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Reviews for Mistakes

By : hColleen
  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on May 06, 2010
    I really like this piece. I think it's delicious and slightly humorous how quickly Youko loses control of the situation. I like Kurama/Korunue pairings when they're done in a believable way and I think this is definitely believable. It is a very tasty lemon too and I was salivating over some of the imagery. You did a good job with this piece!
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on October 24, 2005
    Oh GODS that was wonderful! And [drool] the perfect explanation for why Kurama is addicted to chocolate. Can't wait for the finale.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on October 23, 2005
    That was so hot! The way Kuronue turned the tables on Yoko was priceless. So well though out. Kuronue's attitude dialogue and deception were brilliant. Yoko sure got what was coming to him! LOL
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 23, 2005
    There was waaaaaay too much squealing on my part when I saw that you put this up. And it's...wow...just, wow. I LOVE the Kurama/Kuronue pairing (and you made Kurama the uke! hee hee), I feel that Kuronue doesn't get enough face time, and you wrote him so well. The descriptions of Kurama's recations to the session were exquisite, and the entire lemon was incredibly hot - you really do have an amazing amount of talent!

    I can't wait for the epilogue, or for part 6 of the arc! You rule!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on October 23, 2005
    OMG that was so f-ing hot. I just love it when someone turns the tables on Kurama. I love the way you portrayed Kuronue. This was so good, I hope there's more. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on October 23, 2005
    That was greath!
    I like your Kuronue / Yoko pairing very much, not forget the Lemon too.
    You are a very good writer!
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