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By : mhmartini
  • From morgankit on April 03, 2007
    I think I just died.

    Yep. My heart totally melted.

    Please update soon.
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  • From 279180 on April 02, 2007
    Oh my gosh I'm speechless but it is very good. Hope they resolve very soon I hate to see them fight. I love the name that got chosen for the baby.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on April 02, 2007
    First of all, you are not a geek for looking up names for this story. Anyone who researches for their story proves how dedicated they are to creating a good piece of writing. I have followed this story avidly since "Bugs" and have enjoyed it a lot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - A. Minamino on April 01, 2007
    No, as a matter of fact, I didn't like the chapter. I feel so bad for Hiei and Kurama. I can't believe they fought. Well, actually, I can believe it. It's what happens to every new parent I guess. I hope they make up, they are mated after all. Update!
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  • From hColleen on April 01, 2007
    I wanna cry now. I hope you're happy about that. I also can't see what I'm typing, but that's not going to stop me.

    Poor Kurama, really, being sick when they first get their son and Hiei bonding so quickly and totally. Babies are one of the worst things for a marriage, really. And, Hiei, trying to give his son everything he never had, to the neglect of his mate.

    The meaning of the picture: Remember love and the first bond or every other will falter. Can't wait for what's next.
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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on April 01, 2007
    What's a good story without a little angst. Poor Kurama, Hiei nneds to learn to balance his lover and baby a little. Now please don't leave us with this little cliffy too long. Hiei and Kurama can't be apart too long.
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  • From ANON - A. Minamino on March 20, 2007
    HI! I'm so glad you updated! Idiot Kurama, thinking of others first all the time. I feel bad for him. Hiei is so cute with the baby! What are they going to name him? I hope they decide soon. Update!
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  • From ANON - Lici....(I'm ltoo lazy to login) on March 20, 2007
    Barney must DIE!!!! Burn, baby, burn.....*Evil cackle*

    Anyway, wonderful chapter. What awaits our demon couple with their new baby?
    Oh, daddy stuff gonna happen, I bet. Crying, screaming baby and terrified new
    fathers....And one hell of a loving touch from Mum of course.

    Please let me know when the next chapter is released from your grasp:
    kiki_yaoi@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on March 20, 2007
    The new addition, alright! This was a cute chapter, despite Kurama's horrible pain due to teeh spider bite and his own male demonic pride. How they deal having male pride and demon pride on top of that, I'll never know. Anyway, I can't wait to see how quickly this demon-child (literally!) grows up. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - hCOlleen on March 20, 2007
    Okay, since I want to read what I’m writing, let’s not type this up at aff. There are times when Kurama is just an idiot, y’know. And, Hiei being “daddy” is cute. And Barney should be incinerated…and the teletubbies…and a few others I can think of. Though, it is rough on Hiei having his attention divided between his mate and his child, especially when his mate needs him and doesn’t want to impose because of their child (mostly…I think he would if it weren’t for the baby.) Anyways, Love!
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  • From 279180 on March 20, 2007
    absolutly stunning
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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 20, 2007
    Wow. You know way too much about baby stuff, and I would totally be like Hiei at the baby store: everything is too colourful or too garish, I would go for the black/sleek/dark wood stuff myself.

    That whole scene with Hiei closing Kurama's wound and the bitten-through washcloth? Genius. Loved it, especially Hatanaka looking at the torn washcloth. I just loved the way you wrote that. No matter how much Hatanaka might humanize his stepson, Kurama is a demon and that fact just smacked him in the face.

    You're doing the Hiei-father thing just right: not fluffy, more curious and protective, just the way he would be. And Hiei never having slept in a bed until he met Kurama makes me very sad.

    Loved the chapter. Really? only two more? Man, you're gonna have some fun with Kurama, I can see it coming.
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  • From HellsChaosAngel on March 19, 2007
    what! only two more chapters i want to know more about the knew family. great stories i love them all.
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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on March 19, 2007
    I'm sorry this is almost over but I'm hoping that two more chapters means that Koenma won't find anything bad in that journal and that soon we will have a happy ending. I can't wait for Kurama to get better and read how he and Hiei interact with their new baby. Update soon.
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on March 19, 2007
    ok enjoyed the chapter. liked the whole shopping for baby scene, it was funny that hiei didnt really care for anything really. i can't place who he wanted to incinerate though, my only guess would be barney and if its him lol XD. how dare kurama suffer in silence knowing his mate would not lik that, shame on him. update soon
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