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Reviews for If They'd Been Human

By : CrimsonFox234
  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 12, 2005
    i love how hiei is so protective of kurama and Kurama accepts and cares for Hiei. the food fight was hilarious. HEHE, hiei fell asleep. HEHE. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Maki on July 12, 2005
    *GASP!* This series is soooo kawaii! I just want to wrap them up and take them both home *glomps Hiei and Kurama plushies* YOUR STORY IS SO AWSOME!! Don't stop please!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 11, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG...you just totally made my week. I had no idea that if I kept clamoring for lemons that someone would actually put one in for me! You're so awesome *squeals*. Loved the confusion with what they were saying vs. what was being said on the porno. I also like the "Do it" "Do what?" confusion from Hiei. He's just too cute. I've been following all of your alternate unuiverse stories and I SO want you to write more.

    You rule!
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  • From ANON - starlindakirara on July 10, 2005
    great, girl!!!!!!! that was soooooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!but im so sorry that hiei has to b uke next time u_u but i really enjoyed this lemon (with hiei as seme and, of course: KURAMA=UKE!!!!!!!!!!!!) bye, keep on going with this great fic !!!!!!!!
    nyaoh (kurama MUST be always uke, remember......)
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  • From ANON - angel on July 10, 2005
    wowee good jobb, gurl!! at least.. im asszumingz that u r a gurl.. so don't get annoyed if u arent.. somehow.. O.o;; toetally besidezz the point tho. GREAT JOBB!! i luv readin about kurama and hiei.. lol.. and u makxe it sound so funn.. great job!!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 10, 2005
    WOW, hiei watching porn, that's just so hot for some reason rofl. HEHE, it was good, teaching Hiei how to be Seme in that way. can't wait for the "back to our regularly scheduled programming' chapter coming up next. The lemon was a nice diversion though, thanks
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  • From ANON - bob on July 09, 2005
    yay its updated and there was a lemon! please continue i can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on July 09, 2005
    That was a very yummy lemon. Just the right amount of sweet and tart. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - firekat on July 07, 2005
    That was pretty good. I really like how you twisted the chrachters around. Please post more and keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Vapidbreath on July 06, 2005
    I'm enjoying this. I haven't read a good Yu Yu Hakusho fic in a long while. I like that Kurama isn't as soft and emotional like his is portrayed in many other fics. I also like how Hiei isn't really cold or really soft. You have a nice mixture in his personality. Please let me know when you update if you can. I don't read much YYH fan fiction, so I never know when there's been an update.

    Vapid Breath
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 06, 2005
    Great chapters. Hiei found out about Kurama's occupation and still likes him. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - BlueUtopiah on July 06, 2005
    I'm really loving this story. Poor Hiei thinks he knows what's coming, but it looks like Kurama's going to have a few surprises for him. You do alterate universe very well, great writing. More! I demand lemons!
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  • From ANON - December Wind on July 04, 2005
    Sweet! New chapter~~~
    I like how this is going... very much.
    Kurama, he isn't acting like a crybaby. I'm so happy for that. Yay! Are they going to live together? This just gets better and better..
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  • From ANON - starlindakirara on July 03, 2005
    hi!!!! i`m from argentina so my english isnt very good.....but i understand one thing...
    YOU MUST PUT KURAMA AS UKE, HE LOOKS LIKE A GIRL, SO HE MUST PLAY THE GIRLS PART!!!!!!!! i hate when hiei-kun is uke.....HE MUST BE SEME!!!!!!!!!
    ok, that was my review (lame, of course U_U)
    sayonara bye bye!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - IceAngel on July 03, 2005
    I love it!! keep going and update soon please and thank you!!!
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