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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on September 11, 2005
    *Gwaking* Oh... how could they do that to Yusuke!!! Mind you...I greatly appreciated the mental image. :P Hmm... can't think of which story this tied into... but gimme time, i'll figure it out! ^-^ *Gasps* an epoluge!!! yay!!! HURRY UP PEOPLE AND REVIEW GODAMNIT!!!
    This was probably my most favorit chapter- loved how Kurama got revenge- loved how Hiei got to 'watch' *snickering* Though i can't help but wonder... will this turn into a three some? couldn't care less either way- both are fine, but when you thorw Yusuke into the mix, things can't help but get exciting. ~_^
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on September 11, 2005
    Very cute and imaginative, with wonderful characterizations and details. I can't wait for the epilogue -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Shuichi Shindou on September 11, 2005
    WOOHOO!!!! thats awesome. Kurama a girl is funny... Hehe... My favs part was hiei talking about "his fox doesn't have ovaries" and yusuke "like you are the same boy in the inside" and kurama all like "I have ovaries!" lmao so cute so funny!
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  • From ANON - Draikitha on September 10, 2005
    Well. I read this story on Fan fiction and over here, and since fanfiction screws up my reviews I'll just review here. ;P
    Plus if it helps with review count right? :ninja:
    Wonderful story you two, I liked it alot, and while it was different, it wasn't the bad kind so I think you did good.
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  • From kogaluver on September 08, 2005
    Wow! Hiei can be so hot and sexy. I liked how you psyched out Kurama into thinking Hiei was going to take him, but Hiei only wanted to be on top of Kurama while he was taken. Very nice. God, Boton is such a dizzy freak, lol. Sometimes I'l just like to slap some sense into her, ya know. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From mhmartini on September 07, 2005
    Hmmm, I like this story a lot. How did I miss it before? I really enjoyed reading it though. Will Kurama's affliction, although temporary, have any relapses? That would make life interesting.

    I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on September 07, 2005
    You're gunna make me wait!!! Gah!!! Evil, evil woman!!! ^-^ On the otehr hand, loved it as always. *Laughing* Poor, poor Boton. She's already on the edge what with Yusuke and Koenma... but her poor sanity is at stake here! :P Looking forward to chapter five!!! Cheese and wine for all!
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on September 07, 2005
    AHHH!
    I mean Germans, not geremans!
    Stupid me!
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on September 07, 2005
    IEEKS!
    I mean food!Wie Essen! Und nicht fuß! Sorry, without my ws word I am sooo lost sometimes. More so when I try to write a reviuw meanwhile I laugh my head of!
    I love your story, I really do! It makes me laugh and thats good!
    (Colleen studiert Deutsch seit drei Jare im Uni ;) ) Hofenlich, finden Sie es gern :D (und, hofenlich sind meiner Deutsch nicht so schecht…)
    Studiert Deutsch seit drei Jahren an der Uni/ Hoffentlich Finden Sie es gut( Nicht gern!) / Und hoffentlich /ist/ mein/ Deutsch nicht so schlecht.
    It´s not so bad as you think, German is a HARD language to learn! I hope that helps a little. I have the same problems all the time with the English, I think English is easier to learn as German, and I dont mean with it British English(Oxford). In the German language you have for everything a different word with mostly three different meanings and besides that they mostly have some Slang meanings too, so its sometimes really hard to understand and learn.
    I have gone to school 10 years and cant write my own language correctly by now, funny ne? The most geremans do, because you need a study of 6 to 8 years to learn all of the language correctly.
    Oh, can write corectly thats not wht I mean, but the grammar rules of German are one of the worst in the world. Here they have changed the rules lately, my daughter learns them now in school, but I think its bullshit, because they messed the language up more as before and not made it easier!
    Anyway, I hope you have fun with it and dont worry, its going better with practise.
    Need some help?
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on September 07, 2005
    Very interesting idea, and quite well done, too. I look forward to the epilogue -- keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on September 06, 2005
    Great chapter, yummy lemon. Update soon.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 06, 2005
    Announcer: And now we return to BlueUtopiah, who is currently on the floor fanning herself after reading hcolleen & shadow's wonderful lemon!

    No, really, that was hot...and I find it so hard to write lemons. Does it just pour out of you, ready made? Because you guys make it look easy! I loved this chapter - Kurama returned to his wonderful bishie form and there was a surprise uke Hiei in the end (no pun intended).
    Cheers for a second lemon! And what are you guys going to do to Yusuke?

    BTW, I wasn't upset at all about the mood swings, I was just poking fun (most likely because I am a moody bitch myself).

    Huzzah!

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  • From kogaluver on September 02, 2005
    Shit! I thought I already reviewed chappie 3, sorry for my tardiness. Kurama rocks when he gets all quite and polite. Because we all know how fucking evil and deadly he is, yummmmmy. I can't wait for Kurama to have his wicked way with Hiei. I'm glad to know though that Hiei prefers Kurama as a male, and as well he should. It would be so funny to keep having Yusuke eyeballing Kurama's boobs. I love the way Kurama reacts to it, ya know, all pissy. This whole fic is cute, funny and priceless. Keep it going girl!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on September 02, 2005
    *squees* well.. i like really weird ass things.. and i totally have to hand it to the both of you. LOL. it may have taken me forever to get to reading this..... but.. I DID FINALLY GET TO IT!! lol. and i really look forward to seeing what you do with it! it's great! SOOO amusing! and well written. ^^ and i love how you've written the characters. heh..even if Kura is a girl.. which.. is kinda funny... interesting.. ironic.. and sad for him all at once. so yes! Ra likes it! LoL. as usual. ^_^

    *hugs and kisses*
    Ra
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on September 01, 2005
    What! What did you do to Yusuke!? Oh... kami now i'm infinitly curious. I curse your vaguness!!! But other then that- great chapter as always. I so look forward to seeing Kurama repay both his debts. ~_^ And actually no... I can't tell who wrote what, to me your styles blend so seamlessly... either that or i'm just to into the story to notice!
    Whelp- 'till next chapter!
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