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Reviews for Akambo

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - hColleen on July 10, 2006
    The good part? Now...from you, I will learn true evilness *wink* I learned the gore from Blue...lol

    I loved the ceeremony...and the bachelor party. Nice little possessive hiyouki. Nice touch. And, here we are, Kurama tourture again. What more? hmmm... I gues the venom isn't going to corrupt the sample or can be spun out or something.

    ....

    You've watched Yami, haven't you? That thing...sounds a bit like Muraki's thing...though, there's a similar thing in YYH and X...the regeneration tank thing.

    I had thoughts...but I'll wait to see :D Glad to see the muse is still feeding off the con *grins*
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on July 10, 2006
    Hehe, still thinking about that possible Atsuko-Chuu pairing.

    Well then, at least Hiei has something to distract him from thinking about his sister's wedding night, now doesn't he? ^__^ I'm quite sure I know why they took Kurama's blood- and Hiei's- and I feel oh so sorry for those poor deformed experiments cowering in the corner . . . what an awful way to live, and I doubt they really live that long, huh?

    And my hat goes off to Shiori, because having Kurama for a son and Hiei for a son-in-law by now must have put at least a few gray hairs on her head! Poor woman, what with the trip to the Demon World and the new information about her son, and then her son getting attacked . . . well, that happens a lot, so she might be used to that part by now XD But all the same, poor woman.

    Well, and of course, poor Kurama, but I'm sure he'll we, ah, properly attended to. Hehe, cannot get the "Magic Healing Cock" or whatever out of my head now.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on July 10, 2006
    See, I knew there was a reason the other chapters started off slowly. It all had to lead up to this moment, where the real action begins. You did great with this one, too! The new setting of Yukina's wedding was very cute, and it was even better how you had Kurama and Hiei sort of recommit during the procession. I just really enjoyed the wedding and reception background of the entire chapter. And the way you had Kurama get captured was new and, of course, very interesting. Now you have me wondering why this demon wants the fox's blood. There are oh-so-many possibilities. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on July 06, 2006
    Ah, updates. What's not to love? ^.^

    This chapter was pretty good. I really like how you show Kurama and Hiei's love for each other more than their lust for each other. Like, even just now when they made love, it wasn't because they lusted after each other, it was just another way to show they cared. I really like that. One thing, I want to know what it was Hiei was about to say when Kurama stopped him in the shower. I'm assuming that (entire, probably) conversation came from the mini-con, but you really must finish Hiei's statement. Please!!

    Update soon!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 06, 2006
    I'm not gonna say it....

    No, I'm not...

    Well, OK : ZE MAGICK HEALING COCK MAKES AN APPEARENCE - ALL IS RIGHT WITH THE WORLD!!!!!

    You..only you could do that RIGHT in a fanfic. I worship you. BTW, like I said in LJ, the characterization of Mukuro is fine, just the right amount of distance. I also enjoyed Shiori's first few sentences in conversation with her husband, and Hiei's room is so right on. I loved the description of opulent but spartan.

    Now I have to go pay aedictus royalties for MHC, she trademarked it after all.
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  • From ANON - dark delta on July 05, 2006
    Awesome Shiori seems to be getting lots of surprises keep it up its good.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on July 05, 2006
    *grins*
    “‘It’ doesn’t have any magical healing properties and I don’t want to hurt you,” Kurama protested half-heartedly.

    Hiei pouted. “No Magic Healing Co...”

    “Don’t even say it!” Kurama cut him off. “You know I hate that language.”
    *grins*

    How funny. Very funny....though...very curious...very very...hurry up and write, damn it...now! Or, I'll regret spreading teh_CRACK that is Princess Princess! I'd say more, but I have...stuff to do...and certain things are making that difficult.
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  • From ANON - Skwishee on June 23, 2006
    Oh I hope you update soon. I always love your work and you never cease to keep me compulsively checking for updates. Evil.
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  • From ANON - hatochiisai on June 22, 2006
    I rarely frequent the YuYuHakusho section of aff.net, because I've never found anything appealing here. I stick to the Yugioh section. But then I found your fic, BUGS. I've been hooked ever since. I absolutely LOVE your writing. I was so excited to find a sequel AND prequel to BUGS. I read the prequel, and now I'm reading this. I finally have a reason to come to the YYH section of aff.net. I can't WAIT for an update!!!
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  • From ANON - Ryuko on June 20, 2006
    >.< Sorry, part of my review got cut off. ^^: Guess I got a little carried away?

    Anyway, am I totally off in expecting weirdo genetically spliced KxH babies? Guess I'll just have to wait. :3
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  • From ANON - Ryuko on June 20, 2006
    ^______^ Wooow. That was a real treat. I stumbled across this story 3 days ago, and the title immediately hooked me. But then I read the summary, and since it said it was the third in the series, and since I hate jumping into a storyline from the middle, I looked for the preceding story. I actually have seen Bugs on several fav lists of my other favourite K/H writers here on AFF.net, so I was glad I finally got around to reading it. And then I found that Bugs was a sequel itself, to the angsty epic (my favourite kind) Coming Clean, and I knew I'd found a treasure. ^^ I often end up finding lovely stories like this well after it's finished, so I get to do what I did last Sat, and spend the entire day enjoying it. And then I got to follow that up the next day with Bugs. Today I got to treat myself to Akambo, and so far I have not been disappointed. I absolutely adore how Hiei and Shiori were able to connect to an extent through the common ground of being one of Kurama's precious people. The characterizations I find are not entirely OOC because they've developed, as you yourself said, over quite a bit of plotline, which warrants those kinds of changes. I can't wait for the this story to continue, although I see you did just update, so I'll try and be patient. :) But, I can't wait! Akambo? Ankanbou! Baby baby baby babies!!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 19, 2006
    Hahahaha - THE LIVE ONES! How could I not see the influence! Behold! The YYH/DragonLance crossover! It pwns all other crossovers *cue evil music*. Oh - look at the pairings now: Koenma/Paladine, Kurama/Tanis, Hiei/Raistlin...

    OK, I'll stop now before someone gets hurt (namely me).

    So many good lines in this: "Yusuke may have become an adult, but he was still Yusuke.", "Some battles were too dangerous, even for the legendary Spirit Fox.". The entire scene with the imp was incredible - especially Shiori getting a dose of angry Kurama voice. I also liked your description of Mukruo. Us fangirls may not like to think about Mukuro, but she does exsist and she is pretty badass, so I like it when people acknowledge her correctly.

    But the imp...how the hell do you come up with that stuff? And why is Kurama not sleeping? ANSWER ME!

    Love ya.

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  • From ANON - hColleen on June 19, 2006
    Wow...so it's Hiei torture for a bit now, ne? Interesting...muchly...hmmmm....*ponders*
    Not sure what else to say, really...so I'll leave it at that for now.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on June 19, 2006
    Interesting . . . I am sketching out some theories right now . . .

    We both like to give Kurama restless nights, don't we? ^__^ I doubt he'll be getting much sleep until Hiei is better . . . or perhaps not XD I shall patiently await to see what happens next, then.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on June 19, 2006
    Yay! An update! I'm so glad you got to this tonight instead of making us wait. I really enjoyed this chapter. Mukuro's new for of sending a message was a very original idea. I like how you worked that out. But my favorite part in this chapter was Shiori's visit to the Makai. I can just imagine her: frail, human woman trapped in a land where creatures crave to eat her flesh, and scared out of her mind because she's completely confused. I loved it! You always do such a good job including Shiori in your fics. Update soon!
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