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Reviews for If They'd Been Human

By : CrimsonFox234
  • From ANON - bob on July 03, 2005
    ha ha Kurama in a skirt.... thats funny but me really likes continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 01, 2005
    It's different, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - December Wind on July 01, 2005
    Awesome, I love it!!!
    Tough-guy Hiei blushing is all too delicious~~ (Squeals)
    I see conflict coming up soon, Yay~
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  • From ANON - Daho on June 30, 2005
    are you gonna add more? i want somethin to happen, i was gettin into this story ^^
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  • From ANON - DarkRoseDamael on June 30, 2005
    cool fic cant wait for another chappie
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  • From on June 30, 2005
    Space out your paragraphs...other than that not half bad. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - SHalina on June 29, 2005
    Well that was certainly enjoyable ^_^ honestly a really good fic and a great way to start posting things on aff.net I really liked it and cant wait to see where it goes from there.

    Only one bad thing I can say about it thought. When you post it makes your fic alot easyer to read if you put each speach thing (dont know what there called) on a new paragraph.

    Apart from that the fic was great love it and cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - bob on June 29, 2005
    hey i really like this story continue, its just that there is a lot of dialogue and i think some of that didn't have to be said it could've been them thinking it but other than that it was so awesome!!!! update soon!!!!
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