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Reviews for Akambo

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com on September 03, 2006
    That was great even though poor Hiei didn't get to all the good stuff. I hope you don't use pestisides because the writing bug that bit you is a keeper. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on September 03, 2006
    I was so happy to see an update on this! I've just gotten home from hospital and was looking for a good distraction and found it in this.

    I am so glad that Kurama is okay *wipes brow* I was really worried there for a moment though, I mean that is a whole lotta sleeping he did and well...is it really over. I mean we all know how nice fox torture can be as well as fox love- or is that just me? *Laugh*

    Poor Hiei was so worried but also had to deal with teh idea of Kuwabara and his sister as well as a very worried Shiori. If I didn't loev the little guy so I'd almost have to giggle at his predicament. But I'm not that evil.

    Anyway glad to hear the house moving went well and I'll keep my fingers crossed for the next update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Tired to Sign In) on September 03, 2006
    Kurama! ::Pounces him and snuggles all close with him and Hiei:: I missed you so much...you had me so worried sleeping like that, and I'm still worried about the after effects of what the horrible digusting spider did to you. ::Sobs:: I was so scared... and still I'm worried. I'm glad to see you back to health and you and Hiei doing more loving things together. Oh and Hiei was in so much need for you... and he was also in a lot of sexual frustrations... ::Runs before Hiei can catch her to kill her for telling::

    Okay I'm done I sware... seriously though... I am looking forward to the butt kicking still. I hope Hiei burns that vile spider up... I almost wish he had Sessy's sword so he could revive him and do it again! And lordy... not done with my fox yet? ::Suddenly terrified and braces herself:: I think I'm ready... but I have a sinking feeling I won't be completely prepared for whatever it is you have planned. Keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on September 03, 2006
    Awesome as always. I love how sweet this was. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - nette on September 03, 2006
    i'm glad the move went well and that you finally updated. i wonder how things will be now that kuwa/yukina are together. it will be funny to see hiei's reaction and response toward it. also i hope kurama is really ok and that this new threat won't do something drastic like...kill one of them...please...ok so enough of that. i liked the chapter and hope to read more so until then adios
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on September 03, 2006
    Short, yes, but still enjoyable. A filler is understandable after the move, so I'm just glad you finally got to update. It was kind of funny that while Kurama couldn't fulfill his promise to Hiei, Kuwabara and Yukina were doing just that! And Hiei couldn't stop thinking of them together! That was hilarious! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - A. Minamino on August 19, 2006
    HI! I haven't read your stories in long time, it's been busy summer, but I'm glad to see that you've updated a lot. Now you just need to keep updating! 'kay?
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  • From ANON - AnnaJaganshi on August 11, 2006
    Always stopping at the good parts. I've read the other stories and they were great, so is this one! Please finish it, I'd like to see what happens next!

    Those demons that took the blood, they aren't... going to clone them or something are they? Or make a demon from their blood and it be like there kid or something? *shudders* Scary... Please update!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on August 04, 2006
    Oh my lord, am I allowed to bow down to your writing?! Its amazing. I read coming clean and the following one-shots one day and thoday I read BUGS and this....now I need more **grin** I'm afraid that you've got me totally obsessed and I cannot wait till you update.

    All three stories how superb plotlines and well developed characters. And are just generally totally amazing!
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  • From ANON - Drisowen on July 17, 2006
    Yay! I'm so happy to read this story again. I lost my link to your page when everything was moved, so I'm really excited to have found it again. Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Skwishee on July 13, 2006
    Nyaaah cliffhanger of death. XD i hope you post more soon. I may go crazy in the meantime though.
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  • From ANON - Dark Delta on July 13, 2006
    Oh wow that was amazing, beautifully written and damn they already hurt Kurama that sucks Keep it up you're doing a good job.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 11, 2006
    Reasons why this chapter (and you) RULE.

    1. Hiei straddling Kurama's lap and declaring ownership at the strip club. HAHAHAHAHA - I even told that to the consort and he was snickering.
    2. Chu and Atsuko! (First he steals her underwear in Island and then drinks with her in Akambo) Just add Shizuru and stir!
    3. The whole scene outside with Kurama in the snow just before he's assaulted. It's like a beautifully painted picture, the imagery was amazing.
    4. Yukina's dress.
    5. Kurama's promise to Hiei. I'd like one of those please.

    Questions:
    -Why wasn't Yusuke all touchy-feely with the strippers? Was he busy ogling Hiei and Kurama like a good slashy-boi should?
    -How come Hiei didn't just jump on Kurama the night before the wedding and demand some more Magick Healing Co- oh wait, Kurama doesn't like that word.

    Really though, you come up with some creative demons. they should consult you on the next D&D Monster Manual.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In) on July 10, 2006
    MY BABY! ::Cries all over the unconscious Kurama:: That evil, vile, digusting spider! ::Whimpers and pets his hair and then hugs Hiei quickly:: Don't worry my beloved fire demon... you'll get to kick their butts!

    Great chapter... all the happiness and then my baby being attacked. I think I felt my heart stop for a moment. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - nette on July 10, 2006
    hey just wanted to tell you i luved all the stories i hav read so far and this one just as much. i cant wait to read more and i liked the fact you had the characters evolve through all of your stories it makes them seem more realistic in a sense. so keep up the great writing :D
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