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Reviews for Model and the Bass

By : CrimsonFox234
  • From redeyedemon on December 15, 2011
    ....So, I twitched a little bit as this story ended. You left me a veyr unhappy person. And unlike when I reread my own stuff, I can't go in and finish the story myself. I'd really, really like to see more of this story.

    ...Please? heh. Anyways, my emails firestarter13_13@yahoo.com if this is posted elsewhere or something of the sort. I"m on tumble and whatever just in case... Maybe. I'm going to stalk to rest of your stories now. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2009
    Story excerpt: "“They weren’t too hard, but the leader, she was always a better fighter than me…”

    “I.”

    “What?”

    “She was always a better fighter than I.”    "

    Review: Um, no. I is not right in this instance. If Hiei had said, "she was a better fighter than I was.", it would work, but simply putting I is a grammatical error and makes the sentence sound like something out of a first grader's mouth.
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  • From ANON - foxxraven on January 04, 2007
    love it please contiue updateing it
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2006
    Need to continue this story CrimsonFox! It's really good and sweet! Kurama groping Hiei all the time i admit is a little... different, but it's funny and adorable. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - XxBatsxX on July 03, 2006
    Haha, the title reminds me of Bueaty and the Beast. xD ........... O_O, not that i think >Kurama< is a beast.



    xD, hahaha jk. I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY! It's so ..... FUCKING AWSOME! *o* It pulled at my heart strings *cough* if i had any :/, but i was so sad when there werent anymore chapters to read ;o; Please Please Please Please Please Please POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!! PLEASE!!!!! I need more! Its like a drug and you have gotten me hooked!
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  • From ANON - IceAngel\'s Hikari on May 08, 2006
    I love this story so so much!! please update very very soon!!!
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  • From ANON - meikouhaikistune on February 10, 2006
    This is really really good it has a good plot, from my view and you need to update!!!
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  • From ANON - vampire_luver on February 09, 2006
    hey awsome story! i really hope that you update soon. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on February 01, 2006
    I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! Update soon for yamyams! ^_^ I really think it's awsome!
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  • From ANON - Baby_Neko on January 01, 2006
    OoooOooo please update soon! I freaking love this story awesome job so far!...PLEASE UPPDAATTEEE!!
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  • From ANON - Yukizora on December 23, 2005
    Great! Wonderful! I like ALL you're YYH stories!!! Update ALL of them as soon as possible!!!! ^^(Is that too much to ask) well, do your best!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on December 22, 2005
    oh i love this story! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Hiei is so cute in your story, too! Kurama is a little perv, though. something completely diffenernt than what i'm used to (unless he's Youko Kurama, of course) but i love it all the same! Please update soon. Or as soon as possible. yeah. that sounds better... anyways, lovin' it! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Kei on November 15, 2005
    Re-Written? I think its fine just the way it is! Even the OOCness is great! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - phoenixfirekitsune on November 11, 2005
    I'm glad that you updated this story. I've been wanting to see what happens. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From Kistia on November 11, 2005
    XD

    The French Maid costume was freaking hilarious!
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