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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 22, 2005
    I love Genkai and her straightforward approach to training. That rocks that you’ve written over 52,000 words this month. How many were in this story? We wu~uv you Colleen-chan!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 22, 2005
    lovely its almost time for the moment i've been waaiting for
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 22, 2005
    You know - I liked that chapter even though there was no lemon - it was chunky, alot happened and I enjoyed it all.

    Hiei is still faster though, and I don't need Botan's room to play with him - I'll take him anyway I can get him *wink*

    Sorry, there would be a longer review, but I need to go pack (I'm currently being yelled at by the bf). Huzzah!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 21, 2005
    nice im guessing that room was like a bdsm room with all the bonding type toys and stuff.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on November 21, 2005
    You are such a fucking tease! That's all I'm gonna say ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 21, 2005
    Holy Hell do those boys have the worse luck or what?? It's a conspiracy I tell you, Fate is sitting up there laughing her ass off going lets see how close to ripping the clothes off of each other before A.) Scaring the shit out of them or B.) Providing an untimely interuption that's guaranteed to have one of them complaining there has to be a law against this kind of sexual frustration. *Chuckles* I'm sure it'll work out for the guys. Or I'll be making a visit to go talk with Fate about her ideas of amusement lol Hey, your pen sounds kinda cool. I haven't seen one like that but you've got me curious now. Not sure how much good one like that would do me sense I almost never actually write and use the computer instead. But it still be nice to have. Yes the headache is gone for now and I'm feeling better thank you :) though if it comes back I may be talking to Fate about my own issues and she wont like what I have to say lol Good chapter, can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 21, 2005
    You keep putting in enough kissing action for me to freak out that the lemon is coming and then these poor boys keep getting interrupted. You're killing me! Hiei is so adorable in this story - I want to take him home and ravage him myself (although I usually feel that way about Hiei anyway - but this story makes it especially so).

    Thanks for the background info on Hiei and Yusuke's parental discussions, I was curious. And remind me never to cross Botan.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 21, 2005
    Hehe, that was a fun chapter. I love the euphemisms at the beginning, especially since that let you post on ffn. Poor confused Kurama, but I’m sure he’ll figure out what he wants pretty quickly. It helps when both Hiei and Yusuke are willing and sincere about not demanding sex. Well, off to bed!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on November 20, 2005
    Oh yeah the conversations were great. I loved the way you delt with 'issues', very cute. I'm glad Shiori's on their side. I can't wait for the lemon. Read you tomorrow.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 20, 2005
    Oh god...just still loving this story. Will we see the Koenma/Yusuke discussion? (I'm just curious), I'm sure Yusuke is still quite a bit confused, and I'd like to see Koenma try to explain it. Wow...Shiori is quite the liberal woman, but I do understand the "I just brushed death" viewpoint that she has.

    The shower scene...with the hairwashing...still hot. Cute, but hot. And I like Hiei's quiet and awkward nature. And, yes, the boyfriend is hating me right now, because I should be packing, but I'm on aff.net.

    And you look cute as a gothic kitty!
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  • From ANON - jounochi rukawa on November 20, 2005
    that was such a great kickass story!!! Oh my gosh..... What a wonderful story!!!! make the continuation quick!!!!! Or a sequel.... Just continue it!!! I'm frustrated
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  • From Sharra on November 20, 2005
    This is a vary well writen and intertaining story. I like how you are writing this and look forword to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - vixenia on November 20, 2005
    YAY this is a great thing to wake up to. nyahahaha. A wonderful newly posted update of a yusxkur fanfiction. ^,^ keep it up k. yes this story is flowing quickly. I hope to see the next update soon. nyahahahahaha
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 20, 2005
    nice i loved the shower scene it made my wish i was kurama
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 20, 2005
    *snickers* What a way to wake up. That's one way to start a morning that's for damned sure lol I admire Yusuke and Hiei's amount of self control. If any one of those three were naked and in a shower with me I doubt I would be able to resist. I'm glad to see that Shiori is accepting of their relationship. That will go a long way towards helping them I think. Wonderful chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. Update soon please
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