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Reviews for Frustration

By : hColleen
  • From mhmartini on November 12, 2005
    This story is very yummy so far. I really like how Kurama is submitting to and trusting Hiei. With his past, Hiei needs to be trusted. Although the last paragaph makes me crave more. I think Hiei is about to learn that he can, and does, trust Kurama. The bit with the strangulation/choking: very intimate. The trust they are sharing is more intimate than the actual sex, and I think you're doing a wonderful job of protraying the feeling beneath their lust that are fueling them.

    I look forward to your next update. You write very well and give your readers wonderful imagery to watch while your story unfolds.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on November 12, 2005
    Wow what a 3rd chapter and what an imagination you've got (very good).I'm an artist and have the image of them in the
    cave in my head,what a drawing its gonna be I hope though with everything else I'm doing right now it won't be for a while.You write very well and I think anyone while reading it can see the action in their heads.And yes nice warning but that should've been at the top
    of the story not the bottom.Can't wait for the update
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 12, 2005
    ooohh youko gets his turn
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In) on November 12, 2005
    Holy mother of all hotness... ::Fans herself:: That was beyond hot... lord the whole asphyxiation being included... and how sensual it was. Lord... I feel like I was the one beneath him. That was so awesome! Makes me wonder what the hell you have planned for Youko to do. I can't wait for the update. I actually did make it to class on time with about two minutes to spare LOL. It was worth it though. I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Neaera on November 12, 2005
    So good to see an update! ^_^
    A few typos, but that's not what I'm here for.
    I like how you had Hiei refer to Kurama's throat as his 'voice box', as there are couple of instances in the anime that he does call it as that. It only helped to show that it was, indeed, Hiei's view point.
    That was very cute!!
    Ohh....you just know how to get everyone waiting for the next update, don't you?
    Please update whenever you can.
    I wait for your next update.
    Oh...how I wait!
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  • From ANON - SweetMisery (from the cafe) on November 11, 2005
    YAY! Continue soon!!!!
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  • From kogaluver on November 10, 2005
    Chapter 2

    I love the drama and struggle Hiei is having. It really is cute how Hiei asks Kurama to be submissive so he can say thank you. It's really fun and interesting that no matter what situation Kurama finds himself into, he always manages to control the situation. He really was able to manipulate and seduce Hiei back to him so easily, not that Hiei wasn't really on to him but it's so much fun watching how it all plays out. Kurama on bottom, yay. Can't wait for the lemon.
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  • From kogaluver on November 10, 2005
    Chapter 1

    WOW! Talk about Hiei needing to relieve his stress and anger. That was totally cool. It's so much fun when Kurama gets dominated like a sweet little fox bitch. This is getting good.
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  • From ANON - neaera on November 10, 2005
    You write some of the best K/H scenes I've ever read. This fic, I'd say, is aptly titled. ^_^
    To get to this review...
    You have a very distinctive style and I see you improving with every fic you write. You also have some of the cutest smut moments between Kurama and Hiei, however brief they may be. I'm always looking forward to reading some of your work. I haven't been reading fanfics lately, not as much as I would like to. I'm reviewing as soon as I got a chance to.
    This fic hasn't disappointed me, either. I like how you mentioned that Hiei only insults Kurama when he's upset over something. That was a very interesting touch to the chapter.
    The part where you mentioned 'Hiei glaring at the sky to be too blue'....brought a mental image of Hiei, sulking, pouting, glaring at the sky. (Aaahh...mucho yum!)
    This is a review for both the chapters, as I just got to reading them together.

    I look forward to your next update. Please update whenever you can.

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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on November 10, 2005
    You are truely wicked. Please don't make us wait till the fourth chapter for the good stuff. Great chapter, update soon.
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  • From ANON - MoonLightFight on November 09, 2005
    I love this story! I love how you got Hiei's character! Please tell me the lemons coming soon! And will they have turns being on top! I love a uke Kurama as much as the next girl but I love it when Hiei's uke too! I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 09, 2005
    great chapter i like kurama's perverted nature

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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 09, 2005
    aaaahhh that was so sweeet in a hot im gonna kick your ass sorta way. Either way i loved it.
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on November 09, 2005
    Frustation is an apt title for this piece... it perfectly reflects the pent up emotions of both protagonists. Is there an easy resolution? I wonder.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Has To Go To Class in like 15 Min) on November 09, 2005
    Okay so I am leaving for college here in about 15 minutes, saw that this was updated and just had to read! I loved this chapter... it was quite interesting... I love fight scenes that get a little... shall we say hot? Hehehe I also liked the fact that Hiei is so damn tempermental at the moment and the whole "make me" scene I could so picture. Very well done, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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