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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - neaera on November 29, 2005
    I'm glad you decided to stick with this one.
    The first lemon in the chapter, that was barely there, was just like most of my dreams. Well, not like my dreams, but you know what I mean: how it was so surreal, though lacking specifics, had more of an impact on the reader (well, on me). I couldn't get over that one and I felt the same about most of the chapter.
    I hope you post more of this fic. The burden part: I like how you've written it, very insightful of you. I especially like how you're bringing Youko into the fic.
    Please update whenever you can. I look forward to your next post.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 28, 2005
    Amazing...I read it twice. I've been away for a few days because of the move, and it's so great to come back to something like this. Like I've said before - you love to take chances, and this is a prime example of that. This is really a wonderful piece of work - I have had very long discussions with people over the Shuuichi/Kurama/Youko division (just recently, the bf and I had a very loud debate about it in a restaurant), and it's hard to portray correctly - but your doing it in a way it's never been done and doing it right.

    I like the experimental edge to it - how you word everything - the style and tone. I also love the theme of being bound and reaching out to others to be free - that strikes a chord within me.

    Keep going - I want to see Hiei's part in all this. (of course).
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 28, 2005
    Hmm, so Youko’s been talking to Yusuke and Hiei behind Shuichi’s back huh? Sounds like they weren’t sure the dreams they were getting were real until Shuichi actually came to them. That was sweet how Yusuke was so concerned for Kurama and pulled him in to their first kiss. It sounds like up to this point everything that Kurama was done was completely calculated and he kept himself from ever taking a chance with his heart, which is part of where the bindings came from. I’m thinking there might be something more besides that though. I’ll have to keep reading and find out ;-). Good luck with JET. My roommate and her girlfriend are both applying. Going to Japan almost seems to be a right of passage for anime fans, and getting paid to do it is even better.
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on November 28, 2005
    Yes, yes, yes!
    Me again!
    It is spell still not sill, silly me!
    Grumbles
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on November 28, 2005
    I sill like it(Beams at the author)
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 28, 2005
    nice chapter im glad kurama is becoming un-bround one by one.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on November 27, 2005
    Okay, my head hurts now! I haven't had so much fun actually paying attention and having to think about what I'm reading in a long time. THANK YOU FOR SUCH AN ENCHANTING AND MEANINGFUL READ. This is truly writing at its best. Never be afraid to post anything you write because your talent is exceptionally rare.
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  • From ANON - Neaera on November 27, 2005
    Before I get any further with this review:
    You were going to trash this? *looms over chibi hCollen*

    Right! Now that I've got that out of my system, on with the review -

    I like it. It's different from what you usually write, and it shows. Yes, it was surreal in many ways and that's what made it all the more fascinating. I don't recaall ever reading much about the merging between Youko and Shuuichi. I like how you've taken it off-canon. It gave an important insight into how Shuuchi felt about having a Youko inside of him. He was not even born when Youko had merged with his body. It shows, that had he been given the choice, or if it had happened later in his life, how he would have felt then.
    I like this view on it. I look forward to where you take it next.
    Also, *rubs her hands in glee* ... Y/K/H moments!!

    Please update whenever you can.

    *goes off to read your other fics missed out on during the week* Expect reviews on them too.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 25, 2005
    It’s kinda hard to follow at the beginning, but dreams are surreal like that. I finally decided that the part where Hiei and Yusuke were talking was something that Youko and Shuichi were watching so that Youko could show him that they cared. I imagined them being fiery blobs of energy with eyes once I got to some more of the imagery and realized that their bodies weren’t there. It’s pretty and I like it. I’m a big fan of the Yami/Hikari pairings from Yu-Gi-Oh, and this is reminiscent of that feeling of two souls interacting on a level beyond bodies. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. I got so caught up in this one that I almost burned dinner ^_^. Don’t worry, just almost.
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  • From on November 25, 2005
    Hmm...I liked it! ^_^
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 25, 2005
    nice its different but thats what i like
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 25, 2005
    Very interesting start to it, again I love your writing style. I look forward to the next chapter, update soon please
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on November 25, 2005
    Me again, forgot to rate it, lazy me!
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on November 25, 2005
    That was good!
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