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By : mhmartini
  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2007
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA and ha.

    That whole scene with Kurama in the blanket, embarrased by his family and what he said? Perfect. I could just see Kurama peeking out over the edge of the blanket in amazement and embarrassment. So well written. I know you told me about this chapter over the phone, but it was joy to read nonetheless. Poor Kurama, we're always wearing him out in one way or another.

    I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan though...

    And I'd like to order one insatiable fire demon. I'm sure I could handle it, and if I couldn't, I'd rent him out to other willing fangirls.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on January 03, 2007
    Hah! I figured that was the reason Hiei was all clingy! And now I feel special because I figured it out. I had to read the last three chapters (because I'd forgotten what had happened and because I haven't been online, as you well know) before reviewing. Still, it was worth it. Great job!
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on January 02, 2007
    And the empty-nest Hiei jettisons into an insatiable Hiei emulating a pregnant nympho, and then comes back to an empty-nest Hiei. I have to admit, at the beginning of his love-fest I was wondering if you were going to take us in a direction away from the laboratory ... ^__^
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  • From ANON - hColleen on January 02, 2007
    Interesting....breath play from you...we've influenced you...hehehe...This chapter still had a little of the vagueness to it, but then, nice quality smut makes up for that. I'd say more, but seriously, trying to read dark blue on black...ugh. I'd say I would change my default values, but, first thing in the morning, I don't want to look at white backgrounds in word (and my default text color is white...that leads to other problems.) I quit babbling now. Enjoyed it Yay :D
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  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com on January 02, 2007
    My birthday is in 10 days and I'm putting in my request right now for Kurama to give me what Hiei got. I guess Hiei could give it to me instead, that would be okay. I suppose my husband would do but somehow Hiei or Kurama sounds more interesting.

    When you get over righters block you really come out with a bang. (I guess Hiei's the one that got banged)

    Good chapter, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dark Delta on January 02, 2007
    wow that was just amazing I've heard of stamina but that was well wow. Any good job nice to have an update the first thing of the new year. Hope this year you keep writting great stuff.
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  • From ANON - lunar_eclipse24 on January 01, 2007
    I feel no pity for Kurama. Tho' I suppose it's a good thing I didn't laugh out loud or certain people nearby would have gotten curious.

    Hiei, on the other hand,...I suppose for someone who wants a child, it must be horrible not to be able to have one. I think Hiei envies Yukina a bit and then feels extremely guilty for it. He's going to be a great uncle though. He'll be as protective of the twins as he is of Yukina. Even if one of the twins is Kuwabara's clone.

    I can't help but wonder if Kuwabara and Yukina's twins are going to be the beginning of the next generation of Rekai Tantei.

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  • From ANON - ss_dragon_lady on December 30, 2006
    I'm so glad that you updated!! it's wonderful as usual. I hope you update again soon, I can't hardly wait for more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - jonez on December 30, 2006
    I'm getting visions of a mad-scientist fangirl creating a Hiei-Kurama baby in those alternate scenes... and it's scaring me.
    Please keep up the wonderful writing- I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 29, 2006
    You know, you needed this chapter. I've read some of the reviews and I know that they haven't been all-out glowing, but the way you slowly portrayed Hiei's need for a child, without him knowing what that need was, was done very well. The pacing on a subject like that, especially with the way Hiei is characterized, needs to go perfectly or it will fall flat, and you did the pacing very well.

    I find it ironic that Hiei wants a child, almost more than Kurama does. You're leading into the plot nicely, and this chapter sets everything up well.
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  • From ANON - Drisowen on December 27, 2006
    Hurrah updates! Yay! Well, the chapter seemed a little short, but whatever. Still great. Poor Hiei[whose name I just mispeslled twice in a row.] He needs babehs. Well... yes. And manacial laughter!? This story has everything you need. Sorry if I'm a little hyper... Yes.
    The thing I really love about your writing is that is kicks my imagination into gear and makes me want to write too >.< I usually don't but I end up thinking things up and... it's fun.
    Anyway, hope to read an update ...vaguely soon. Sometime. Near distant future perhaps? :D

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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on December 27, 2006
    I'm so glad the writing but bit you again. Awesome as always. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on December 27, 2006
    Nee...another review I won't be able to read...anyways...this seems a bit like filler...and you seem maybe to be feeling like Hiei at the moment. It's not bad at all, you just seem a bit unfocused...or maybe it's just because it's still filler...or you can feel free to ignore me
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 27, 2006
    Oh, what an interesting chapter! I have my own suspicions about whats wrong with Hiei but I'm going to keep quiet just incase because I hate being wrong. **Grin** I loved the kitchen scene, I could so see Kazuma (So much easier to spell!! :-D) absentmindedly kissing Yukina and Hiei being decidedly unamused about the whole thing. Not to mention the image of Hiei choking on his water almost made me cry laughing. Poor Kurama though, he's all befuddled. Though we can't blame him.

    Anyway, excellent update and I hope that you had a great christmas.

    Velvetina
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  • From ANON - Dark Delta on December 27, 2006
    Like always leaves me in suspense and wanting more but thats ok. Keep it up this is really amazing and Thanks for writing and keeping us entertain.
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