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Reviews for A Little Laughter

By : UKImouto
  • From ANON - shihiko on December 23, 2005
    Hey, just wanted to say great story so far. I like the plot line and where it's going. However, there are a few problems, the first one being: does Galis truly have multiple personalities AND schizophrenia? My major is psychology, and I just wanted to say that if she has both (and I doubt that it is possible for her to even have multiple personalities given the discription of when the rape and beatings and fights started in her childhood) then it is highly unlikely that she isn't committed in a hospital. I f she has schizophrenia then she should also be on some major medications. Schizophrenia is a psychoses, a very dangerous one at that and if she's running around having hallucinations and dillusions then that's pretty f'ed up. there are also many types of schizoprenia (4 to be exact), which one does she have? this is by no means a flame. In fact you are probably leaning toards you character actually not being schizophrenic. Anyways, if you need help, especially if you want your characters personality and symptoms to be more believable ('cause I haven't really seen any true symptoms of psychoses yet) then e mail me or look up the DSM IV online. That book is the main book psychologists use to diagnose patients. And believe me, even if her mother was leaving out crucial details of her syptoms, a psychologist, let aone a Psychiatrist would definitely be able to piece something together.

    As I said before, this is not a flame, your writing style is beautiful, I hardly see any gramatic errors. But, please, I am serious about e mailing me if you have any problems with you characters symptoms.

    Thanks and update soon
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  • From ANON - natsumi_chan on December 18, 2005
    OMG...I've never read a story like this before... such a depressing core, but it's fascinating too. I can't believe you've really had to deal with these kinds of problems...
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  • From ANON - Esmee on December 18, 2005
    Love the story..
    I could compare it to my life.
    Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - crystal_moon13 on November 22, 2005
    Wow! I really like your story so far, it's very interesting. Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - InTheShadows on November 20, 2005
    Great first chapter!! I likie!! Keep up the good work update soon!!

    -InTheShadows.
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