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Reviews for Demon’s Destiny

By : caelestis
  • From ANON - atritt on May 29, 2006
    i liked it alot, but its three in the morning...what the hell is a cabbit???? i probably know, but like i said, its 3 am...oh well, great story mate!
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  • From ANON - YaoiOtaku on January 13, 2006
    Think you should do a sequal! Let us know how Yusuke and Kazuma are doing.
    Please????
    ^_______^
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  • From bitBlackmage on December 22, 2005
    Couldn't Keiko and Yuske just drift apart? It's cliché for A to realize that he/she wants B after C does something unforgivable. Don't get me wrong, I love Yusuke and Kazuma stuff— it's just that there's a disturbing trend to turn anime females in mostrous evil bitches.
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on December 22, 2005
    I know I wrote a review for this story....cause I read it about four or fives times already and thought I left a review......I'm very stupid ^_^; I absolutly LOVED this fic. It is my favorite couple, Kuwa/Yusuke, though I'm more into Kuwa being uke, but still ^_^. I loved it! Like I said, I read this about four or five times already, and can read it again! ^_^. I just love this story and would love for you to make a sequeal. There is just sooooo much you can do with this now! Like you could have any of Yusuke's enemies come after the two of them, or show how Kurama and Hiei and everyone else's reaction to these two's new relationship is. And you could totally do something with Keiko trying to get Yusuke back and find out that he's gay and HER reaction to that.....you just made such a wonderful story that you are open to more then one idea for it! You could continue this in many different ways shapes and forms that will get anyone and everyone's attention, even if they don't like this couple or Kuwa....cause everyone loves Yusuke and not too many like Kuwa ^_^; so I just loved this and you did an excellent job atthis pairing...I apologize for not reviewing the first time I read this, but like I said, I was stupid and thought I already did ^_^; I really do apologize for that....Please make a sequeal, so I can read that a zillion times like I will with this one ^_^. WE need more of this couple made because it is the most obvious couple in the show and is never exploited....^_^. Thank you for making it and I really hope you make another one!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - MR. BOO on December 22, 2005
    I LIKED THIS FIC PLEASE WRITE THE SEQUEL
    I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT
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  • From VixenzxMasqueradex on December 21, 2005
    DRACO-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how comes you never told me you posted your ficies here????? i'll tell you what i told you the first time i ever read this fic! although Yusuke was a bit OOC i adore the story line! Keiko must die *grab your sporks and pitchforks there an ogre on the loose* cant wait to see more fics out of you babycakes!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on December 21, 2005
    Nice piece of work. I really enjoyed it but then i'm not a big Keiko fan. I know Kuwabara's not everyone's favorite but he's such a good man he deserves to be happy just like his hunky partner.
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  • From ichigokun on December 21, 2005
    Pros: Your style of writing is pretty good. I liked the non-lemon scenes a LOT.

    Cons: The fangirl Japanese (a lot of which wasn't even correct, BTW) distracted me from the story. For some reason I can't shake the fact that you had Keiko rather OOC, and somehow made it her fault that Yűsuke and Kuwa got together. Also, the sex scene was very OOC to me- it seemed like my fave tough-ass punks had been made into little girls.

    Keep it up! I hope that you keep writing and keep perfecting your craft. You're off to a good start.
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