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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - Kirsten on January 31, 2010
    Hi there,

    This story was awesome! I really liked it and finished reading your 40.000 words in one go.You must be a really fast writer to post this daily. Plus I think it's great when writers have a huge vocabulary. The narrative pieces where special and weird in a good way.
    Just one thing bothers me a bit, but that happends in a lot of fics. People tend to go from innocent kissing to all the way like there's nothing inbetween.

    looking forward to your other story's,
    Kirsten
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  • From ANON - Amy-McClair on August 24, 2006
    This story was very different. Reminded me of the Princess Bride in the narration, but way higher rated. I really liked it, and if your muse ever suggests a story like this one again, you should jump at the idea. I love your work as always.
    BTW feel free to email me.
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  • From ANON - alex on January 07, 2006
    *smile* This was so good! I loved it, especially the way you wrote it, with all thoese side-comments. It's giving the impresion of a more personal narative, and that's just grate! The changes that occur in the boys' feelings are very plausible and lovely written.*another smile* Well, the point is i love this fic!
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  • From ANON - Yukizora on December 30, 2005
    Well, I must say, I don't think any moms in the world would be happy that their son is being prused by a queer guy, let alone two.^^" Of course, that's in real life and right now Shori just wants the best for her son right? Well, love your story!!!
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  • From ANON - sukini on November 29, 2005
    I really enjoyed reading this story.
    I think you mentioned something being 'non-logical' a few chapters back. The correct expression is 'illogical', just so you know. No offense, but I doubt a three way relationship will last very long, even if it's nice to start off with...I guess it's out of your hands now, though. I don't think I've ever heard males being so considerate before, I didn't know they had the capacity. But if they can create balls of energy to fire at enemies, I guess even that is possible.
    You really kept us waiting for that lemon scene, didn't you (you tease!) I thought they were never going to stop kissing, but they finally got round to the good stuff...yeah...
    Anywho, I like your writing style (Even though I feel like I've been living in your head for the entire duration of 'school'), so I'll be reading more of your stuff.
    Ciao for now,
    Sukini
    XXX
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  • From ANON - Ryuktosusei on November 23, 2005
    *sobs* it's over! Now I don't know what I will look forward to reading when I wake up *Sniffles* Very good ending though, I love how the lemon turned out. All in all it was a nice way to end the story, I'm glad everything worked out for the three of them *Happy sigh* Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on November 23, 2005
    I very much enjoyed this story and just read it all the way thru. I love your writting style. Thanks for a great read, you did a good job on the three of them being together.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 23, 2005
    Well, we’ll certainly do our best to encourage you. But is it truly just for our amusement? Nice ending; I’m glad you let us know how it ended with Sensui and Itsuki too. As for the lemon, I don’t think I’ve ever seen a threesome that was able to so evenly balance the action before. It supported the feeling of their relationship. And not focusing solely on Kurama gave him a chance to gain the experience he needed to be more confident in his lovemaking. That position they ended up in was amazing. I’ve never read it anywhere before and I am now intrigued. Wish I was in a position to try it out :-P.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on November 23, 2005
    Hm, if I knew missing a day would get me a wet Kurama I might have missed more often. Nah, this story was too good to miss especially the fantastic lemon at the end. I hope you write more, if you don't I might have to send a sexy fire demon after you.
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  • From ANON - vixenia on November 23, 2005
    YAY I loved this story...T.T but sadly it has come to an end. Yup it sure as hell was worth the waiting and riddles. Can't wait to read more of your future yusxkurxhiei stories or at least yusxkur stories. I love that pairing. nyahahaha. keep up the awesome work. bai bai
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 23, 2005
    love the lemon and ending i can't wait for your next story
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on November 23, 2005
    Well worth the wait. So sweet and romantic and hot, hot, hot. This was really so much fun. I'm not one who reads AUs as they're not my thing, but occasionly someone comes up with a great plot. This was just fun and sexy. With this being Kurama's first time too, made it all the better. These boys are just too sweet and sexy. I'm usuing the word sexy a lot. I think it's my new favorite word, lol. Well, you did a wonderful job with this. Thank you so much for yet another awesomelly entertaining read. You rock H. Love ya and talk to you after Thanksgiving.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 23, 2005
    You know, it's funny, but regarding what you said about the b/f getting "benefits" - I've always said that fanifiction is a functional learning tool. heh.

    But - GYAH, I will personally hold you responsible for my brain trauma and nosebleed today, I really didn't expect to bleed all over the keyboard like that, but it was worth it. Boy that was hot. no - really - it was hot. You gave me many pleasant images that willl be drifting through my head for the next few days (insert a pic of me with a silly grin on my face as I move into the new place).

    You really do kill with all the prolificness. I understand what you said in the author's note about not going over it again and again and just sticking with your instincts. I have to say that I really enjoy your writiing not only because the plots are wonderful and erotic, but you also take chances - for example, the writing style in this story. I was telling the b/f about it yesterday - how with this story you've been addressing the readers directly, and he was like "wow - that's cool, I bet you don't see alot of that kind of creativity in fanfiction" and he's right, I don't.

    As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
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  • From ryukotsusei on November 23, 2005
    Why do I get the feeling he needed big pockets because he cleaned the store out? lol I have a feeling the boys are gonna be very busy when they get home lol Can't wait to see what happens! Update soon please
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on November 22, 2005
    Can you believe i begged for daily updates and then I missed a day. Oh well that made today that much sweeter when I got to read two great chapters. Till tomorrow.
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