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Reviews for Debts

By : Villain
  • From ANON - ibuki on April 29, 2013
    Amazing simply amazing. I was left in awe at yusuke's raw display of "affection" might i say. ^^;
    While i was reading the end i was pondering if Hiei would save Kurama (i was hoping that he wouldn't). Heh it was delicious in a possessive way, loved it! :D
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  • From ANON - ryan kitsune on July 22, 2006
    that was so awsome ....poor kurama!!! my question is wheres the rest of the story? wat would heie do if he found out about his lovers debt or the way kurama was being treated? theres just too much left to the imagination!!!!
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  • From on February 04, 2006
    *cries*
    Poor Kurama. . .

    You HAVE to add another chapter to this. I've read Faux Pas, Mirror Mirror, and the one with Karasu (can't remember name) and LOVED them all. But this one I ADORE. Either make a sequal, or add another chapter. Or I shall have to kill you. . . (j/k)
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  • From ANON - You will never know...Cause my mother would kill me! on November 07, 2005
    Poor beautiful, pretty, sexy Kurama...
    Please ad more chapters! But PLEASE have merci with
    Kurama! Anyway...I loved it!! MORE, MORE!!
    P.S.
    I have no idea how to spell merci..errr...mercy...No! Wait...
    ummm...mersie? No! It gotta be either mercy or merci!
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  • From on November 05, 2005
    ...wow...that was...kinda harsh. but it was so good at the same time! i loved the change you made to Yusuke's personality for this fic. it worked out so well with how you incorporated Yusuke saving Kurama's life. great job!
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  • From EmbersEye on September 02, 2005
    I don't quite know how you can do it, but these dark errotic stories of yours are always amazing. I just truly wish that you would follow one of these up with Hiei kicking Yusuke's ass, or more Kurama torture by having Yusuke constantly, lewdly, and obviously blackmailing him even in the presence of the other team members. Are you you getting my drift? I don't quite have it in me to write something like that, I can't write Yusuke that OC (in my opinion) just because it goes against my YYH morals, but I can certainly read and wish. Awaiting your next installment, Fuzzy
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  • From WindCharmer on August 06, 2005
    Well, let me first say I have not had the urge to even review a story in quite a while. After reading this, I had to compliment it. :D At first I was thinking, "Oh a one-shot, so if it's bad, I won't have to read on." But I found that my bitter approach was wrong. I like fox torture. Something about pretty boys crying is soothing. But I DO like the ending a lot. Just the thought of him trying to think about Hiei, and that would kind of make everything all right was sweet. I would love to see a sequel to this. Now I have to wnoder if the review I just wrote made any sense.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on August 05, 2005
    This was,well "wow" I have no words for it yet read it twice.I know you only wanted this to be a one-shot yet I think a second
    chapter is well worth it.Maybe having Hiei come see and rescue the fox from Yusuke,putting Yusuke in his place alittle with some
    Hiei rump action of his own.And to Kurama's relief having Hiei not angry with him with a cuddle in the end.
    Anyway, hope you concider the suggestion and will keep watch to see.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 05, 2005
    Wow..that was just beautifully sinister, and for lack of a better word - dirty. I loved it! You really have a good grasp on the erotic scenes and I can see them perfectly in my mind. And I don't mind the fox torture - there seems to be a whole contingent of fox torture fans out there, there's just somethintg about Kurama that creates that need! Yusuke is deliciously evil - whatever else you have needs to be posted! (and I understand about the wincing - sometimes I read my own stuff and wonder if I've gone to far...then I think - NAH)

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Yu Yu Girl on August 05, 2005
    Wow! That was totally brilliant - scary but brilliant can't wait for your next fic!
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