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Reviews for A Little Laughter

By : UKImouto
  • From ANON - shihiko on January 24, 2006
    Sorry for the extremely delayed review. I moved back to New Orleans and I can only access the internet at my university. Intriguing chapter though! I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh yeah, did you look up Sylvia Browne and her ideas on Tulpa. It's very interesting.

    Okay, on to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Jessi Jaganshi on January 21, 2006
    Wow....This is absolutly amazing.....I'm shocked at the feeling in this story/biogarphy,
    (I say that because it includes real things).

    I am very sorry about the demons and all, and I don't mean to sound fake or anything, It's just I know how you feel...
    not that I have demons quite that real.

    Anyway,
    Best of luck and peace,
    Jessi

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  • From ANON - Risk Draka on January 19, 2006
    Great story, I can't wait for more...
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  • From ANON - Esmee on January 11, 2006
    *Sigh* Another goody Chappie,
    Keeps its ups!

    ^-^
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  • From ANON - Esmee on January 11, 2006
    Hey it's me again.
    Lovie Luvie Loverly Lovly Wuvie etc

    Like always ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mar Fire on January 07, 2006
    good as always update soon girlly ... and thanks for the sweet comment about meh being ya freidn now! i feel so special! *cuddles ya*
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  • From ANON - shihiko on January 03, 2006
    Well this is the second review that i am leaving because of my damn internet connection >< But here goes, I'll try to remember everything I wrote in the one that was supposed to be sent. I really liked this chapter, once again, I loved the detailed descriptions. I wanted to know if you have ever heard of a psychic named Sylivia Browne. I know that I am a science major and belief in the supernatural is rather odd for someone majoring in psychology and minoring in chemistry, but hey, I'm from New Orleans! Anyways, when I was reading your descriptions about demons, her discussion on Tulpa popped into my mind. Tupla are beliefs or demons that we give life to by feeding into them with the energy of our beliefs. She also talks about the phenomenon of night terrors. She says that night terrors occur because of events that happened to us in past lifetimes. I could go on and on about her discussions about the psyche and other supernatural occurences, but I think that you would enjoy reading her books or looking ehr up on the internet. She is known throughout the world and it is my belief that she is not a phony. And anyone who knows me knows that I am a huge skeptic. Anyways, please update soon.

    Oh yeah! I knew it was Kuronue!!! Yay!!!
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  • From xtremereddragon on December 30, 2005
    story is awsome so far hope you update soon, if you wanna new chat buddy online you can add meh..

    MarFire313 ish my yahoo name...


    Lata
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  • From ANON - Esmee on December 29, 2005
    Wow... You certainly update fast! You go girl! Still loving the story ^_^
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  • From ANON - shihiko on December 28, 2005
    Dude, you just named three of my favorite Chinese dishes. Anyways, great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens when Dirken shows up. I wanted to say that your discriptions and imagery are very detailed, especially the one about blood. That was the main one that stood out to me. Ummm, let's see, I wanted to tell you that I finally get the demon thing, she doesn't have multiple personalities...duh, I feel like a first class ninny (at least I hope she doesn't have multiple personalities) The demons use her body as a host. Oh, and is the new demon, Okuro, truly Kuronue?

    You can answer me in an e-mail if you want.

    Well, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Esmee on December 28, 2005
    Ahw.... Now i feel very special and loved! ^_^ ghehehe Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - rain on December 25, 2005


    Gah! I am a cruel review who critiquesz more then compliments =( so sorry!

    notes taken as I read the four chapters:

    The suicide scene was very well done!
    I like your use of repetition.

    While leaving some description open to the reader is best, some description of the characters' appearance is needed, too. (i mean the main character here)

    Add action to the dialog. What are you doing? where are you standing? is his facial expression any emphasis on his words? are you moving around?

    Describe Karasu.

    the dream with the dragons needs more graphic description in many parts, to allow the viewer to visualize it.

    Author's BIG RULE of diolog: Diolog must be... crap, cant recall.... its something about using it sparingly, only when it creates a plot turn, and rarely when it can be conveyed through normal text.
    This story so far is reading like a play.

    minor spelling error: “Rei-chan” would be dear before the night was over.

    "he’d fucked me out of my mind" this phrase sounds cliche and stunted. It could be either a good thing or a bad thing; I picture a drunk girl with a grin on her face saying it. Instead, try going into a more eloqwuent description of the pain of the rending of your flesh pushing away all conciousness...

    I knew they would be siamese cats! i just knew it!


    looking forward to reading more of it! keep on writin, srah chan!
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  • From ANON - Helena_Ayanami on December 24, 2005
    I didn't know you had an account here and that you had actually written a story based on your life.
    Of course MCR is the best and so is "It's not a fashion statement, it's a fucking deathwish" but why didn't you wrote it complete!! T___T
    The demons names are interesting, yet I am sad that you hadn't told me too much about your inner demons and so, because your story reflects yourself...
    Anyway, if you update it, tell me to read it. Better IM me, as you don't have time to talk to me T___T...
    =u__u=
    Also, Merry Christmas! n___n
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on December 24, 2005
    Wow! I really like this story! How it's written and that there's truth behind it makes it really good! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - natsumi_chan on December 23, 2005
    Again, another well written chapter! I wish you the best of luck in dealing with these things! And I also hope that you will still have a fun holiday season. If you ever want to IM me, here are my usernames:

    YIM: illuminescent_gorgeouself
    AIM: loneblackheart
    MSN: illuminescent_gorgeouself@yahoo.com

    ^__^ Later!
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