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Reviews for Demons must be some bad joke of a crazy goddess!

By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - Frosty D (u know!) on July 31, 2005
    Hey... it's me Frost Dragon! I still exist! I love what I have read so far! So now that Kurama and Hiei are warded, they won't be messing with Kazu-chan huh? This fic is so funny!
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on July 29, 2005
    ACK!
    Sorry Kazzy chan!(Bows)
    Meant it as a shorter form of kitsune! Ohhhh, me and my ideotik mind sometimes!
    I will read through it once again and kill this blastered error out, of course you are right, stupid me!!!
    Forgot that little fakt about kitsune or foxes in general (Hungs her head in shame)
    ARGH, now I am angry of myself!

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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on July 29, 2005
    Oh no...Hiei marked Kuwa...and Kuwa is hidding and realizes what he did.....oh man...I love this story!! Please update soon!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on July 29, 2005
    This quite funny, and I am enjoying it.
    But the only complaint is calling Kurama kit.

    A kit is a young fox. Kurama's current form (the redhead) may be young while his spirit is over 1,000 years old but if Kurama is old enough to go into heat then he's too old to be a kit.
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 29, 2005
    Poor Kazuma.... two demons that want Kazuma for a mate! I wonder if he could trick them into sleeping with each other somehow... never mind. Ignore me.
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  • From ANON - Cammi on July 28, 2005
    Hey doing good, coulod you possable have it were Kazuma gets both of them cues we all know Kazuma is a suger high teen whom has needs!
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  • From ANON - Cammi on July 26, 2005
    Hey Chicky its not nice to have a cliff ahanger like taht Please finish it before you drive me crazy!
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on July 24, 2005
    Thank you, Thank you! Thank you for making Kazuma nticing the scents the guys were giving off.

    Kazuma can smell things that normal humans can't. That was shown WWAAAAAAAAYYYY back in the begining of the series at Genkai's tournament. Not only did Kuwabara sence a evil presence (Rando) but it smelled it too.

    Graphic novel 4, page page 10=
    Yusuke='Cat got your tongue, Kuwabara? Is going one-on-one freakin' you out?"

    Kazuma= "No, it's a feeling...a BAD feeling. Something's wrong....something I've sensed since we left teh forest. It's like... like some savage beast or monster's lurking nearby.

    Yusuke=(thinking to himself) 'I keep forgeting, Rando's here somewhere. and he's after the Master's techniques.' (spoken=)Is this feeling coming from one of the other guys?

    Kuwabara= Yeah, probably. I can't tell which one though. there's nuthin' obvious... but I can smell it, y'know...."

    Let's not forget that this conversation happened in the pitch black room that Genkai held the semi-finals in. While Yusuke couldn't see in the darkness, Kuwabara could thanks to his high awareness.


    What that showed is that Kazuma's spirit awareness helps him feel things but heightened his senses as well. That one scene during Genkai's tournament showed that Kazuma's sight and sense of smell go far beyound tha norm.

    Keep up the ggod work.


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  • From KuwaLover on July 24, 2005
    Ah, I am really loving this story!! Wow...poor Kuwa! hahaha. Oh man, Hiei and Kurama are gonna go at it, aren't they? Who can Kuwa turn to? Maybe Yusuke can help him figure this all out ^_^ hahaha. Excellent work and update soon!!
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 24, 2005
    Poor Kazu-kun! The boy's being hassled no matter where he runs!
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 24, 2005
    Kurama's just wrong yo'! He's sad little kit!
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  • From Suryallee7104 on July 23, 2005
    Believe me! I dont take them wrong!
    I will work over the last one again, sometimes somthing sounds good to me and later I find out when I read it that it is just the opposite of before!
    Darn it, I work over them sooo often but I find ever something new to correkt!
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on July 23, 2005
    I love ch two so please don't take the corrections wrong. I know that English isn't your native tounge and just want to help.


    >>"Kurama, what have you drink? You can tell me.”
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on July 23, 2005
    CH. one
    :) I can tell the difference now that the most obvious mistakes have been corrected. There are still a few though=

    1) Artefacts= Don't feel bad on this one, I cheated and pulled out a dictionary for the correct spelling-Artifact

    2) quote>>First there was this stupid asshole of a rich human. He had the idea to make the shorter demons sister to his personal pearl-cow.
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  • From KuwaLover on July 23, 2005
    Oh, I like this! A bit confusing at certain parts, but I got what you're getting at. This will defintly be an interesting story! I can just tell! ^_^. Please update soon!!
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