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Reviews for Two Months in the Forest

By : cillaxox
  • From BlueUtopiah on January 15, 2006
    Wow. That was just...hot. As I've said before, the voyeuristic Hiei is very amusing, but it's even better now that Kuwabara knows (and that he's kind of turned on by it). I sense that there are some surprises in store for Hiei (but he really does need to mind his own business).

    The entire opening scene where Kurama has Kuwabara control his ki was very well-written, and wonderfully soaked in sensuailty. You characterize Kurama wonderfully, and I'm still mopping up my brain from the inages you painted in the following scene.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on January 13, 2006
    That was so fucking hot. What a great 69 description. Hiei is such a perv, lol. I loved that Kuwa knew Hiei was there and it turned him on. Good for Kuwa to get one up on the hot little firefly. So much goodness here. Damn, Kurama's hot as hell.
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  • From ANON - Katzztaer on January 13, 2006
    (Glares at the redheads) You ate the cookies I EARNED!!?

    Please excuse me while I draw this curtain for a few iminutes.....
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    (curtain draws back revealing two redheads in stocks and unable to ... touch a certain body part at's standing at attention.)

    Perhaps that will teach you not to eat a woman's well-earned cookies!!


    on to my review=
    They seem to be in character to me. Even Kuwabara being devious fits.





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  • From ANON - Maeve on January 04, 2006
    You write very well. Your style is good, you don't make the errors that plague so many authors, and the characters are recognisable. Very impressive.

    Besides that, the story has definately got my attention. I'll confess to being a perv, but I need smut with substance, preferably some psychological depth. You're doing great. I'll be looking forward to more.

    ...I hope this is encouraging you...
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 31, 2005
    I have to say that I'm not a fan of the Kurama/Kuwabara pairing, but your story is very well-written and the yaoi scenes are extremely hot - I'm really enjoying this. And the vouyeristic Hiei is highly amusing. That last scene where Hiei and Kurama were "having words" and Kurama flicked out his rose whip at Hiei - it was written so well, I could see every part of that perfectly.

    Also, Kurama extending his hand through the waterfall at Kuwabara - beautiful. I'm loving this.
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on December 31, 2005
    Arg! Hiei's a little perve! Perve! It's great to read from you now that I'm back from my vacation! *stuff Kuwa in her saddle bag*
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  • From ANON - JovianWolfGirl on December 31, 2005
    My, my Hiei sounding like he getting a little green with envy. So what going to happen on the next chapter? I hope a bit of HieixKazuma. I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on December 30, 2005
    Sounds like Hiei is jealous.... of Kurama or Kuwabara I'm not sure.... yet! Although he does seen interested that Kuwabara was acting submissive.
    That would explain why Kurma is defensive about Hiei spying on them .. or should I say spying on Kuwabara.

    "Kuwabra looked The fox tried to pull his lover’s tempting lips close again, but the carrot-top resisted. The younger boy’s attention was focused elsewhere. He was looking in the direction of the trees, staring through them rather than at them. A curious expression had taken hold of his face. He abruptly looked away from the tree line and laughed. "

    I suspect that Kuwabara noticed Hiei then, didn't he? Kuwabara already knows that Hiei's spying on him & Kurama.


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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on December 30, 2005
    Go Kuwa! Give Kurama some lovin, lol. Kurama's a great teacher. He could teach me a few things. ^_^ I'm thinking Hiei's getting a bit jealous and just may want to try out our carrot-topped fool. I wonder how Kurama would react to that. He's such a perv. He'd probably want a threesoe, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From YaoiGoddess on November 22, 2005
    *glomps* I love you! And I can't wait for the rest of this awesome story!
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on November 15, 2005
    I think Kuwa is one lucky son of bitch to be getting some Kurama loving. And I think it was fitting that Kuwa got all the attention and Kurama went to take care of his own needs. Afterall, Kuwa's the one that's been getting the shit kicked out of him during his training. I'm hoping that eventually Kuwa will pay back Kurama and wouldn't it be hysterical for Hiei to want to reward Kuwa too, especially after seeing what Kurama did. Hiei was never one to be bested in anything, ya know. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on November 11, 2005
    (fans self) I don't care if it was one sided that was hot! I absoultly loved it! ^_^. I can't wait for more kurama/kuwa lovin! ^_^ I really love this story! Keep it going! Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^.
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  • From ANON - JovianWolfGirl on November 11, 2005
    hey nice chapter. I love the KuramaxKazuma even if it was just a one side lemon part. Anyway, I like the update.
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  • From ANON - Love to be Anon on November 11, 2005
    ::claps hands:: If there was that kind of motavation in real life, I'm sure the world would be a much better place. ::blushes:: I never would of thought to use a rose to threaten...umm...certain aspects of the male and who knew Kurama would be so possessive of Kuwa so quickly. I like the nice slow pace as well instead of just jumping right into the sex scene. Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on November 11, 2005
    I completely understand about needing to take your time for future chapters.

    Ah, I loved the scene of Kurama tossing a rose that embedde into the ground dangerously close to Hiei's AHEM jewels and the warning that Kurama gave him . Sounds like he's getting a tad bit possessive lol.
    I like the idea of Kazuma Kuwabara getting around. Although that was Kazuma's first time with another guy, he's been with girls. It fits his profile when you think of it.

    Yusuke Urameshi may have gotten in a lot of street fights and his ma had dealings with the Yakuza, But Kazuma Kuwabara it the one all the officail sites say is involved in street gangs,well leads. One site even said he was a gang lord. It seems believable that gang member could loose his virginity by the age of 14.

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