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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 17, 2005
    Well, even if he doesn't know about the sex thing they're making progress... right? I must say I'm hopeful that Karasu didn't make it to the hospital and died there on the floor but then I have to worry about what legal complications will occur for our favorite red head if that happens. I love how fast you update. Wonderful chapter, I look forward to the next one
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 17, 2005
    Like I said before - each chapter just gets better and better - and you even put in my favourite demented demon! (I so have it bad for Karasu). The whole scene with him and Kurama was wonderful, and I loved the mini make out session in the van (yeah, Kurama doesn't know about the sex thing, but he's OK with making out with 2 guys in the back of a van during a crisis!).

    I am SO waiting for the big lemon!
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 16, 2005
    Ooo, interesting plot twist. Well, adversity tends to bring people together. Good to know that the angst will be followed by humor. My brain kinda hurts thinking about Koenma as Yusuke’s father though. And building on what vixenia said, I was expecting Kurama to wake up and freak a little when he couldn’t remember exactly what happened and why there are two bishies with him who smell strongly of sex :-).

    vampslyr

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  • From ANON - ki-kit on November 16, 2005
    love the chapter though i guess it was luck for our trio that kuwabara was around when there got kidnapped
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  • From ANON - vixenia on November 16, 2005
    Konnichi wa. O.O wow this story is SO awesome. I really do need to update mine....er...they can wait. Nyahahahaha, yes I am wierd like that. I actually thought of cleaning the mess during a lemon...that might be because I have been cleaning my room all the time like hell this week cause i FINALLY get to have my friends over. T.T it took forever since I was on restriction. Sigh. ah well. Anyways, enough about my clean room...or well now its dirty again but that's not the point, awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. bai bai
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    well crap, so much for the best laid plans. They never survive past the first skirmish lol I wonder how the boys are going to get out of this one. Hopefully they manage, without damaging the already fragile relationship they've built between them. I should have known that Koenma was going to make an appearance, but as Yusuke father? That was a pleasant surprise. Good chapter, I look forward to reading the next one. Update soon please.
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    damn that was just as good if not better than any of those fantasies I had worked up around those two. Very nice lemon, I'm sure that Hiei won't want to go back to the way things were before. If he does, he's lost his mind permanently from that little trip it took. Awesome chapter, Im off to read the next one.
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    Kurama's kinda cute when he gets drunk lol I have to admire both Yusuke and Hiei's level of control by denying him what he asked for. No doubt he would have regretted it in the morning. I wonder how much of this he is going to remember when he wakes up. Good chapter, I'm off to read the next one.
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    damn Kurama is fast. At least him and Hiei have something in common, it'll give them something to talk about if nothing else. Hmm Yusuke and Hiei do not a touchy feely relationship? Hopefully that'll change, the mental images I call up thinking on just how that could change are very droolworthy. Good chapter, Im off to read the next one.
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    Man I gotta feel for what Kurama is going through. Hopefully his mom pulls out of it, I can't imagine how he's going to break down if she doesn't. Good thing he ran into Yusuke on his way to the hospital, even if Kurama's not certain how to deal with him I think Yusuke will help him pull together better than anyone else could. Another good chapter, I'm off to read the next one
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    *Chuckles* always knew that Yusuke had a softer, compassionate side buried somewhere underneath that badboy exterior. I think Kurama's going to have a near impossible time of keeping him at arms length. Though that will probably end up being a very good thing if how he's dealing with his mother's illness is any indication. Another wonderful chapter, I'm off to read the next one.
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  • From ANON - Neaera on November 16, 2005
    I've missed some of the recent updates, hence, the review comes after 2 chapters. Or is three?
    O well!
    This chapter was pure fun. I've liked the different style of writing for this story the most in this chapter.
    And damn, the innuendo! :D *tongue lashing?!*. I don't think I'll ever get over that. I still have a silly smile on my face over that one.
    I enjoyed the part where you wrote about Yuusuke's mind in a corner, and his body getting ahead of his mind. It's nothing something I haven't read before, but the way you put it was truly special! Make that a bold and underlined 'special'.
    The Y/H in it, showed a lot about their relationship. I see you caving the way for some serious Y/H/K moments. *rubs her hands in glee*
    I look forward to the next update. Hopefully I'll catch it as soon as you post it! ^_^



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  • From ryukotsusei on November 16, 2005
    I have to say, I like the way you are writing this. The additional commentary is amusing and it breaks in just often enough to keep you guessing what smart little comments are coming in next. I like how you have made Hiei and Yusuke. Friends with benefits, though it didn't go into much detail it was obvious what it was they were doing *Evil grin* I just love that pairing myself. Great job, I'm off to read the next chapter.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 16, 2005
    With your daily updates - I can't keep up with my reviews! (You know, you make us all look bad with all your prolific-ness). I'm enjoying this story more and more everyday. I would have never thought of making Koenma Yusuke's father, or Sensui Hiei's dad, but in the context of the story - it works, and it works well. Poor Shior though - like she needs the stress.

    And those poor souls on ff.net - they didn't get the CRAZY HOT Yuusuke/Hiei lemon. Sorry, didn't mean to yell, but...yeah, that whole scene was hot. I read it twice (but then again, I have the hentai mind). I like how you're approaching their mutual fascination of Kurama slowly and carefully, it give the redhead the space he needs.

    And your narrative just keeps improving.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 16, 2005
    [Grin] A particular phrase came to mind while reading that lemon. Something about Yusuke ‘playing him like a finely tuned instrument.’ Ah, those moans were music to my ears. Scenes like that are all the more beautiful when the person giving please does it because he enjoys it just as much as the person receiving. Yep, gotta say ch. 6 is in my top ten of best lemons ever read; maybe top five. Mind blowing sex and sweet WAFFiness at the end. Makes for a perfect way to end the day.
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