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  • From ANON - Victoria Violet on January 05, 2007
    I meant I loved all four stories in the series not story. I need to reread my reviews before posting them. LOL

    Blessed Be

    Victoria Violet
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  • From ANON - Victoria Violet on January 05, 2007
    I loved all four stories to this story. This is the second time I've read through your stories (though only the ones I'm sure are finished as I dislike reading incomlete stories). You're a great writer and you just keep getting better. Question: In one of your stories you mentioned you were Pagan, which branch (religion) do you practice? If you don't want to answer that's fine but I'm curious. I'm Wiccan myself although I've started looking into other Pagan religions (again) as it doesn't quite feel right. I'm starting to wonder if I'll ever find the path that's right for me.::sweatdrop:: Anyways I hope you keep writing as you are a talented writer.

    Blessed Be

    Victoria Violet
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  • From ANON - nytekit on January 22, 2006
    gah! reading one of BlueUtopia's reviews for you i'm just noticing that i didnt' tell you how much i enjoyed the ceremony. it was undeniably beautiful. your original lemons are always amazing, and didn't fail in this story, but this one at the end almost didn't even seem like a lemon. it was as if the sex was just a backdrop to the actual beauty of their love that was represented. you did an amazing job writing the descriptions for that. it was just perfect! wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - nytekit on January 22, 2006
    aww! that was definitely one of your sweetest stories yet. i love how you incorporated Truth, Dice, or Dare and Aftermath into their relationship. it worked very well. i also liked your usage of the voodou and psycological terms. the accented speach for the doctor's of magic was great. it seemed almost exactly perfect, from what i've heard/read of "witch doctor" speech.very nice! also, i notice you seem to enjoy making one of your characters seem almost innocent and bringing them out of that. this is going strictly off this story and the two previously mentioned, but it seems correct. if that works for you, which it most definitely does, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - alex on January 06, 2006
    I'd say it's beautiful, but that's not enough. Exquisite. That would be more apropriate.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 24, 2005
    Wow. Your descriptions of the intense feelings after the ceremony were amazing. I like how Hiei became very vulnerable, (actually, all three were vulnerable, but it's always nice to see Hiei be vulnerable - especially when it's done well and in character.)

    The ceremony itself was cute and very sweet. It's funny how John lost his accent when he performed the ritual (and how he snuck in a bit of magick while he was doing it). Hey, he's got to be a pretty strong and resourceful guy if he's dating Keiko!

    Overall, a great story - and the torture scene with them kissing each other and then killing Seimigaku? Sorry, my brain melted a bit during that part (I guess I'll have to read it again...and again) heh.
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on December 23, 2005
    dude. that was awesome. i loved the ending.. the air was a nice touch, i thought. i dunno. i really liked it. and i have to go finish wrapping presents with my mom.. and ignore my migraine till we're done. then take something for it..and maybe get some sleep. hah. but i liked the way it completed the scene. .. and the whole thing with Seimigaku. i loved how you did that as well. but yeh.. the throbbing in various parts of my skull is starting to.. just.. be overkill. -_- whatever.

    happy holidays. and new years if i don't get online in time to tell you. xD

    Ra
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  • From ANON - kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on December 22, 2005
    That was sooooooo sweet and romantic. You gave me a fucking toothache you brat, lol. But really this chapter was extremely touching. I agree with you that the bondage scene would not have been appropriate for this particular situation. So bravo to you for getting it right once again. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on December 22, 2005
    that was a truly great fic. everything was just beautiful. the characterizations, the details, and the depth of the emotions circling the three. i enjoyed the fact that keiko wasn't some whiney-pain-in-the-arse for once. you did extremely well with her character and that of her little boyfriend of hers. ^__^ i liked the idea of using voudun instead of conventional psychology to help kurama regain his memories. very original. yet another story of yours to be recorded in my not-so-little green book of yaoi. in the last chapter, the promise of bondage was intriguing but i'm glad it didn't occur after their little ceremony. it would have totally ruined the mood. anyway, beautiful work here. i'm always looking foward to seeing more works by you. so, until next time, have a safe and happy holiday and a great new year! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 22, 2005
    wow i like the supernatural air and the marriage.
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  • From mhmartini on December 19, 2005
    Very nice. Two words spring to mind: GO KEIKO! I like that you did not turn her into the useless little whiny baby that so many people try to make her. And her strong friendship with Yusuke but her independence from him is awesome! You write her very well. Actually, you write all of them very well. I like the supportive triangle you have built between Yusuke, Hiei, and Kurama. And I love the suffering Kurama is going through. I am enjoying this story very much, and I look forward to your nex update!
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on December 18, 2005
    okay..okay... i know i loved it.. and the awesome use of your research and known intellict.. as well as all the totally great, quirky twists. i so hope everyone loves the quirky twists as much as i did. ^^ that was way fun. but that's all you're gonna get tonight, sadly.. i know it's only 2:30 am.. xD but my mom stole me for christmas shopping. and we got home at like.. 11:30. hahaha... then i had to watch their movie that my dad rented. again. but yes.. i love your updates. especially again.. with the surprise twist-y-ness of it. ^~ made me smirk, at least.

    i am SO off to bed. night! ^^

    Ra
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on December 18, 2005
    Nonesense? What nonesense? I seen none. I see a well writen, exciting, story that I don't like when it ends! Yuskue's fit drew alot of attention to me. Laughing really loud at 11:30 at night isn't a good thing. Well, in my house it isn't. Anyways, Kurama gets his memory back. Well, atleast, it looks that way... Plot twis so you never know. Well, you being the authore would know, but.... Yeah, I'm done. Just dropping by to say well done!!! Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Kogas Henti Luver on December 17, 2005
    Wow! This WAS fast. But nicely done. I loved Yusuke throwing a fit about Keiko not telling him about her boyfriend. That was really cute. I'm also glad that Botan and Koenma are not going to make trouble for our boys because they're in a relationship. Can't wait to see what's happening to fox boy now. By the way, I really didn't think that pic you sent me of Kurama was gay, but it sure got ya going, LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLO. I sooo funnny ^_^ And you don't have to threaten me anymore, K. geeeesh! Lovin ya all day long. ^_~
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  • From BlueUtopiah on December 17, 2005
    OK, so I was reading sections of this aloud to EMOD and he was incredibly impressed with your research. He told me to tell you that he will actually be working with the Baron when he starts doing more ritual in the spring. And, of course, I was blown away by the fact that you always write fanfiction that no one has ever come close to writing before - I got up and was like OH YEAH ANOTHER UPDATE!!!! You weave the boys' relationship through the story so carefully, it's such a comfort among all the angst.

    And that last paragraph - ouch. Poor Kurama, it seems that playing with memory=pain. But then again - what is Kurama without a little suffering? and Catgirl? Um, yeah, I am not deluded enough to think that the anime characters are my boyfriends...or something like that...and I thought I had problems.

    I got your e-mail, can I tell you how much I love you? cause I do. and I have a bunch of stuff I can burn and send to you too. Give me a day or so and I'll have all the information in order.
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