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By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 26, 2005
    That's not the way to do it Hiei no himo-sama! Bad Hiei! But at least he's starting to have feelings for her!

    About those fangirls... yeah they're mean. I'm just glad that it takes Altar forever to get angry over something!
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  • From ryukotsusei on July 26, 2005
    Ah I love how dominant Hiei is, yet gentle at the same time. Awesome chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
    love the keiko and hiei story its good i cat wait till they become a pair and i wonder how long itll take kurama to find out about hiei's little obsession
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 25, 2005
    Ooo! They're getting closer and closer! Go Hiei no himo-sama! (Hiei the something-master) ^___^;; Keiko's going to like him a lot.....

    *sighs*

    Yeah, not many people like Hiei with Keiko... you know that one-shot, Trembling? Altar of Wishes was flamed for it at ffn! Flamed and threatened over a pairing! Fangirls make me want to kill!
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  • From ANON - midnight rose on July 21, 2005
    super funny new chapter. and i see your point now i know your right hiei would never do that under the curret condtions. but i still got the efect i wanted, to throw off some one and seems the fox boy is the one on the wild goose chase. can't wait till the next one and thank you a millions
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  • From ANON - InTheShadows on July 21, 2005
    The story is going great so far. I was kinda disappointed that it stopped at the 4th chapter. I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON I WANNA KNOW WHAT HIEI SAYS TO GENKAI!!! >< But patience is a virtue so I shall wait! Well update soon!!! ^^

    -InTheShadows.
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on July 20, 2005
    I'm alive. Dear god... in the mist of me being tired and wanting to drop dead, I can say that your fic picked me up. Seriously. I have several pet pairings and Hiei/Keiko is one of them. I could not tell myself to not click one of those and I could not tell myself to not write one of those!
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  • From ANON - Deb on July 20, 2005
    Hiei and Keiko are one of my favorite couples.
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  • From ANON - midnight rose on July 20, 2005
    please write another chapter it is a really good story. I love the kekio/hiei pairing I think it is majorly cute. And a request, can you have yusuke get beat up by hiei in front of everyone for makeing a commet about kekio. leaveing everyone confused.
    if not ok but please write more, it is really really good. thank you's a millions.
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  • From ANON - Jade Tokier on July 19, 2005
    Yanno what? I have been studying Spanish for four years so I probably know as much Spanish as you know English. I could not imagine coming to a dominantly Spanish site and trying to write a full out story in that language! I just couldn't! My applauds to you sweetheart. You are brave and you just plain rule! BTW great story so far! I love it!
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 19, 2005
    Hiei and Keiko... sitting in a tree~ee! That song's getting a little old. The pairing isn't though... I could read a thousand Hiei/Keiko fanfics!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2005
    good story i cant wait for more^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2005
    like the story hope theres more to come ^^
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 16, 2005
    Ooo~oo~oo! Teh sex-eh-ness! I love Hiei/Keiko pairings!
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