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Reviews for Model and the Bass

By : CrimsonFox234

From Kistia on November 11, 2005
Oh my god. So far, I'm going to add this to my favourites. Its really, really cute!!!

-Saira
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From ANON - Sam on November 08, 2005
This is just too cute. I absolutely love it. Very original.
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From ANON - LoversPastForgotten on November 07, 2005
Awesome! Update soon! Its gettin hot now! ^___^!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on November 04, 2005
Nice story! Please continue it as soon as possible please?????
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From ANON - Suryallee on November 03, 2005
I have read this now quite some time, and it is still getting better and better!
Please update soon, would love to read more.
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From ANON - KyoHana on November 01, 2005
I am loving this one as well. I do hope you know just what a talented writer you are because it definitely comes through in your work.
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From ANON - darkrosedamel on October 28, 2005
what are you talking about? this is a great fic. the begining started a little rough but it got better. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - tinyteeth on October 28, 2005
i don't care if you think it was cheezy. It was an update so I am happy, plus I like Cheez.

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From ANON - RyouKitsune [The Ever-lazy girl who never signs in] on October 27, 2005
::claps::
Oh my god, yay!
Please write more soon, and a lemon part too!, because I love your work!
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From ANON - SweetMisery1 on October 27, 2005
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continue soon
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From ANON - SweetMisery1 on October 27, 2005
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continue soon
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From BlueUtopiah on October 27, 2005
I thought that this chapter was cute, and I would really like a picture of the two of them dressed up, making out in the back of the limo!

And may I say - LOVELESS! Holy crap! I haven't been able to think straight since I watched the series in September. Soubi is far too yummy. I'm glad to know that others are discovering it as well.
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From ANON - Lady Baltimore on October 27, 2005
Your poor thing... the chapter's okay ^^... and it's perfectly fine to "sow your wild oats"! lol Okay, I confess, I like Loveless too (have you heard of Gankutsuou?). I could never really get into Gundam Wing though... was too much of an illiterate hoe-cake-ass-byitch to understand any of that complex shit back in the old 'Toonie days. Ahhh sweet memories of young blahkity blahk blahkhhh... .... .... My poor Crimson! Are you depressed dah-link? T~T

Kampai Kurimuson-SAMAAAAAAaaaaaah!!!! (Hack!... >
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From ANON - Everqueen on October 27, 2005
Yeah, the chapter was good, but Hiei's character changed drastically I think. I did enjoy the whole text message and I think most of that should stay. I can't wait for the rewrite and I was glad to read the chapter as it is. Thanks for feeding my addiction, even slightly.
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From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on October 27, 2005
That was awesome although I hate Toguro, but then I guess I'm supposed to. Hiei's so cute starting to give in to his feelings for Kurama. Update soon.
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