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By : hColleen
  • From BlueUtopiah on September 01, 2005
    OK ok ok, now I understand the moodiness and the neediness - it's part of the potion! And the neediness is necesary so that Hiei and Kurama's relationship could progress.
    You have a fine eye for detail and really portray the scene without being too wordy. I like your choice of words too (mollified being one example), you have a great sense of vocabulary, and the dialogue is very in-character.

    Please do continue! and yea for lemons!
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on August 31, 2005
    Here, Foot! (Smiles) Like it! Want to read more, I would give you a cooky if I could send it through a computer. Hope that helps!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on August 29, 2005
    Not to shabby for off your style of writting,and can't wait to see how you handle a lemon.Though I wonder,will it be as Hiei and a female Kurama or as themselves?Maybe one of each mm! Can't wait to see and hope its soon
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on August 28, 2005
    hey, suddenly got in the yyh mood today and this was the first story on the page that interested me.. ^___^ i must say, i'm enjoying it, amazingly even though kurama got changed into a girl! the way you've written it is actually believable and i like the descriptions for kurama's disowning of his body (lol) and getting used to it and such, so much different than most fics that turn guys into girls... which is a GOOD thing!! omgoddess, thanks!! ^___^ can't wait to see where you're going with this, and for more hiei/kurama goodness ^__~
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  • From EmbersEye on August 28, 2005
    Long time no see. I haven't been looking up this section of AFF.net for a while - glad I decided to check it out. This is actually one of my favorite of your fics. Please do continue it. One thing that always irks me about these gender-bending fics is that the female forms are always so ridiculously wimpy, BUT this fic actually gives a reason for all of that, or it at least implies a reason. I'm very grateful for that seeing as there are definitely ass-kicking chicks out in the world. Chow.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 28, 2005
    I really liked the banter between Hiei and Kurama "If I told you, they woudn't be secrets". That whole conversation made me snicker. I love hiei's gentleness toward Kurama, and I especially like Hiei's "apartment". Go for it - write more! I want to see how this turns out!
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  • From kogaluver on August 28, 2005
    Hiei is sooooo cute and sweet in this fic. I love this side of Hiei. I felt so proud when Hiei stood up and protected Kurama from those idiots. But then it was just as fun to see Kurama give it to them as well. This is really such a great fic. I'm glad I gave this pairing another chance. But it was only for you and Shadow. I love saying that "Shadow" what cool word. God I'm so queer. Anyway, I hope to see some artwork. And gravity does have its purpose. Tooo yummy, ladies. Looking forward to more and more and more. CYA
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on August 28, 2005
    Yay an update!!! I've been checking back for one every day. ^-^ Loved how Kurama handled the... others guys. ~_^ Also, I think how you have Kuramam sudenly uncertain where before he was always so on top of things- fits well with him being female. How some of us are always irrationaly parinoid about the littest things. ^-^ well, that's how I see it anyways- keep it up! I will await your next update.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on August 28, 2005
    I liked the game of wit in the cafe, that was fun. You're also doing a great job of showing how hard it is to get used to a sudden gender switch. Yea, Kurama must be starting to feel better if she was able to beat up some bullies! It's cute that Hiei is only now starting to realized that he likes Kurama, but I have a feeling that he prefers a fox-boy to a fox-girl. If we get two lemons, will one be with Kurama's female body and one with his male body? Please?
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  • From ANON - Kettricken on August 28, 2005
    Tee hee, this is fun. =D
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  • From ANON - CrimsonFox on August 28, 2005
    Your bribery worked... but unfortunately all I can say is that I really, really like the story... sorry, that is actually all I have. So, please, keep going.
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  • From ANON - BWinner(Not signed in) on August 28, 2005
    Lol, this was awsome! I couldn't stop laughing, seriously! You have to continue this, please!
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  • From Suryallee7104 on August 27, 2005
    Its getting nicer and hotter too.
    I will see how this turns out in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on August 27, 2005
    I love this, it's really cute. Update soon.
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  • From kogaluver on August 24, 2005
    Wow! That was so great and so funny. You know Kurama/Hiei pairings are my least favorite, but I promised I would read this regardless. I am soooo glad I did. I can't wait for more. The 'hormonal' Kurama lines are hysterical. I laughed my ass off. I loved that Yusuke couldn't keep his eyes off of Kurama's boobs. Too funny! I love that Hiei is being so sweet and understanding and supportive. That's a nice change. You and Shadow have done a wonderful job. Is Shadow going to draw Kurama as a girl. And if she does, I want to know where I can see them. I lost the last link to her website, my bad . I'll email you tomorrow. I've been swamped getting my daughter ready for school which starts Wednesday. Talk to ya later and once again KICK ASS JOB TO YOU AND SHADOW!!!!!
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