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By : hColleen
  • From ryukotsusei on December 10, 2005
    Thats a damn nice image to picture waking up to let me tell you lol Yusuke begging.. *drools* Another wonderful chapter, can't wait to find out who this mysterious person is and if they are the cause of what happened or know how to help. Update soon please
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  • From ryukotsusei on December 10, 2005
    I never really thought about how often I do things on reflex like that until now. Interesting, I'm going to have to see just how often that occurs. Glad that Hiei was able to help him out this time, even if Keiko did get a bit more of a show than she was expecting before she left lol Good chapter, I'm off to read the next one
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 10, 2005
    good chapter i wonder who that person could be though i hope its not karusu
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  • From ryukotsusei on December 10, 2005
    Man I gotta feel for all three of them at this point. I can't imagine how difficult it would be for any of them with what has happened to Kurama. I have to wonder if this spell just happened to catch him or if it was an attack specifically meant for him and if so why? Hmm perhaps jealousy that Kurama was in this current relationship and the person figured if he/she destroyed his memory they'd have a chance at claiming him. Meh, I'm probably completely off base here but it's fun to ponder. Excellent chapter, I'm off to read the next one.
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  • From ryukotsusei on December 10, 2005
    I've decided it is time to catch up on my reading and reviewing since I burnt myself out on writing for the moment lol This is a very interesting first chapter. I don't believe I've read any fics where Kurama has gotten amnesia, through any sort of means. I wonder what happened to him. At any rate, I'm off to read the second chapter, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on December 10, 2005
    *squee* i love it! ..and people kept talking to me.. but i FINALLY got time to read it! okay. i am so going to have to come up with a more original review for that on the next chapter. xD even if telling you i love it IS true. xD

    Ra
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 09, 2005
    So HERE'S YOUR REVIEW *hugs*.

    Um - GYAD - the scene between Kurama and Hiei - I read it twice. It was loverly and RAW and I loved it - it was made all that more amazing by it being in the first person/Kurama's POV (I need to try first person at one time or another). But your grasp on psychology and the way it winds through the story makes this more than just your everyday fanfiction. Once you do research, it goes to a higher level. I also LOVE the slow explanation of the trio relationship - I tell you - relationships are ALOT of work and the reason that many say communication is key is BECAUSE IT IS. I can only imagine what having 3 people in a relationship is like!

    All around a magnificent chapter - and I am DYING to see what caused Kurama's memory loss and how his memory comes back. And that kinesthetic memory thing - I totally do that - sometimes I don't even realize what I'm doing until I'm halfway through it (but that's only if it's early in the morning or I am preoccupied by something).

    Huzzah for hColleen.
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  • From ANON - steph on December 09, 2005
    love it!! Poor kurama though not being able to remember anything about hiei or yusuke! hopefully he gets his memory back and hes not in pain aymore!! update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - lunar_eclipse24 on December 09, 2005
    I liked the way you wrote the Hiei/Kurama lemon. The way Kurama experienced it and how he subconsciously knew what Hiei was going to do fit with the story much better than if it had been written in third-person. I also found the guided meditation interesting. I liked psychologist!Keiko too. I enjoyed all the little details about Kurama's powers( the plants being noisy, how using his powers "tickles") that no one else has ever written about.

    And about procedural memory, the saying "practice makes perfect" is very true. I am a slightly clumsy person, but I can and have walked from one end of my house to the other in the dark with out bumping into the furniture. It makes alot of sense that Kurama can find his way around the house and remember where the breakfast things are.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 08, 2005
    wow that lemon came out of left field
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 06, 2005
    I just want to let you know that I tried to post a review for you last night, but as I'm sure you can tell, AFF has been having "issues". Thank god I copied and saved the review since it was acting finicky while I was trying to post - here it is:

    I really LOVE this story - it's perfect for our little "fox torture" group we have going over on LiveJournal (you should get an LJ, there's a bunch of us authors over there going on and on and on about our favourite bois.) But anyway - about the story - you just have this easy way about your writing - like it just flows out of you perfectly, I'm so jealous of your amazing prolificness and the quality of your writing. Your stories never fail to amuse, shock, or interest me, and this is high up on all three.

    I really like how it takes place in the future and that it's a part of the Truth Dice or Dare arc, I always wanted to see how their relationship progressed, and I'm curious to see how Kurama gets his memory back and how it affects the relationship.

    You just rule...you rule tons. Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier, but you post faster than I can to it sometimes.

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 06, 2005
    nice
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