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Reviews for If They'd Been Human

By : CrimsonFox234
  • From ryukotsusei on August 05, 2005
    Man Kurama really screwed up this time. I don't blame Hiei for being pissed off, I'm not sure I could forgive Kurama if it was me. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on August 05, 2005
    Oh no! Why did Kurama have to be so stupid. Great chapter, very emotional. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on August 05, 2005
    OMG, I'm sobbing. poor Hiei and Kurama. Why did Kurama continue it? /cries. i hope you update soon before I move.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 02, 2005
    Thanks for the update!!! *get yelled at to get off the computer* >.< Stupid parents enforcing stupid-er college crap............. *sigh* ^___~ Thanks again, and keep up the good work!!!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 31, 2005
    OMG! That was just F**king awesome!

    Not only was there sweet and romantic stuff (Hiei getting a job so Kurama could stay in school), but there was smut and it was great smut! Loved how Kurama said he never faced anyone when having sex with them, but he did with Hiei.

    And were does Hiei get his amazing oral sex skills?

    I really like this one - it's still neck and neck with "Model and The Bass", I can't decided which one I like better - you are the goddess of Alternate Universe!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 31, 2005
    hee hee i heart uke hiei and yay the finally got back together! and will there be a happy ending or will there be more drama after this?? who cares i'll read it anyway please update soon
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on July 31, 2005
    Great chapter. I'm so happy they are back together. I hope that means Kurama's retired and all Hiei's. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 30, 2005
    Hiei's ass hurts, so Kurama makes him chili rofl. Oh god, that reminds me of a joke. And if you want to hear it, send me an e-mail and ask about the gay chili joke. Great chapter though. I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 19, 2005
    Very cute idea, especially the side stories! You have a nice mix of humor, angst, and sensuality -- I look forward to finding out what happens next. ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - canis lupis on July 18, 2005
    ummm............. you do know that that kind of sex is physically impossible, right? just fyi. other than that good story, even if someof the wording was a bit iffy. i really like the original plot, but the side-stories are good, too.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 18, 2005
    You are so good to me! You posted TWO chapters!

    I love how they both revolved around cooking - you CAN'T get that distracted when cooking bacon and eggs - they WILL burn.

    I'm surprised Kurama has kept his hands off of Hiei for that long, and I love how Hiei is vulnerable, but doesn't want to seem so. They are just too cute together!

    More! Write more!

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  • From ANON - bob on July 18, 2005
    lol its funny cuz i was listening to a song called bang bang bang while i read chapter 8 but please continue with the story! i don't like hiei upset with kurama

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  • From ANON - bob on July 13, 2005
    please conitnue and update soon!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on July 13, 2005
    Another great chapter. Can't wait for more. I hope Kurama's out of the biz. If he's not he'll break Hiei's tender heart. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on July 12, 2005
    The story is going really well so far and I hope you finish it.As far as a first date,well it couls be almost anything but where Would Hieiget the money for it?Mmm,how about sneaking in to the movies and making out somewhat or Hiei covering the bed in rose petals(getting the idea from Kurama's hair)or Kurama taking Hiei to that special spot he went to relax(somewhere quite)and being caught by a john and Hiei slapping the john around blarting out something about Kurama being his or.........
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