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Reviews for To the hell with the abyss!

By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on June 22, 2005
    Good story. Don't worry too much about the grammer. Keep writing and use a grammer/spell check and you'll improve every time. Update soon. I can't wait to see Yusuke's reaction to his wannabe lover.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on June 22, 2005
    Great story. I love it. Hiei is such a cocky bastard. I can't wait for the lemon. I just hope it's a long lemon and they just don't rush through it ^_~
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  • From Suryallee7104 on June 21, 2005
    To kit-kit san,
    I never meant that I thought you have flamed me, but if you have read my chapter well, you will know that I meantioned the behave of some people on this site in generall. And that I also told to everyone to read my bio before you judge about me.
    It wasn´t meant to make you feel bad, sorry for that. But I am tired of telling every time that English isn´t my first speech, and wanted that the people sometimes read the bio first, because thats what it is for.
    I have seen a many people here who have problems with English too and some of them have gotten nasty comments about it. I am not found of that behave and have sorryly thought yours was one too.
    see, it is harder you would think to write something in your home speech and then to translate it into a readable form of English.
    But from now on, not one fik from me will miss this little entry again. Maybe that will hold us all out of trouble like this here.

    Thanks Altar! Love you for that!
    Suryallee


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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on June 21, 2005
    Heh... I'm working on it right now and believe me, you're not all that bad! It's just the few rules of English here and there, plus sentence composition. *hugs Suryallee*
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 21, 2005
    listen about before im sorry if you thought that my review was a flame because it wasn't. i didn't mean for it to sound like that i just thought that you would like to know that there were a few mistakes is all. i know you said in the 2nd chapter that it wasn't anybody in this fan-site that you were writing that author note to but i just can't help but think that i did something wrong so from the bottom of my heart i apologize for earlier review.
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  • From ANON - Midnight Marauder 7 on June 20, 2005
    Damn, when I seen a Chapter 2 I was hoping for some fun... but, curse those anal people! Then again, look at it this way, those that make a big fuss about it probably make nearly the same mistakes. I know I do on most occasions. Love it so far and can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
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  • From mhmartini on June 20, 2005
    I like it. I look forward to reading more. Usually your stories feature Keiko heavily. While I don't hate her, she is not one of my favorites, so I only read them from time to time (No offense. It has nothing to do with your writing, I'm just not that big a Keiko fan.) When I saw you wrote a Hiei/Yusuke, I had to read it, and I am glad I did.

    You have great ideas. Even your Keiko stories manage to draw me in. Never let anyone make you feel bad for your writing. You are right; you try. That is much more than some others do. I studied Spanish for a long time, and I had to write essays and reports in that language. Even with all the classes, it's difficult to truly master another language. If I recall, you said you were self taught. I think you're doing just fine. If someone can't understand that, then you really have to think: maybe it isn't your writing that's the problem. Maybe their reading skills are. Keep writing; you're doing fine.
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  • From ryukotsusei on June 20, 2005
    I think you've done a fine job considering English is not your native language. Try not to let it get you down, betas are great and all but like you stated they do have things of their own to do as well. I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on June 20, 2005
    Yeah... Sury's not a native speaker/writer of English.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 20, 2005
    um yeah, this really doesnt make much sense. Not trying to be funny or anything but is english your second language by any chance?
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 20, 2005
    nice chapter but alot of your sentences didn't make sense i think you should read over it and try to re-edit the chapter.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on June 20, 2005
    Hmm... shamefully the only thing shorter than Hiei is this chapter! I will dutifully wait for more!
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