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Reviews for Lessons

By : hColleen

From ANON - kit-kit on January 08, 2006
wow those lemons were hot.
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From ANON - KyoHana on January 07, 2006
The first thing I want to do is wish you the happiest of Birthdays!! The second is to thank you SO much for the wonderful birthday present you so selflessly gave to us!

And finally, I'm in need of a VERY cold shower right now!! The fantasies you wrote for Kurama, as well as the pleasure he gave to himself on both occasions (well, the vines actually gave him pleasure the second time around) had to have been two of the most beautifully erotic scenes I've ever read. They rival Blue Utopiah's in her wonderful 'Island' fic and you should be justifiably proud of what you've written here.

I shall now anxiously await the rest of my 'Lessons'!
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From ANON - comicfancat on January 07, 2006
wow,what a way to find a lover and what a way to be found.Very nice and very good,can't wait for the update
and
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
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From ANON - Lady Aqualyne on January 06, 2006
YAY! Wow what a lovely present... and something you wrote on your birthday! I loved it. I really did, and talk about dedication to my writers who I faithfully read, I had to deal with... ::Shudders:: Dial Up. So I am sitting here writing you a review because I love your writings and I was included in this, which just touched me and made me get misty eyed. As always your story captured and held me... Kuro and Kurama... always hot... and the use of the plants... ::Grins:: I am such a KuramaXPlant pairing whore. Hehehehehehehe. As always thank you so much for allowing me to be a part of your beautiful writing. I hope to have another chapter of my own work ready by the time I get home... we'll see. If not planned anyway. Thanks so much again, and as always... breathtaking truly breathtaking... but what I loved the most about it was that it all seemed to be lessons that needed to be learned indeed. I also like how the beginning was started... the idea of Kurama in that bar in a bad mood and then Kuro all claiming him made me die of laughter.
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From ANON - vampslyr on January 06, 2006
[GLOMP] Hey! Happy Birthday Colleen! Thank you for the present and for thinking of us :-D. Wow, that was riveting. That last bit of lemon with the plant was so hot! I love how you�re drawing out their characters and showing their vulnerability. Kuronue taking the lead so mater-of-factly is the perfect way to draw our Kurama�s sub tendencies. It�s the way that the Dom moves and be�s the Dom that makes him one. Mmm, this story just gives me such a warm and fuzzy feeling all over. [Hug]
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From kogaluver on January 06, 2006
WooHoo!!!!! I love this. I'm just pissed off that I wasn't the first to review. I didn't even look into this subcategory until today. Damn!!!! I love Kur/Youko fics. And the way you portray them is priceless. The best part about this pairing is when Youko takes a more, maybe not submissive role, but defensive role. Keeping the great Youko Kurama guessing and off guard is rare. I love Kuronue in charge and knowing all the answers. He's so cool. They truly make a wonderful pair.

You brought such humor and wittiness to the dialogue that I enjoyed reading every line. I felt so gripped to Kurama's dilemma of trying to figure out his own mind. You've done a magnificant job here. But then you're an exceptionally brilliant writer. So creative and fresh. It's always a joy to read one off your stories and something I constantly look forward to. I wish I could crank out such great fics as often as you do. I can't wait for the next chapter, even though I already know what happens. I love beta work, ^_^. But its also nice just reading without looking for errors. I'll talk to you later.
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From ANON - alex on January 06, 2006
Hi there! I'm no faithful reviewer, as you can see. But one thing's for shure: i lloved this fic, i can't wait to read more of your fics and i was happy to see you have many fics. Um, sorry if this review sounds weird( as i know it does), but i get distracted easily... Your insight on youko's feelings and on his true self are amazing, and i just love the way you pictured Kuronue(i finally fund a fic where i like this pairing!!!). I'll do my best to write a more choerent review next time, i promise ;).
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From ANON - Eye of Ra on January 06, 2006
hah! i finally got online! and you posted something! you have no idea of the fangirl-ness that that made me babble on like! i swear! .. well .. perhaps YOU do... but still. LoL. you get the idea. happy birthday! what a *marvelous* birthday present you have for us! ..dear me that was.... beyond sexy. youkai and i came up with a new word: sexilicious. i do believe your vine-y-ness totally summed it up it a word... or wet Youko in a bath.. with a beautifully naked Kuronue standing in front of him... i do have to hand it to you.... your lessons...are something to be adored. ^^ and if i wasn't still working on CHRISTMAS.... ^^;;; i'd try to get something together. but i'm still on christmas. hahaha. well.. like i said. you had me at Youko Kurama.. and you had me melting in my chair when you started describing Kuronue. i squeaked at my friend and went on a big tirad about Youko.... then i saw Kuro.. and went on a longer one about him...... hahaha.. go figure. i really do love you for this. and i hope you realise this will probably end up either under or on top of "Mistakes" on my RR list. *stares at you...trying not to melt at remembrance of said fic* ...dear god i'm babbling again, aren't i? *snorts*

