Click Here!

Reviews for School

By : hColleen
  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on November 16, 2005
    Great story. I can't wait to read how Kurama will react to being part of such a sexy threesome. I'm glad none of our hunks is going to be left out. Very sexy lemon. I kept waiting for Kurama to walk in in them but I really like Yusuke and Hiei taking care of him. Update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (to tired to log in) on November 15, 2005
    Awesomely great lemon. Hiei is just to cute in this. I think after my Yusuke showed Hiei what making love is all about, I can see Hiei following Yusuke around like a little puppy, lol. I feel so sad for Kurama and what he's going through with his mom. It's good to know that he has Yusuke and Hiei by his side. I'm hoping we're getting a little closer to some more touchy/feely time with Kurama. Yusuke has sure shown a lot of maturity and patience. I can't wait for when Kurama is ready and willing. I'm sure it'll be hot as hell. Can't wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sam on November 15, 2005
    Hmm, well this is certainly unconventional. That's a good thing, I'm rather liking it so far... :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 15, 2005
    nice i can;t wait to see what others charcters are in the story
    Report Review

  • From ANON - vixenia on November 15, 2005
    Awesome chappy. Hm Yusuke better clean up his and hiei's mess before kurama finds it. I know I wouldn't want two guys I barely know fucking in my own home and not cleaning up the mess...mostly cause I am lazy but thats besides the point. Anyways, can't wait for the next update. bai bai
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on November 15, 2005
    i absolutely love this. your yusuke and hiei characterizations are always the best. looking foward to your next update.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 14, 2005
    Ah, edited for ffn is it? Excellent [purrr]. "Noble and not so noble" is still my favorite phrase. I wasn't expecting this to go the threesome route, but if it didn't Hiei would have been left out in the cold, and we can't have that, can we ;-)?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on November 14, 2005
    I'm having so much fun with this. I love how Hiei is characterized. I love all of their characterizations. Yusuke rocks as a perv with a heart, Kurama is too cute being the novice for once and confused and Hiei you just want to wrap him up in your arms and kiss the hell out of him. I'm so on the edge of my seat for chapter 6. I"m still in awe of the writing style of this fic. It's like your telling me the story and only me. That's talent you hot, sexy foxy mama.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 14, 2005
    nice i like how yusuke and hiei didn't take advangtage of kurama. that shows there have some self control.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 14, 2005
    nice i like how yusuke and hiei didn't take advangtage of kurama. that shows there have some self control.
    Report Review

  • From BlueUtopiah on November 14, 2005
    OMG, when this story started, I didn't really see the threesome thing coming, but now I'm doing a little happy dance (I'm so glad you decided to include Hiei in on the action!). Your voice in this story is really drawing me in, it becomes smoother with each chapter (not that it wasn't smooth before, but I can tell that this is flowing with more ease as you get further and further in). I really like where this is going and -hey - it's educational, I never really knew anything about track before!

    I'm just bad. I would have SO taken advantage of Kurama while he was drunk, but I'm sure I would've had to get in line.

    And - yeah - I coudn't get into aff.net all day yesterday, you weren't alone!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 13, 2005
    nice chapter it seems to me our boys love to watch the track team alot.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - touya4me on November 13, 2005
    Heya, Collie! This is super cool!! I love the style of narration you've written it in, it's rockalicious! How come you didn't tell me about this before? Ahh, no matter, I still thought it was super cool! And I LOVE the idea of daily updates! Later cocodrilo.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 12, 2005
    I like this writing style, it's very fresh and it *is* just like we're sitting in front of the fireplace sharing stories. I love how you're developing Yusuke's character and reworking the cannon plot into the AU to make a version of it that could easily take place in this world. The line "noble and not so noble" is the perfect way to describe Yusuke's personality and the seaming contradictions. He is a deep character and I really appreciate how well you're writing him.

    BTW, there's no such thing as reading too much FAKE. The build up of sexual tension drawn out over time is sometimes far more enjoyable than the enevitable sexual encounter. Hmmm, haven't read any of Yellow. They keep it sealed in plastic at the local bookstores [pout].
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 12, 2005
    nice you must update soon.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!