind of power I really have.......
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  • From ANON - scarrycuty on October 12, 2005
    liking the story as far as the last chapter during the lemon i couldnt help but think about this one joke about a couple doing it when the chick was pregnent and when the baby was born he grabed the father and poked his head real hard going "how do you like that buddy huh!?"..lol!!! XD anyways please update soon!

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  • From Whatevayo on September 27, 2005
    I never thought that a cousin coming over to visit would make so much trouble, anyways I like the new chapter.
    To Hiei, I don't like her imagination either, and-

    D.W.: Hi!!!!!!!!!!! My computer's still broken!

    Leona: Wouldn't you have fixed it by now!?!!?!!!

    D.W.: No, I don't like fixing stuff.

    Leona: It was a retoracle question, you idiot.

    D.W.: Did you know that Hiei wears pink frilly boxers with little chibi Kuwabaras on them?

    Leona: O_o *inches slowly away*

    D.W.: And did you know that Sesshy wears light purple boxers with chibi Kaguras on them?

    Leona: How are you related to me again?

    D.W.: Kurama also wears-

    Kurama: *puts his hand over her mouth* Now, noone needs to know what my undergarments look like.

    D.W.: *pouts* Spoil sport. Hey! I almost forgot that Yusuke wears those white boxers with hearts on them!

    Yusuke: Hey!! How'd you know that??

    D.W.: Keiko told me. Oops, I wasn't supossed to say that. I also wasn't supposed to say that Keiko was a Peeping Tom and saw all the boys without any clothes on. Oops, I better run far from here before- *gets slapped in the back of the head by Keiko*

    Keiko: You'd better run! *starts swinging a bat at me*

    D.W.: Ow!! I'm sorry!! I didn't mean to-OW!!! *climbs up a tree* Hah! You can't get me now!!

    Keiko: Leona? Can I please borrow your machine gun?

    Leona: *devilish grin*

    D.W.: Leona!! We're family remember??? Families stick together!! Don't give her the gun!!

    Leona: Sure, I'll even help you aim at her. hands Keiko the gun and helps her aim*

    D.W.: O_o Update!! *dodges bullets* Before I'm dead!!




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  • From ANON - Goku (not logged in) on September 20, 2005
    AH! GOD DAMN THAT BITCH!
    lol, I just don't like Mukuro
    ^^;
    Update sooner this time please!!!
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  • From ANON - InTheShadows on August 18, 2005
    Great chapters. Sorry I didn't review the others. Lazyness always gets to me before school ugh! Well anyways, I liked the chappies and hope you update soon!!!

    -InTheShadows.
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  • From on August 16, 2005
    I love this story!!! The fact that Hiei is starting to be so understanding just make's me tingle all over. I love it, update soon as you can!
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  • From on August 14, 2005


    This is a really good story. And-

    D.W.: Hello!! My computers not working so I'll be using this computer instead!

    Leona: Give me my laptop!!

    D.W.: Never!!!*runs away*

    Leona: Give me that laptop!!!!*runs after*

    D.W.: I'll never give it up!!!!*pulls out bow n' arrows*

    Leona: Ha! You think that scares me cousin?!!! *pulls out machine gun*

    D.W.: Okay!! Okay!!! *throws back laptop but keeps running*

    Leona: ^__^ Good story! Update!!!

    D.W.: Oh and I can borrow my cousins machine gun and shoot you if I wanted to. Because I could always just use my imagination to
    finish the story. *imagines Hiei getting ran over by a train*
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 13, 2005
    Awwwwwww!!!!!!!!Hiei!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark Wolf on August 12, 2005


    Sooo sleepy.....*falls asleep*

    Sesshy: Not again! Oi, can't she ever stop falling asleep? She's definitly been training to hard again.....

    Akisha(my OC): Well it's not entirely her fault. She's gotta compete in that big archers contest-thingy don't she?

    Sesshy: *sighs* Yes, but if she keeps training like this she won't be able to compete.

    D.W.: *mumbles in her sleep* *wakes up then yawns* I'm not so sleepy anymore. But, who said I wasn't going to compete
    in the archery contest?

    Akisha: He did it!! *points directly at Sesshy*

    D.W.: Very well then...*cracks knuckles*

    Sesshy: O.o *runs as fast as he can away*

    D.W.: GET BACK HERE DOG-BREATH!! *swings punches at Sesshy while running after him*
    IF YA THINK I CAN'T COMPETE IN THE ARCHERY CONTEST HOW ABOUT A BOXING COMPETITION?!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!?!!!!!
    Boy that was a mouthful. *still chasing and throwing punches and kicks that Sesshy can't avoid*
    Anyways to Kuramagurl; Your point? I don't care as long as someone, not spesifically meaning you
    updates. And it's JUST a fanfic.(a really well writen and good fanfic though) So be afraid; Be VERY afraid!!!!!!!!!!
    MUWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LoudMouth0920 on August 04, 2005
    YES yes yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u updated updated!!!! yayay
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