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Reviews for Model and the Bass

By : CrimsonFox234
  • From ANON - Tankar on August 05, 2005
    This is great ^^ I didn't really like AUs until recently and am just now finding them hard to... well... find! This is really neat! I like how Hiei acts towards Kurama since its more 'like him' than people portray him. Though I do find the outfits something Hiei wouldn't do --; Kurama is VERY straight-forward, isn't he o.o; Not that thats bad... Its a good thing he managed to bring up his and Hiei's.... activities in the last chapter. o.o; What about Kurama's career? I think he should be getting in trouble about now! ^^ Not that I want him to or anything eh hehe... Keep up the good story- its so rare now-a-days to find a good story completed about these two...
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  • From ANON - chibi hentai on August 02, 2005
    it cut off my review! Damn site. what all else i said is that... eh... em... i can't remember >_< shit, me and my bad memory! well, i said basically that i really like this fic. And that i hope you have the next chapter writen since i got the impression you finish writing (at least) most of your fic before posting it. I also gave you an idea (though i don't know how far you've writen or if you're still looking for ideas) that rumors about Hiei and Kurama begin to circulate the tabloods and stir up a little angst between them. just my little idea, not expexting it to be used, lol. also, i hope for an update soon ^^

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - chibi hentai on August 02, 2005
    I like the idea of your fic, it's really cute. I honestly don't mind the OOCness in this fic, it works XD (course normally I can't stand OOC charactors >_
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 30, 2005
    So, really, what's the matter with Kurama? I'm curious...
    I like how Hiei is finally warming up to him, buying him clothes and taking him out to dinner. It's very cute. The whole scene where Kurama's in the bedroom and Hiei's in the shower was hot - are they EVER going to hook up? Or is Hiei just too stubborn? (I hope not).

    I really love this story - keep writing!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on July 29, 2005
    OMG don't you dare stop writing this, I just love it. They were so cute together when Hiei was in the shower. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 28, 2005
    aww man that sucks i don't like waiting i want to know what happens now!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 28, 2005
    HEHE, school girl Kurama. Fun. Hiei I think is starting to feel bad that he forced Kurama to wear those clothes, so he got him the "guy" clothes. lol. I did like the bed scene with the tangled sheets. Great story so far.
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  • From ANON - christine on July 27, 2005
    Oh, good, I had to reread that for a second. COSTUME bunny ears, phew, at first I thought you were just really mean.


    Mmm .. Kurama is yummy, and the French Maid outfit doesn't help out my hormone wiles one bit.


    UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.
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  • From ANON - canis lupis on July 22, 2005
    omg.............that so ruled!!!!! gotta love the bunny ears..... and hiei gets to be all macho!!! w00t! not to be a party pooper or anything....but i am just so proud of myself for knowing that they were defenitely not having sex. or maybe you just made it reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaally obvious. did you? crap...........and now i have nothing to boast for... oh, well. i can always just go back to telling everyone about how i finally figured out how to fold my mom's bath towels....... >.< write more soon, this is kick-ass!!!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on July 22, 2005
    This is an evil little fic but I really like it.Can only imagine what your going to do with bunny ears and can't wait to find out! please update sooon
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  • From ANON - Annabel on July 21, 2005
    Yay! Bunny ears! Yooooou know what bunnies are famous for?! tehe! Update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Ass on July 21, 2005
    Great story...Kurama is uke...right....................?
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 21, 2005
    Great wet dream. OMG, bunny ears. I can't wait to read that chapter rofl. Poor Kurama, Hiei is just embarrassing the heck outta him, but I get the feeling Kurama can take it, it's Hiei that is in way over his head.
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  • From ANON - DarkRoseDamael on July 21, 2005
    oooooooooooh dear. i cant wait to find out what happends next this is such a great fic!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 21, 2005
    I don't know which one of your stories I like best, but his one is pulling for the top spot. I like how their relationship is progressing - Hiei ia actually getting closer to Kurama despite himself. My favourite line was Hiei saying "No, I was dreaming of throwing you into oncoming traffic". I also like Hiei doing pushups with Kurama on his back, I did that for a guy in college once, it's pretty hot.

    Your dialogue between the two is excellent, I really enjoy reading this story.

    And *gulp* bunny ears? What's that about?
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