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From ANON - kit-kit on December 17, 2005
wow i love this chapter it was funny especially yusuke out burst
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From ANON - Neaera on December 17, 2005
Yes, the chapter was quite fun, well, at Yuusuke's expense, but, yes, :D
I'm not sure why, but for some reason the talk with the Baron reminded me of Meet Joe Black. And I love that movie, which makes me like this chapter all the more. :) Ah well, yes, thank you for clearing that out for me (tarots).
And, I think I wrote this before: I really like Keiko in this. uh...Hiei's smirk? Let's say when he's thinking of stuff to do to ________ heh, yea that.
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From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on December 15, 2005
This has to be one of the most different and entertaining fic I've read in a long time. You write in first person better than anyone I know. The drama behind the loving relationship between Kur/Hiei/Yus just tug at my heart from all angles. You've shown Kurama with a side of pure innocence that I really feel is refreshing. This trust he instictually has for Yusuke and Hiei is so pure and sweet. You've managed to pull us all into not only their minds and hearts but into their souls. They truly are meant for each other. I also love the added insight of the voodoo spells with Keiko taking a major role, FOR ONCE, in an explanation of what's happening and/or a solution/remedy. Another refreshing and creative point.

The lemons are not just fuckfests, but wonderful displays of their love for each other, which makes them extremely hot and sexy. That threesome was awesome and left me wanting those boys for myself. lol. ^_~ I look so forward to upcoming chapters. I wonder what it is that Keiko is doing to that jerk who has hurt our Kurama once again, the bastard. I hope Keiko makes his dick fall off. ^_^ CYA next chappie you evil brat!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Eye of Ra on December 15, 2005
^^ awesomeness. well. the link. LoL. the chapter..well. i can't think and it's one thirty. as for the tarot thing.. i left a comment in your LJ about that. no need to clog reviews about it. :p

but the threesome was positively stunning. and the little details.. fun, to say the least. made my night, and today was NOT a good day. major huggage to you for making a really bad week even that much better. cause you did get a smile or two out of me. ^_^

Ra
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From ANON - neaera on December 15, 2005
Aah! Now I can review ^_^
I really like how you've written this in the first person view. You've done a fine job with it. Also, you've managed to write Kurama very convincingly. I'd imagine he'd stare at Yuusuke's ass whenever given the chance. Heh, that was pure fun. I'd say it was completely IC to have Kurama wake up with a 'problem' every morning. How creative! That was completely believable. I so see that happening.
I like Keiko's role in this fic. I may not ship Yuusuke/Keiko but I doubt she's the snarky ebil woman holding Yuusuke back that everyone makes her out to be. As of now, it's official:- I will like any moment in the fic that causes Hiei to ♥ smirk.
I hadn't realised this was a continuing fic of sorts for the Truth Dare one. That was a pleasant surprise. And the scene in chapter 5 (you know which one) was uber hawt! (heh, journal talk).
I look forward to the next update. Hopefully, I won't miss it this time.

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From ANON - Neaera NSI on December 14, 2005
Damn! I can't believe it's now what? 5 chapters into the fic? Well, I had to stop at the chapter where you mentioned about the tarot cards. I'll come back and leave an actual review. There's just one thing that I wanted to mention before that. I'm more likely a rookie when it comes to reading Tarot cards, but I do remember this: the tarot reader shuffles the cards with the left hand, the person seeking the reading cuts the stack of cards (when placed on the table), and then the reader, using her left hand, picks out (according to the spread you chose to use) three cards. Everything else was right, I just thought I'd point out that the person seeking the reading would be the one who cuts the stack before the cards are picked.
You may wonder why I typed so much, yet haven't reviewed yet. I'd probably forget about it, so I thought I'd write this down first then come back and leave an actual review. Sorry, if this seems inappropriate.
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From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Tired To Sign In) on December 14, 2005
OMG... I love you. I love your writing so much I feel like a damn story fiend. This is the first time I have had the ability to sit down and read this (Damn College Finals) ... and I read it all in one sitting, and the sex scenes... ::Drools:: The story is sad, and beautiful, and at times heartwrenching. I think that is what I love the most about your stories... they are not just sex, but a beautiful play between intimacy, emotions, and overall heartwrenching pain. I enjoy your work so much and I do look forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Lonely lust on December 13, 2005
Yep again, I'm too lazy to log in.... Oh well. Anyways. yeah the support would be good. Knowing people care is always a good thing. I was kinda surprised when you put it as magic as the cause of memory lose. Interesting. Loving it so much!! Can't wait to see more!!! Laterz

