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By : mhmartini
  • From kerbear on March 19, 2007
    I just loved the last chapter,it was so great to see Hiei be confadent with the baby.Poor Kurama though could'nt enjoy it,but he should've opened his mouth about the wound.It was nice to see his stepdad so concerned for him as well.I almost hate to ask but is there a sequel to this one to?(I almost hope so)yet I'm sure you want a rest from it to.You write so well that when you close your eyes you can almost see them in these stories and living their lives.I think both demons need a night out to themselves after everything thats happened to them and Shiori would be a great babysitter or maybeher hubby.Very Nicely Done
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  • From ANON - Drisowen on March 08, 2007
    Ahhh! I loved it! It's so cute and happy and perfect! It was worth the wait ^^ And the evil demon died, thank god. He was starting to piss me off. Yay ::dances:: I'm looking forward to anything else ya got commin' up
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  • From ANON - Lici (lazy login brat) on March 04, 2007
    I. Love. You.
    I must have more! I've read the oher two stories and WOW! I have always liked this couple, but you have really upped my love and expectations of them as more. Thank you for such a wonderful read! I feel all tingly and warm.....

    Bu what will become of the new "fathers"? If is anything like what my mom and I experienced when she had a new baby boy while I had just turnws 18, it will be the most terrifying, rewarding feelings this couple will ever have. Congrats on making me cry and laugh and dance with all emotions. You are one in very few.


    When you update, please be kind and email me at kiki_yaoi@yahoo.com ....I would appreciae it!

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  • From ANON - tori on March 04, 2007
    Usually it is kurama who is the master at child rearing, it a change of pace. The part when hiei holds the baby and gets happy is adorable!


    p.s. i am sorry for the loss of your dog.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on March 02, 2007
    OOOOH! So cute!! I love the fact that Hiei and Kurama have a baby now. You can't stop this fic.! Please don't get bored. I think they are wonderful. You are an amazing author! Ooooh, what's the babies name gonna be? Can't wait! Updateupdateupdate! UPDATE! PLEASE! Please? I hope you feel better about Spunky, by the way. Did I mention you should update? Probably not. UPDATE!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 26, 2007
    Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Of course, I've been waiting to see this chapter ever since I read it last year. Although you're like me, and you write stories based around a scene that appears in your head, I never write the scene ahead of time. Weird.

    I love how Kurama, who's usually so cool and collected, is losing his shit in the corner while Hiei, who would be the LAST one you'd think would care for a child, is fascinated and entranced by the baby. You did this well - you gave them a child with no one turning female, and no mpreg while giving Dragonlance a nod. AWESOME. The whole foot scene was heartwarming, and I loved how Hiei instinctually knew how to hold the baby.

    I'm dying to see the consequences of this baby. I know you've told me a bit, but I want to see it in your writing style.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on February 26, 2007
    Christ...I forgot about the damn blue on black of reviewing here (I don't read here very often anymore) But, I loved the ending of this chapter. It's so sweet. Poor Kurama, the eternal playboy, is now a daddy. And, Hiei, his longing fulfilled in a way that just wouldn't have been possible without interference. I'm glad it wasn't MPreg...I dislike those. It's too cute..."It's a foot, like mine, only smaller" *awwws*

    Anyways, my back is complaining at me for having to type this standing up and my keyboard being mid thigh
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  • From 279180 on February 26, 2007
    This was fucking good. I am truly happy that you updated and i am slightly speechless and of cource Hooray for Hiei he can keep it together.
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  • From kerbear on February 25, 2007
    Oh my,what a great chapter to this story arc.Don't be sorry about your dog he was apart of your family and I'm sure will be missed greatly.I buried my cat(Mister)of 15 years and it broke me to the core(still does)he was my everything.Writting this story line may be getting tiring for you(understandable)but I have loved everyone of the sequels.And look forward to more.This one was fun to see their shocked faces to have a baby.No surprise to see Hiei act this way after going through what he did turning 100.Can't wait to see the grandad reaction to this.Nice job here and very very sorry for your lose
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on February 25, 2007
    i'm glad to see ur back. i started to get worry. luvd the chapter...the family is complete now...hiei has a lil one to call his own and shiori has another reason to spoil the two demons. can't wait for the next update and sorry about u losing your dog...i know how that feels :(. but glad to hav u back XD
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on February 25, 2007
    I'm gonna' review here as well as your site because this chapter was just too terrific NOT to leave another review!! As I've said before, but will reiterate here, I LOVED seeing Hiei's reaction to his son! I could just picture the look of wonderment when he held the tiny foot, and the love that was more than evident not only when he looked at the boy but also when he told the baby that he would have what Hiei did not! That one line brought tears to my eyes, and though I was smiling, I was crying too!

    BRAVA!!!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 25, 2007
    I absolutly love your story. I'm sorry about your loss, and I can honestly understand how you feel. I too just recently lost a pet and miss her a lot. Just try to remember the good times and know that Spunky had a good and happy life with you. P.S. Keep your chin up!
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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on February 25, 2007
    OMG that was a sweet chapter. You could tell from the last chapter how much Hiei wanted a baby/family and now he has one. I have always been a huge fan of this series and look forward to more even if you need a break. The chapter was sweet but it was losing your dog that brought a tear to my eye. I know how hard that is, we lost our Baby dog recently, she was 14. I'm glad your sadness didn't show in this story. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - A. Minamino on February 20, 2007
    I feel bad for Hiei. I know what Akambo means, you should give me a ciber cookie! Anyways, I have no idea where this story is going, but I guess that doesn't matter, does it. I put my trust into your capable hands! Just update soon, okay? Please?
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  • From ANON - Drisowen on January 07, 2007
    Oh, that was such a good chapter, as usual:3 Poor Hiei. He needs babies. Well, since I once again find myself with very little brain function,I'll leave this comment relatively short. Hope to read more soon
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