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By : hColleen
  • From BlueUtopiah on September 25, 2005
    OMG, I loved this story! You really know how to write a steamy lemon! The hotness between Yusuke and Kurama is just too much (and despite earlier reviews - I encourage you to make them sluts - I like their agreement - it's just a fun thing, no strings attached!)

    The description in the lemon was exquisite, of course, I snickered all day about the whole cucumber thing - Yusuke is really a dirty boy, and it's wonderful - hey, he wore Kurama out, and that's no easy task, he IS a Youko after all.

    Very well-written, I enjoyed this alot!
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on September 24, 2005
    How did I survive reading this? Well... my roommate being out probably helped, hehe. You write the best first-time lemons ever. Yusuke being too shy to come out and say what he wants always gets me. And then when he does say it he's so hot and I need to break out the ice to cool down ;-D.

    I noticed Kurama kept making comments about his surpise that Yusuke took to making love so well and wasn't in pain; is that because of his demon blood and are you going to bring that out in any of the related stories you have planned? Mmm, thank you for updating so often [HUG].
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 24, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (to lazy to log in) on September 24, 2005
    Yes! You most certainly redeemed your brattiness. That was one great lemon. Kurama and Yusuke are so sexy. I like the fact that they are only going to fuck when they're both in the mood, but no emotional ties. I do believe though that eventually they will develope that emotional tie. I think they're both just kidding themselves, ya know. I loved the cucumber. I laughed my ass off. Only you could think of that. I'll have to come up with something similar, for fun, in my next chappie. Welllllllll.... I think I need to go take a cold shower now. My husband is away for the weekend and my daughter is with her father (my ex). I think I'll turn that cold shower into a hot shower and utilize my new shower massager, lol. Good thing no one is home ^_~ Thanks for the great lemon and getting me hornier than hell while my husband's away. ***brat*** I'll email you tonight.

    Love you
    KHL
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  • From ichigokun on September 22, 2005
    I love the way you're teasing me with these two well-crafted chapters. I can't wait for the third!
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  • From RChan on September 22, 2005
    You'll be writing more soon right? RIGHT!? This is getting really good and I have NEVER seen these two in a situation like this before. I need to know there will be more soon because I am really loving this fic. *Drools over Kurama and Yusuke*
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  • From kogaluver on September 21, 2005
    OMG! Another Yus/Kur. Yay you and yay for me. I love you. Kurama is such a sneaky little sly fox, isn't he? But what was so great is that Yusuke had similar thoughts about the fox. I certainly hope that Kurama teaches Yusuke EVERYTHING there is about sex, sex, sex, sex, lol. I can't wait for the chapter 3. And you are a brat for leaving off there, lol.
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  • From ANON - Shuichi Shindou on September 21, 2005
    You made them sluts.... How could you? I like yusuke/kurama kurama/yusuke relationships.. But this really wasn't good if you make them sluts. Oh I can fuck yusuke but go off and be with someone else bleh no, that isn't kurama. not in his human form. you suck
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 21, 2005
    oh nice.. Yusuke is definitely blunt and to the point when he figures out what he wants ain't he? Very good chapter, I look forward to reading the next one. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 21, 2005
    good chapter im glad everything went as planed sort of anyway
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on September 21, 2005
    [drool drool slurp] Eak! Better clean that up before the keyboard shorts out. Um, yummy. I love tender and shy Kurama, especially combined with the master gamesman. He's so focused on his part of the game that he can't see his prey is already responding. Be really funny if Yusuke thinks the fox is being shy and decides to do the seducing himself. Probably suprise Kurama so much that he'd just melt under it and let Yusuke do the leading.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 20, 2005
    OOOOOHHHH. I'm liking this one, poor Yusuke - he doesn't even know what's coming! This story has alot of potential, and I have to ask - the Hershey's Kisses thing - is that one of your faves? because I see them in alot of stories, I'm just curious. And I understand the A/N about the story going where you don't expect, it happens to me a lot. Sometimes I go with it, sometimes I have to steer it back on track, but - again - I'm loving this and I'd like to see more.

    And I'm so jealous - I write an hour a day, sometimes two, and I don't get nearly as much out as you do, you're very prolific and I'm very picky and slow.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 20, 2005
    nice
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 20, 2005
    LOL I think Kurama just may have met his match here. Excellent set up and dialogue, love the length of the chapter. I look forward to the next installment, update soon please.
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