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Reviews for Model and the Bass

By : CrimsonFox234
  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In) on September 15, 2005
    YAY update!!!! I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens everytime I read a new chapter. Now to be perfectly honest... this chapter cracked me up. I almost fell out of my computer chair laughing three or four times at different things in it. The sardines thing was hilarious as was Hiei going "Kurama read my lips... illegal" oh oh and the comment on the correcting of the english cracked me up too. Okay I think I am done... yeah but those really had me laughing hard. I really enjoyed this chapter and I have a feeling that Kurama has a very pissed off manager about to ream him a new one. I can't wait to see what happens! Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 15, 2005
    I AM SO GLAD YOU CONTINUED THIS! Ok, I'm calmer now.

    I like the age difference, and I especially liked how you portrayed the "jagan/scar", very inventive. But you almost made me pee on myself (I said almost!) when Kieko said "Pretty boy love is hot!". Score 1 for rabod yaoi fangirls everywhere!

    Great job, no need to explain things at the top the way you did - everything is well-written and fun to read.
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  • From ANON - christine on September 11, 2005
    I laughed so hard when I read the line about Hiei trying to 'get the horny boy off of him' bwahaha

    great story, i lob joo.
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  • From ANON - LoversPastForgotten(notloggedin) on August 23, 2005
    I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! You have to update soon! Please!! I love your stories they're just so damn good! Update, lease! I'm begging you!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 22, 2005
    I so loved that chapter. Hiei is just so confused about his feelings and I love how he got them out in song. It was nice to see all that face time between the two of them - after chapters of teasing, they finally got to have a serious discussion! Who cares about the media, they should just be in love! (It will probably sell more albums)

    Again, I love your writing and I squeal way too much when you update.
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  • From ANON - Tankar on August 22, 2005
    Coolsies ^^ AUGH! I must know what under his bandana, now x_x; Just hope its not something crazy, like, oh... say... A third eye o.o; Lol, in any case, Hiei seems really loose in this story ^^ He sure talks alot! Not that thats bad or something, just saying... Its weird how Hiei can still go on saying that they can't be together, but he lets Kurama onslaught him with kisses (if only for a short while). Update soon, ne? ^^ I'm absorbed into this, Stereotypes, and Executive! ^^;;; Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on August 21, 2005
    Well, explains why Kurama's all hormonal over Hiei...I'd like to know why Hiei is the way he is, though...interesting that he can't stand the touch of his family, but permits Kurama to touch him....and with them sharing a room, wouldn't the press "eat them alive" anyways?
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  • From ANON - chibi hentai on August 20, 2005
    Awwww, Kawaii! ^^ I'm so happy that you updated ^^. It was cute, Kurama as a florist xD i can see that too. The Florist and the Gang leader o_o interesting. haha. Keep up the good work. and update when you can ^^

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Revenge on August 20, 2005
    Oh my god!! I love it! You totally HAVE to update the next chapter SOON!! This fic is SO awesome.....
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  • From on August 20, 2005
    They're such a cute couple! Update soon and i hope you have Kurama go and visit his mother!!!
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  • From ANON - Shuichi on August 20, 2005
    AHH! I want more! I thought this fic would be stupid but once agian you amaze me foxie! *laughs* More please and update excute I want to read more of that!
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on August 20, 2005
    you *updated*!! *grins* nice chapter, by the way. ^^
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on August 20, 2005
    Cool you finally updated. And not a bad chapter either,its nice to see them getting alittle closer.Although Hiei in a gang? can't wait to see where your going with this.Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    this is a wonderful story:) please keep on writing I would like to read more:)
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  • From ANON - catkittle on August 05, 2005
    i love it you go
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