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Reviews for To Say Goodbye

By : Jeichan
  • From 66Hiei08 on January 10, 2009
    I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I loved how you brought Kuronue in. I find him a very intriguing, if little known about, character.
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  • From 66Hiei08 on December 29, 2008
    Wow. You really know how to weave a plot! Yes, this is a compliment. :o) Please update soon! You got me hooked.
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  • From ANON - papapapuffy on September 07, 2008
    I hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 01, 2007
    Ku-chan, eh? I believed you for some chapters, I hoped...but it's better to name him Ka-chan, or Ka-teme, perhaps! He's a manipulative bastard. And I hoped even for Akiko's child...so many memories about an unborn child...but when you wrote about demons forcing themselves, well, I saw the hint and my hopes are vain again. What I don't understand is how Yoko can be in that Rosie's body (you didn't give her name, so this is my pet name for her, not original, I know) but I'm so happy I got to see him again. Just don't let Ka-teme win in the long run, please. Before I forgot to tell you, your story and style are awesome! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Sweetnsexy89 on August 31, 2006
    Awesome story! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - SweetMisery1 on November 05, 2005
    I absolutly love this story...continue soon!
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  • From ANON - phoenixfirekitsune on October 29, 2005
    You have to update this story. It's so good. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - krystle on October 23, 2005
    I liked it and I will be honest and say that it brought tears to my eyes; I don't usually cry at all but, this story shook me up. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on October 21, 2005
    You killed Keiko?? !! Why? wow you like to kill off everyone don't you.Yet I can't stop reading and want to know more and when you update next(hope soon)Now you'll have Hiei and Yusuke sitting there with far off looks on their faces.Now what
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  • From ANON - mhmartini on October 14, 2005
    It's me again. I forgot to tell you something before. SPOILER! The scene where Hiei finally breaks free, only to feel Kurama's life extinguish has really stuck with me. You wrote that very we, and the imagery it created is in myrom time to time. It was very touching. That and when Hiei enters the hospital room. Very well done! I just wanted to let you know that your words are following me around. It's a compliment, trust me!
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  • From ANON - mhmartini on October 14, 2005
    Too sad! Whether you continue this story or make a new one, please keep writing. If there is a sequel/follow up story, post the title in the last chapter of this one so unobservant people (Okay, me) can find it.

    That was a sweet ending. I feel really bad for the momma fox, though. I know Hiei is a painless kiler when he wants to be, but still. I think that's just the mood I am in now.

    And yet I hold this hope that the baby fox is Kurama reincarnated, and he will be able to regain enough power to take his old form (Shuuichi) again. But that's just my incoherentness peeking through. Your story makes me wish the brother brings back Karasu again, just so the crow can die a slower and more painful death this time around. Romantic sadist, yep, that's me.

    I really enjoyed this story. Please continue writing.
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  • From ANON - Clara on October 13, 2005
    Really love the story but I can't believe you killed Kurama off! Cruel! lol! Erm.... I don't mind if you start a new story or continue this one but just make sure you let us know what happens to Hiei ok! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - mhmartini on October 09, 2005
    I am having technical difficulties signing in at the moment, but I wanter to leave you a review.

    *sobs* That can't be the end! Kurama has to meet with Hiei again somehow so they can settle what is between them. For both of them to long for each other so strongly, then to have that be it is too, too sad!

    This was an excellent update, as usual. This story is quite well crafted, and I feel very close to the characters. You bring them to life for the readers, and for that I compliment you. I am looking forward to your update. Even if that is the end, and there is no happy ending, I will still love this story. Of course, I'd lova a happy ending even more...
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  • From ANON - Nikkler on October 09, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO you can't KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!! NOT AFTER EVERYTHING THEY WENT THROUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::takes deep breaths:: I'm calm now... at least I keep telling myself that. THis is a great fan fic. Please continue and update SOON!!!! HUGGLES
    NIKKLER
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  • From EmbersEye on October 04, 2005
    An interesting concept. Please continue and let us all see where you're headed with this.
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