i'll leave you with that. you know i love it. you know i love you.

Ra
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From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on January 06, 2006
Interesting story. I like it especiall the end. Can't wait for the update. Oh yeah, I love the 'review whore' comment. That's me too. Maybe some day I'll post my fics here and not just on ff.net.
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From ANON - Suryallee on January 05, 2006
Yes, yes, yes...Me again^^;
Forgot to wish you Happy Birthday^^
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From ANON - Suryallee on January 05, 2006
Hey there^^
Thank you! I like this story very much, I wnat my own Kuro!!!
sadly that is impossible, so I will have to wait until lucky Yoko gets him^_^
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From ANON - kit-kit on January 05, 2006
no don't wait until sunday to post again i don't think i can wait that long to read it.
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From ANON - Ryukotsusei on January 05, 2006
Oh wow. Just WOW! I love Kuronue's voyueristic tendencies lol I think I'd be speechless if I had been watched like that. This is awesome, I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work. Happy birthday!
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 05, 2006
no! someone beat me! meh. well at least i'm second!

wow. you are the greatest. i feel so loved! this fic is totally making up for the seroiusly shitty week i've been having so far. (it's the beginning of the year and Rx insurance plans have changed. you have no idea how many s.o.b's i've to deal with in person and over the phones. i got hung up on like ten times yesterday alone.*shakes head*) anyway, this is really good. i dont recall ever reading a fic where yoko was so un-nerved due to a potential romp or anybody in general. i love the pace and the way kuronue states what he needs of yoko then leaves so that yoko can mentally prepare and didn't just dive straight into the smut. but man, that last lesson was a doozy! you should see the looks i'm giving the plants in my room. so of couse i look foward towards reading the rest on sunday. so happy early birthday! may have many more and keep up the great work!

~Devious Lil Devil
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From BlueUtopiah on January 05, 2006
Ha HA! I'm the first one!

Dear...GOD. That last scene with the plants...I blame you fully for the mess my brain left on the keyboard. I thought I had some good plant ideas, but that blew me away! Can I get a picture of that? (Oh yeah, and I'll need a pic of a naked Kuronue covering himself with his wings as well).

There were so many good lines, one of my favourites was "He wanted to enjoy drunkenness, not getting there." I feel that way alot. Crap - I really should write down the good stuff as I read, so I can let you know exactly what I liked, but I got so caught up in the story, I forgot. I need to go read it again.

This ran at just the right pace too, and - to me at least - it has this romantic edge that you don't see alot on aff.net. I like how Kurama stated that he was "waiting" for Kuronue and the whole slow act of appearing, being enigmatic, and then disappearing that Kuronue is doing - to me that's so very romantic. It's not just: Kuro shows up/lemon/lemon/lemon/end of story.

And the opening syllabus chapter was awesomely different and creative, but as I've said before - you take chances with your writing and it awlays turns out wonderfully.
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