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By : chilli
  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on January 03, 2006
    I thought that this was a wonderfully sweet and touching fic. You're a wonderful writer and have beautiful flare with words and emotions. I thoroughly enjoyed myself. Thank you. I only have two suggestions though. Only because you asked ^_^ First, you should really go back to the first chapter and separate your paragraphs. It's really hard to read with the text all smashed together like that. And more importantly, you may scare off potential readers who don't want to strain their eyes. This is such a wonderful story that I would hate to see you loose readers because of somthing so silly and easily remedied. The second, and this is just my own perverted preference. In the first chapter, the lime/lemon was so damn hot and steamy I actually had to take a breath and walk away for a moment ^_^ It was that good! However, once they finally got together in the second chapter, you rushed through the lemon, which was a bit disappointing. I was surprised that you rushed through it considering what a wonderful job you did detailing their first grinding encounter. I was really expecting to see a really long and detailed lemon of them going all the way. But, it's your fic and it still reads wonderfully. But you did ask for suggestions that would make it better. So I decided to stick my two cents in, sorry. Thank you so much for such a great story. Their aren't that many Yus/Kur fics that our worth reading and you've just added to the few that are.!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on January 03, 2006
    Very good story. I loved how patiently Kurama wooed Yusuke.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 02, 2006
    that was absolutely beautiful work. the first chapter needs to be spaced out so that people can have an easier read and i got confused everytime the little brother was called Shuichi, too. (was that even his name?) but besides that it was a great story. i loved the ending. everything was just about perfect in this fic. i really like these two together and you've really brought the yusuke and kurama pairing to life here. keep up the great work and i look foward to seeing more of this pairing by you.^__^
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