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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - none on October 21, 2005
    i never get tired of of your writing. i always look forward to the coming chapters of your stories. they are amazing. keep writing you are one of the arthurs who take writing to a whole different level. i agree i think it was best to end it there, the story was amazing, AND awesome lemon, made me horny, lol. keep writing, ill support you!!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 22, 2005
    i just wanted to agree with kogas hentai luver. yusuke is perfect for switching between seme and uke roles. i, too, dont care who (except for kuwabara *shudders* that's just nasty....) he gets it from as long as he's getting some. preferably from hiei, because hiei is the man and my fav character. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 22, 2005
    of course, it's ok!*hugs back then proceeds to go into fangirl mode* that was freakin' awesome! this so going to be my favorite chapter, until further notice. first it was all sweet with hiei making sure yusuke was positive in his decision (why do i feel like i spelled that totally wrong?) to that wonderfully hot bout of malexmale smex and fluff. and boy, was it hawt! :drools: i love the way yusuke was the blushing virgin one mintue and forceful seme-wannabe the next then back again. and the part when he said "you have your orders, get to work!" had me cracking up. i feel kinda sorry for them to have another mission so soon but then i don't, seeing how it'll probably just further my enjoyment of this story. and i'm rambling, so i'll take that as my cue for me to take my arse to bed. great work, i'm soooooo looking foward to your next update. so until next time , ja.
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  • From kogaluver on September 21, 2005
    Go Kurama! for helping these two break the ice. Wow. I love how Hiei has to show Yusuke how to do everything, yet he wants Yusuke to be seme. Totally cool. The lemon was really hot and sweat. And you know I like a lot of foreplay, so thanks ^_^ Shit! Between Kurama and Hiei, I don't know who I prefer with Yusuke. I guess it doesn't matter. As long as Yusuke is either being fucked or fucking someone, I'm happy. I'm such a Yusuke whore, LOL. I liked the way you used the cannon storyline in order to lead into the lemon between Hiei and Yusuke. Nicely done and very refreshing.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 20, 2005
    Wow, that was wonderfully hot, I just read it all in one shot, and I loved it! I have a soft spot for the Maze Castle storyline, and I liked seeing your representation - but, dude, chapter 5 was hot (did I say that?), yeah, hot.

    :reaches for the drool bucket again:
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 19, 2005
    nice lemon
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 19, 2005
    Very nicely done. The lemon was perfect, as is the characterizations. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 14, 2005
    nice i can't wait to see how you break away from the cannon
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 14, 2005
    good chapter. i liked the little chat between kurama and hiei and the way kurama is sorta playing matchmaker for the two. and now that the fighting is over, hiei can explore and examine these feelings he's been having. so i'm very much looking foward to the next chappie. oh and nice title for the story too, btw. ^__^
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  • From kogaluver on September 11, 2005
    Chapters 2 & 3

    I'm always so amazed at how calm, cool and sexy Kurama is during his fights. He's so calculating and deadly, but also hot and yummy. That was one of my favorite scenes in YuYu.

    As for Kuwa's fight, I didn't really care for his fight in the anime. I thought they dragged it out way too much, but you shortened it to where I really enjoyed reading it. I loved all of Hiei's inner thoughts and struggles regarding Yusuke. I think Hiei needs his butt pinched. He's such a chibi! I can't wait for Hiei and Yusuke's battle. Although I loved Kurama and Yusuke's battles, Hiei's was my favorite. I loved how he cuts his opponants down within the blink of an eye. Too cool! Yusuke's fight will be cool too. But what I'm really waiting for is some 'special' time between Yusuke and Hiei ^_~ See ya next chappie.
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on September 10, 2005
    No problem and,
    Danke…dieses is sehr lange, ja? Und, danke fur mein Deutsche corectieren…es ist seit 6 jare seit Uni fur mich.
    (Danke, (I think you meant with the folowing ) dauerte das zu lange/ Or ( oder)/ hat das jetzt zu lange gedauert? ( without the yes, because the question stands in German for its own. you dont have to question your question with a insertet yes to make the positive form out of it.)
    The rest is nearly correkt! Es ist 6 jahre her seid der Uni für mich.
    Wow for six years without any praktise you know quite much. It is hard to remember all when you have no praktise, we use to think we will ever remember what we once learned, wrong! The most we forget in a year without praktise, I see that by myself often.
    I am glad you took my correktion of it not wrong. And besides that, Yes! It was to long, for me but dont give anything about my rampling because I should shuut up and write on my own ones!
    Love it!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 08, 2005
    hiei's little bout of jealousy in the beginning was cute. youe did real good with decribing the fight this chapter. i dint even remember the hellcats until you mentioned them. anyway, lovely work. always looking foward to more.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 08, 2005
    nice i love the dialogue you made up
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 08, 2005
    *chuckles* I can't write dialogue myself, seems to be my nemesis. Another good chapter, I can't wait for the next one to see even more of what is going on in Hiei's head. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 30, 2005
    wow the chapter and the poem was good
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