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From ANON - Ryukotsusei on December 13, 2005
*chuckles* I'm surprised I was that close. Seems Keiko has been busy, which in this case is a very good thing. Can't wait to see how this spell is broken. Update soon please
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From ANON - kit-kit on December 13, 2005
nice im lovin the story
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From BlueUtopiah on December 13, 2005
WOW - that defintely answered my whining need for pr0n! I can't believe you wrote that while you were sick - I'm really not good for anything but editing my stuff when I'm sick. You so rule. Yeah, poor EMOD, but he is actually a very understanding boyfriend with an open mind - and he likes to read the non-yaoi stories since he's a big YYH fan as well. He is also a beta-reader for all my stuff, and he's wonderfully brutal when i need it. But you make me sound like some pathetic rabid yaoi fangirl! *sniff*

Yeah, but I guess that's what I am. Enough about that - I don't know how you do it, but you have this crazy storyline that I can't even figure out how it's going to be resolved and then you kick so much ass by bringing in Seimigaku (who is just the coolest evil OC ever!), and have Keiko practsing MAGICK (bonus points for that - and it's VooDoo which I don't even want to mess around with!) and you managed to tie up the story quite neatly with a crazy citrusy scene (and I never argue with the Hiei/Kurama/Yusuke threesome). It makes me want to go over my stuff and cry - your writing flows so easily - I just love it.
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From BlueUtopiah on December 11, 2005
You know that I've been thinking about that opening scene with Yusuke and Kurama ALL DAY. And Kurama holding out on him twice during that scene just to made Yusuke all touseled and crazy - NICE. You really do write the greatest lemony scenes. There should be a Nobel Prize...

And Hiei making cinnamon rolls - that is SO perfect for me (I'll take both Hiei and a cinnamon roll ANYDAY) - I go on about cinnamon rolls in my aff profile - or maybe I'm just hungry right now. Anyway :) I NEED TO KNOW MORE - and I'm psyched to see how this turns out - I was relating this tale to EMOD today and going on and on about the psychological aspect of it and how great it is and he told me to calm down. But I like this story...I really do, and props for writing in first person - but I'm a little scared to try it since you've stated that the tenses are really hard to use correctly (but I'll stil try!)

Have I told you yet that your are not the bomb, but the missle?
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From ANON - Lonely lust on December 11, 2005
Hehehe.... I'm too lazy to log in at the moment but I must say, I am LOVING this story!! It's so good!! It would really suck to have someone you love loose their memory. I personally couldn't deal. But, it's not about me, so who cares, ne? I can't wait to read more. Until next time!!!
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From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on December 11, 2005
This is so awesome. I love all three of our hunks together. Hiei and Yusuke are so cute taking care of their fox. Update soon.
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From ANON - Eye of Ra on December 10, 2005
lol. feed you. of course, midear! now.. if i had a good thesaraus around here.. i would start looking up good words for "brilliant" and "stunning" so you'd get a new one every chapter. LoL. xD but i am SO not going to remember that if or when i DO happen across a good thesaraus. but i must say.. as always, you have me intrigued! i so want to know who the new voice is! ^^ always on the edge of my seat with you.. but that is definately a good thing. and you update WAY faster than i ever could.. so i'm happy whenever you update. besides.. your chapters are... almost exponential in size compared to mine, especially when you consider that yours are usually chaptered.. i give you sooo much love for that.

and now that i've been thouroughly distracted from your LJ.. and left you a review.. i'll go leave you a comment. lol.

Ra
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